FF:Milan/part34(Last part!)-pg143 - Page 109

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

thanks bloem and keep me supporting me from the start.

Originally posted by: cute7

This update make me cry, happy and laugh. I like it so much. I am very sad that you end Milan. I hope you will write the update in the future. Thank you so much. 👏

hi dear.. i am glad u liked it ..dont wory u have other rocking ff in the ff and i wil come up with another one too.

thanks for the support cute7

Originally posted by: 143badra

😉😉itz the last part ... i am feeling a bit sad😭 .. but hope the last pt is a fab piece .. nt hope i know it is a fab piece ... after all Milan is a master piece .. fyi u have no right to deny this ... so dont argue hun ..

i wont argue now...never

with a heavy heart i am starting to read the last part .. well see how magnificent it is .. btw i have no doubts tht it would be mind-blowing .. 😉

so here goes nothing ...😆

lets hope u wont be downfallen😆

pt 34

wow dr as much as i hate to see urmila in any tiny tiny pt of an update .. her being in at the beginning didnt feel bad at all .. i think the reason is the scene following tht ... wow loved the part Aham singing to her .. wow Aham and Lullaby ... i was totally taken by it .. Aham and lullaby seems weird .. but have to admit it does have a ring to it ..

he he see i already started with a shock..afterall i am shock specialist.

and coming to ahem...well what can i say..we saw the possessive side, romantic side and now it comes to his concern side.

they say that hubby becomes everything when a wife needs one, so now instead of being demanding he have becoeme responsible towards his wife..afterall it is this time he have to take care of her right.

I just cannot stop imaging the scene .. Gopi cuddling with Aham sining or humming a lullaby .. its simply so touching and romantic ...😳😉

agreed totallly...if i would be a director..i would picture a song too with cool blowing winds, ahem in slight tears, gopi in sleep..😍

the part gopi looking and the pic .. Aham showing up her hiding the tears was also a fab scene .. it truly brought out gopi's feeling .. the fact tht how much love they try to give her love u cannt replace the love tht she would have felt from her own parent .. which means Aham has to try hard😉 ... lullaby was a great start 😉😆

yeah i oftten see in sns that she always hides the pic if someone comes, maybe she dont want to lett others know that she is feeling lonely for her parents and they might feel bad.

here she alredy knows that ahem hates to know that she is feeling lonely so its better to hide rather than to cry.

and the way ahem understands her says that thought stubbborn or demanding, when time comes, hubby dearest is the real hand to lean on

every single time i read such as fab scene i always imagine .. how the hell do u do it😉

cute scene Gopi cuddling like a baby .. one day hope we can witness this whole scene ...

oh so Aham is on his way to accomplish a mission .. well .. will see wht his mission is .. or rather wht u are trying to accomplish dr 😉

well thanks to all ur support, i get such brain waves suddenly😆

i think we can witness now..in this current track of gopi hospatalized. it would be a cherry on top

well the mission u wil soon to see

love u Rashi ... love the way she handled urmila ... urmila toh sudarne wali hun nahii ...

wht the ... i am schocked u gave me a real fright dr .. u better thanx god tht i didnt get a heart attack after reading Gopi fell from the stairs .. oh the thoughts tht went through my mind .. before reading futher my mind started wondering here and there ... coming to itz on conclusion and sorry to say i have no control over wht i think 😉 ... wht i thought was tht Urmila was the one sure to be responsible ... so i felt like pushing urmila in front of a moving vehicle or rather pushing her from a cliff ... but i new u will nt let anything happen to her ... so tht was the only relief ...

agreed urmi is the one who wil never ever ever be posititve.

well i wont blame u, when something happens, we expect the worst scenario first..dont know why and by the way urmi is the one...so dont worry and blame her to the heart content..

and i wil join u in pusning her so let me know

no wonder Aham blew up like a volcano ... i am impressed he didnt end up killing someone ...

what to do..urmi was not on sight, otherwise he would have done it already and then talk😉

"slipped from the starirs on the first landing and about to hit the floor when she found herself in strong arms, no need to say whose." -- no need hun .. who else Aham Modi .. hubbi dearest ...

