FF:Milan/part34(Last part!)-pg143 - Page 110

Originally posted by: d-luna88

Your FF was the first I ever read on IF and I really loved it!!

You had me immediatelly intrigued with Ahem's inner voice. The sarcasm was really great. The twist and turns along the way. Ahem nearly got her and than he was so far from getting her the next moment really great. Rashi was just perfect especially her interaction with ahem was hilarious. You made me really feel for the charakters and their emotions. You are a really talented and amazing writer!! 👏

Thanks so much for writting Milan!!! 😃

By the way does the word "Milan" have any special meaning?

Will comment when finished reading

it's absolute awesomeness

lekha

Originally posted by: day2008

wonderful ff.. just started eading...so far at 12th part... the story is really fantanstic :) keep it up

thanks a lot dear.glad u enjoyed it

Originally posted by: magi11

hey shaina... loved the ending ...it was PERFECT(in ahem style😉)...

awww loved the kids they r just adorable n naughty too😉...

sad that your ff has come to an end😔... but you have come back with a bang with your next ff ...all d best for it...

thanks maggi sorry for the delayed reply. ha ha so u love the kids. i love them too

as u see i already started a big bang theory😆

Originally posted by: d-luna88

Your FF was the first I ever read on IF and I really loved it!!

You had me immediatelly intrigued with Ahem's inner voice. The sarcasm was really great. The twist and turns along the way. Ahem nearly got her and than he was so far from getting her the next moment really great. Rashi was just perfect especially her interaction with ahem was hilarious. You made me really feel for the charakters and their emotions. You are a really talented and amazing writer!! 👏

Thanks so much for writting Milan!!! 😃

By the way does the word "Milan" have any special meaning?

wow..so this is ur first ff, i am saved then😆

thanks for the overall revision of the story kiristin...

as u can see, and have already know...ahem have to explain himself and others too

that why he need gopi just keeping the fact that she is his wife, why he deserves her.

and coming to rashi, all know she is a disturbed character by her mother and once

if she sees a true nature and well wisher for her life, she is fast to undrestand the importance

of persons in her life anad also a lot of way to repent for her for her past misdeeds.

and comng to rahem...well thats my speciality of course.

thanks for the huge compliments

and yes milan means union...the union of all the couples is the story

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Will comment when finished reading

it's absolute awesomeness

lekha

thanks lekha...hope u wil enjoy it

Originally posted by: famzii05

i loved your FF,, i read it while i wasnt a member..it was one of the first ones i read...i absolutely love it!! and i loved the holidays,, how the story progressed...the vocab was excellent and the sory structure with alll the twists and turns was great...and ahem and rashis relationship was amazing aswell... thankyou for writing such a lovely story!! it was a pleasure to read! ur a great writer...👏 hats of to you!!

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

ha ha thanks..so its ur first one too,saved by that.

thanks for remanding the plot..it feels different when hearing from others.

and coming to rahem..well all know its my speciality my special charm for all my ffs.

the rahem made the ff a hit, so its very special for me.

i am glad u enjoyed it.. the actual credit goes to all who supported me, and shared their suggestions with me to make the story better.

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

ive jst read ur update

go two more updates to read

but im too tired to stay awake

this story has made me cry nd made me laugh so much

i cant thank u enough for writing a wonderfull ff

ha ha thanks..take some rest and read dear, the ff wont run away anywhere😉

and i am really glad to put ur such effort to read . thanks a lot.

the last but one update is fab, my personal fav..enjoy reading it

Originally posted by: Rafaal2

Awesome writing by you 👏

thanks rafaal