of course..who else

Aham bringing the house down .. with his voice ... wht a scene dr ... Aham exploding and poor fellows are so helpless ...

i really want that scene..really really really...

oh so it was nt an accident after all ... i wasnt wrong letting myself be carried aways at the beginning ...

told u so

OIL on the stairs ... nt a bad idea to get someone hurt ... After l hour of blasting he calmed .. tht is a big achievement for Aham Modi .. nt bad l hour ... all the people might have been so pale .. would have looked like ghosts ...

what to do, he wanted to shout more,..but thought that if all the update consits of his shouting then people wil shout at me, so he backed off😆

and coming to the pale ghosts i mean the modis well u can imagine their standard shocked expression..this time..a little more volume and zoomng

wow wht a magnificient show from Aham .. better than any Maha episodes tht i have witnessed ... simply mind-blowing ...

agreed, the day he blasts everyone for gopi, wil be the day for the forum members to die

"U, MRS. GOPI AHEM MODI..COME HERE!" - - wht impact he has on everyone specially Gopi ... loved the whole fisco ... the way he make sure Gopi satys away from Urmila .. he was right .. they say that thedi ungilise gee nikalta nahi toh ungli theda karna padta hai .. by hook or crook had to keep her safe from urmi and also from herself .. being so bind in believing urmi blinding ... the impact of Aham's word on gopi like a charm .. how could it nt after all her obeying him or nt .. depended on Ahamji life ... he made sure tht she hadnt a choice but to obey ... magnificent dr ...

at first i was just thinking to threaten gopi, like if u wont listen then i wil take u away from this house forver, but it wont look practical for the characer of ahem modi to say those words

so instead i changed the line and made the vow on himself and as u said..gopi darling dint had no choice at all.

the icing on the cake was Aham telling his mum .. or rather ordering her tht Gopi's safety was more imp than anything else ... it was even better when Koki starts to call gopi .. "mere ahem ki bahu" .. kash some day this truly happen in the real serial .. wow tht would be so mean so so much ...

yeah it was icing on cake. i got tired of kokis stupid behaviour..alwasy dissaper at the right time.so my blasting for her, from momas boy.

well the mere ahem ki bahu dialague is for ahem himself, afterall he is so possessive

Oh so Aham did make up for the rash behavior .. letz see how he accomplishes tht or rather u deal with this 😉

both are the same agreed.

wow jijar toh bohot romantic nikala .. oops sorry Shaina u are so romantic ... and jijar said he would be a great dad for their children .. so i guess he is planning to have more kids even before this one is out .. or are they going to have twins .. anyways tht was a sweet scene ... wonder if jijar is this sweet .. wht Aham would do .. as he has to make up for the rash behavior along with the anniversary surprise .. so Aham has to do better than jijar .. and score higher than him ..

actually i first planned this for gohem but agan the character pbm got in its way. why ahem modi got so much perfect yaaar.he is stealing my scenes

but later thought that until now i dint justify raji so this would be the best scene for them and jigar is the romantic type and rashi is the girl who loves expressing love.

its a romantic plus senti scene..jigar choclate boy plus responsilbe his character.

and comgi to ahem..i think jigar wil bang the lead..as i said it was supposed to be a gohem scene so not other better scene can be given to gohem.

i was so into the jijar rashi scene .. i read the next part at a stress and i just had to go go back and re-read the sentence as wht i read sounded so out of line ... wht i should have read was "Gopi opened her eyes lazily and saw ahem was standing beside her." .. but wht i truly read was without registering my mind on the word Gopi opened her eyes ... so wht i though was Rashi and jijar was kissing and when rashi opened her eyes Aham was standing beside her ... i was so taken back 😆 ... first thought wht went in my head was wht the hell Aham is doing in their bed room and who was dumb enough nt to clse the door ... thanx god i read it wrong .. but i was laughing over my own thoughts ...

even i am..i went imaging the scenario too😆

wow Gopi Aham scene was even betteer than Rashi and jijar's one .. thanx god u remember to remember Gopi forgot the anniversary ... tht was like the whole universe was with Aham on this memorable day ... and finally she understands ... they do talk a lot from their eyes .. after all they say silent talk thousand words ... tht pic would have been one hell of a pic .. can i have one for myself 😉 .. maybe someday we will see tht too on screen ...

i was tired of gopis perfect nature..everything on time, no mistake..etc boring..

so ahem had to get his chance and can happily tease her in his lifetime that he forgot his aniversary. and that too first one...

the pic is a wonderful one agreed...maybe u can see it in sns sometimes.

Kinjal and dawal are happy .. it was nice to bring them into the scene too ...

had to show them.and also its a req too, afterall its milan ending...no loopholes right

wow Aham is so sweet and the way u showed how much Gopi reacts around individals was even better ...

well it shows gopi character around. though how much chance is given she never cross her limits...a reserved character

god dr ... wht a scene .. rashi and jijar scenes have started to over stand tht of Gopi and Aham's ... of course itz all in the hands of our great writers .. oops i think i forgot her name ... thanx god i remember tht she is a girl ... (jpyl hun) ... u know when ever rose petals come into mind i go back to ipkknd ei where kushi was daydreaming .. god .. wht an epi .. it was so funny .. see wht i am talking about in the wrong forum tht also under the wrong ff ... couldnt help myself ... anyways back to ff from my imagination .. btw i have control over my mind .. i think u know this by now ...

wow wht a proposal by jijar ... well done 👏 .. he scores high ..

oh u remebered ipkknd, i rememberd mjht..my fav proposing scene..and the scene suits raji a lot. i cant picture such scene for gohem as gopi is already advanced preggy than rashi, but rashi still at the begginng...

and we see awlays rashi day dreaming as princess...so the best anniversary gift she could have.

wow .. Gopi said i love u mr.Aham Modi ... tht was so sweet dr .. never thought tht gopi could surprise me further ... but anyways u do surprise me ...

well this was the least i can do..i know after raji scene all the gohem lovers might be cursing me to give them such a fab scene..so a little suprise for u guys.

Wow Aham has been mischievous ... i never thought of tht aspect .. i thought he was demanding ... it was fun when others pull Aham's leg .. the fact tht gopi and rashi have a slight smile in their face is nice .. they know tht Aham is nt truly angry ita just tht he is embarrassed ... taking Gopi out for ice-cream .. wow wht a way to save himself .. chocolate reminds me of their honeymoon .. wht a scene it was 😳..

well the scene was included for my sweetheart shajnali..who got the root word koki mummy..

so i have to insert it somehow and the best of all tis they tease ahem infront of gopi..this would be the embrassing momment for ahem modi in his whole life..as he always wants himself perfect infront of his innocnet wife.

and coming to rashi and gopi..wwe all know rashi very well. and gopi also got her chance to enjoy freely without getting a glare from ahem.

hmm i think the choclate made a impression on u

wow Aham and Anita meets again and the 4 hits it off .. tht encounter of their past with the present is very thoughtful and the fact tht they realized wht they had was never love and wht they have with their respected partners is wht true love is ... and how happy they are with their lives ... and Aham do smile ... all thanx to Gopiji ... he isnt bad at all when he is smiling ... 😉 Glad tht they both found their soul mates and have no regrets on the turn of events ...

it was a req from monyaka..that she want anitha back for the final conclusion of their relation. so i changed it in my view and made it a happy endiong for all the persons so that no one should feel sorry for anitha as she is well settled too and can get some fun out of it

i wanted to show how ahem got changed in love and anitha is the best person to notify the change as she was close to him too

wow wht a conversation btwn the couples ... Aham and Anita seems to have a fab time .. and they both know so much of each other .. ..lucky for them their partners know about them ... other wise serious one could be exposed .. and definitely they should have wonderful past memories of school days and they are bound to be in trouble ...

of course..we often see two persons of same past and childhood get easily mixed out

same to ahem and anitha..it shows how they left the past out and accepted their lives adn so comfortable with each other..this shows their patners that how happy they are with them

Rashi always wanted to act and prgnancy seems to be the best excuse and tht is cute dr ...

of course..lazy persons never change ask me😉

Gopi calling Aham -- "akdooo ahemji" -- i am stilling laughing over this -- god could imagine Aham having his mouth open and in sock and the fact tht he doesnt want specially rashi to know is nice .. tht shows Rashi is one of the few people who dare to make fun of him and if Rashi get to know their will be no end to it .. and on top of everything Rashi is pregnant and these day she is more out of control than ever ... it was nice tht both jiju and sali has turned to be best friends .. ok they might kill each other if left alone .. but tht would also be in good sport ..😉

ha ha even i dint dared to put it but dont know why..i just dared it..actually i thought the whole scenario to be sentimental but it became totaly mental when i started to type and out of laziness i dint went to change it back so made it a comdey

u r right, ahem reaction is worth a watch..and that too by gopi..he would have never dreamed in life. and the way he immediately thought about rashi proves that he is more worried about his reputation in the house and in the family.

already a lot of damage is done by her and his mom..so he is not taking any risks further and also i want ahem modi to do a thing for me since the ff starts so this is my best scne and chance.

wow .. it was so sweet of Anita to put aham modi in trouble ...

who else can..anitha and rashi..the two devils

wow dr .. Aham modi cooking .. i almost chocked on the words their .. it was hilarious .. i annot stop lanughing .. fab conversation .. love the way jijar was made to cook along with Aham .. oh so gopi dearest knows how to use the weapons of blackmail .. never thought tht i would see the day ... i was having my fingers crossed tht Gopi would blurt out Aham's new found nickname ... i was feeling sorry for the guy .. Rashi would have taken fullest use of it ... but in a slight corner of my heart i wished Gopi to tell it .. inorder to witness a fab session btwn sali and jiju .. tht rocks .. Mr.Perfect burning the food ... i wish i wish to see this in the real serial .. atleast some dreaming of such a scene ... the best one ever ... i still cannt stop my self from imagining Gopi and Rashi sitting at the table ordering Aham and Jijar .. both guys wearing aprons and having sppons in their hands and sweeting like pig and the tension on their face and smiles on the pregnant girls ... tht would be one hell of a scene ...😉

he he this was the thing i was dreaming. he awlays constantly demands for eatables so one day i wnat to see ahem in kitchen cooking, we cant see in sns so i got my chance here.

and if ahem cooks jigar had no option left infront of his wife.

and he he i dont know about gopi..but i definelty know how to use weapons of blackmail

now u are saying..yeah i too agreed that it would made a great scene..but dont worry i wil somehow insert it in the coming ffs

and the advantage rashi would take..sure no one can..

mr.perfect cant be always mr.perfect..u see..some things he wil lack and all men lack at cooking for sure.

i would love that scene too a lottt

"oy mummji ki ladli." - - tht was a nice way to put it ... wow tht was so childish but fab at the sometime ...

afterall jigar is not such a innocent one too

wow Aham is such a lovely hubby ... hope someday my hubby get me teddys .. i love teddys a lot ... 1st of all have to find a bf ...

same here, and same wishing and same motive too😆

wow wonderful dr ... Aham jealous of a teedy .. tht was bound to happen as Gopi is so childish and thus it isnt hard to imagine her witj hugging a teddy ... he removed the teedy from her arms and hope he did replace the teddy by himself .. i dont think he could want to disappoint gopi by making her sleep alone 😉...

of course it often happens in couple. the hubhy brings a gift, wife is obbessed about the gift leaving huby alone and what else he could do.

ahem must be banging his head for bringing that cursed teddy bear. and even cant shout at gopi now bechara

nice jijar and rashi so emotional yaar ... fab thanks

smart Aham ... nice seen .. Gopi is so childish and open .. it was good see tht sweet side of her and how Aham is loving and caring for her ..

bechari thought everyone knows about ahem and his wicked ideas gopi always thinks of him as an angel..a vast advantage to modi

ice cream and chocolate .. these ladies are driving them in sane ... poor fellows ... pregnant women .. they say tht u cannt understand women and pregnant women are even more hard to understand and also more emotional ... no wonder these too are so emotional and demanding ... totally agreed neither can they obey nor can they fight..what to do

""Here eat choclate ki boothni..eat everything and if still hungry eat me also"" - - wow choclate ki boothni .. how did u come up with this ... magnificent name ... god dr .. door Aham dikar ... the torture tht he is going through .. wow Gopi is more fun than i ever thought ... she doesn't want to eat Aham as there will be no one to bring chocolate .. nice and it even is better when she wants swiss chocolate .. she is demanding without being demanding ... nice ...

well it was the brain wave..though how much he controls ahem modi snaps at time..and gopi well she became bold enough now and a preggy wife is so unexpected..

and i want to torture modi more..so swiss choclate is the best one

the best part is both brothers are going through the same torture at once .. running here and there during night just to please their wife .. i hope Aham never imagine himself doing all this...😉

never in his life..he thought it would be a piece of cake but poor fellow..dint know that innocnet wife can turn out dangerous too

god after all the trouble tht Aham went through and her sleeping .. no wonder he cried .. may be it was nt tht gopi didnt want the chocolate anymore .. it must have been for the fact .. wht a pathetic condition he is in ... what to do poor fellow..already he is so in love with his sleep, and now because of her.he left his comfort bed and roaming around. and she is sleeping happily of course he wil cry.

Jijar's condition seems to be far worse than Aham's .. after all itz rashi he is dealing with ... ice cream .. popcorn .. pizza .. no wonder he faints bandoka hal bohothi bura hai ... poor chaps ... of course..its rashi we are talking about ...definelty his condition wil be worst.

mind-blowing dr ... Rashi calling urmi .. "mrs.urmila shaw" .. it is memorable ... i'll make sure to hold this close to my heart when ever i see urmi in the serial i could imagine tht one day Rashi would treat her like this ... i too hope so dear..i too hope so

ultimately urmi is turning good ... so wht else to say ... ant bhala to sab bhala hai ... tht ends with a good note i dint want to turn urmi good but what to do my darling monyaka wanted it

lovely name hun ... thanks to monyaka..othewise i dint have such a brain

wow jijar's daughter is wonderful ... it was nice tht she went after Rashi ... now Rashi can witness wht type of brat she herself is ... the statements used to decide her is fab ... nice daughter ... like mum like daughter ... nice relationship btwn dad and daughter .. it is fab hun .. for a change jijar have a partner 😉... btw it was no wonder tht rashi was tht uncontrollable during her pregnancy period ... after all it was a mimi version of her inside and the attitude should be of double dosage ... for all the torture tht jijar ent through for 9 months .. rashi will have to relive her life .. tht is nice ... 😆

thanks i know people would love a mini rashi for herself..now she wil get the real torture of life and a real peace for jigar.

we see that daddies like girls a lot..so jigar is naturally affectionate to her, and rashi wil be the green eye for her daughter, she want the attention to herself too like the daugther..so tough competetion..

"rothudu kahika!" - - oh i see tht the kid is worse than the teddy fiasco ... wow the son is the competitor of Aham ... nice .. it seems like a dream come true ... father and son fighting to get gopi dearest attention ... love it ...what can u expect from ahem..he is already so possessive adn when he sees that a small baby is snatching his spotlight though he is his son..he would be the green eye naturaaly

cannt blame the kid as Aham himself wanted to keep his mum to himself when he was young .. so the only solution 😉 .. but for tht they have to wait for at least another 20yrs .. until then good luck to Aham .. nice one dr ... of course this was the point i wanted to show..

if the boy went after ahem so its natureal that he sided gopi and want to keep her for himself toothe way ahem did..so tough competion for him

arre wa the lappi become handy for something 😉.. nice .. btw tht reminds me of su's OS ...yup agreed she gave me the idea

wow wht a son Aham and Gopi .. got .. lovly ...dr ... wht i see is he is a charming walking talking disature ready to explode if give the chance ... the interaction btwn the couple was fab ...ha ha of course..features of gohem and nature of ahem..a living havoc on earth who we cant hate and control

god i am in love with these kids .. they are giving urmi a royal treatment ... love it ... wnht a treatment yaar ... and it was fun tht sali and jiju still are having similar thoughts and are in control .. up to some extend 😉of course though being parents..still nature is the same right

"i wil make him exactly like me" ahem said proudly and except gopi ... no one smiled. "hey krishna bhagwan..cant i rest in peace" kokila thought. - - another Aham .. nt bad i guess .. the imagination is to urself another ahem and rashi in mm and already friends..what else can u expect than a mahabharat in mm.

well will the circle repeat ... ???????? no idea ... have to think a bit ... i think it will

"Thus a single mistake of rashi and the negligence of koki and hetal changed the 4 lives of the modi children forever...happy" - - nice way to end it ..thanks

overall comment - -

The whole ff was extra ordinary and i had lot of fun reading it .. thanx for giving us the opportunity to tap into ur imagination ... though i have said this many a time .. it still doesnt seems to be enough .. u are a fab writer and pls do continue writing .. i am addicted to reading ffs .. so u better right another one and pls do pm me .. nt do dear u better pm me ... i am demanding na .. hope u dont mind hun😉...dint mind at all and thaks for the lovely compliments. and as u know by now i started it

loved the whole thing from the beginning to the end ...

thanx for the wonderful journey hun ... looking forward for ur next ff

will keep in touch ...sure will

Farewell to milan and hope to welcome u with another amazing ff .. u better impress me dr 😉in ur next ff .. this ff was outstanding so u have to break ur own record ... dont worry hun tht will be difficult but i have full faith in u ... and no doubt it would be an outstanding one ... so until the next ff 😉

well i have to see and i think i already broke the record😉

take ur own sweet time to comment ... no one is forcing u btw ... and another thing sorry .. this too exceeded my normal limit and do seems like a ff rather than a comment ... couldn't help myself .. and as it is the last part .. i think u dont mind na ... no pbm at all and finally i commented.

(btw hun sorry for bugging u all the time ... no hard feeling right .. btw even if i am a pain i will nt stop bugging u 😉)u know my answer.

I love ur coooment mano..its superb..i really love it.

hence i dont want to just spoil ur attempt with a single tanks.

i wil take my own time to comment back so wait for my comment as i did for urs.

until then

Originally posted by: tina_1234

thnx for d explation dear...congo for 150 pages

tanks a lot tina..😃

Originally posted by: tina_1234

hey dear..it would b gr8 if u write another fic on gohem...u r a fab writer

ha ha tnaks a lot darling.

yup i wil write one more.

i wil update tomorrow.

Originally posted by: QueenRani2

What a FF !!!

Great job, characters are so real !

I really enjoy readint it and i'm gonna read Taqdeer. You have such a talent. Hats of.

Wish you start a new ff soon.

tanks queen rani 2

do read taqdeer..its really lovely..both by yukji.

tanks a lot

yup i wil start another one.

best fan fiction on this forum.i fell in love with ahem n rashi.pl write one more

Originally posted by: vibha_v_bhat

best fan fiction on this forum.i fell in love with ahem n rashi.pl write one more

thanks vibha i already started another one..its on the forum

here is the link..hope u wil like it

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saath-nibhaana-saathiya/1946126/ff-saathi-re-updated-part-15-page-79-9th-feb

wonderful ff.. just started eading...so far at 12th part... the story is really fantanstic :) keep it up

hey shaina... loved the ending ...it was PERFECT(in ahem style😉)...

Your FF was the first I ever read on IF and I really loved it!!

You had me immediatelly intrigued with Ahem's inner voice. The sarcasm was really great. The twist and turns along the way. Ahem nearly got her and than he was so far from getting her the next moment really great. Rashi was just perfect especially her interaction with ahem was hilarious. You made me really feel for the charakters and their emotions. You are a really talented and amazing writer!! 👏

Thanks so much for writting Milan!!! 😃

By the way does the word "Milan" have any special meaning?