Poems # 17 'Phir Saamne Mere Aa Jao' p.21 - Page 7

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omg aww that was ana amazing poem, so sweeet jst loved it 👏 👍🏼 🤗, yeah i agree with Deepa jee, its one of the best onez so far. and Anju that was good too, jst amazing do write more. i love poetry. write another soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: DeepaliC

aww rakshaji ur poem was sooo sweet!! i think that was ur best poem so far! great job!!.. 👏 👏

thanks deepa for the nice comments.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ow wow that was so sweet well done hun 👏 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: ruby89

omg aww that was ana amazing poem, so sweeet jst loved it 👏 👍🏼 🤗, yeah i agree with Deepa jee, its one of the best onez so far. 😊

Thanks Ruby Dear

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Originally posted by: **Tinkerbell**

ow wow that was so sweet well done hun 👏 👏 👏

thanks Tinkerbell

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Posted: 19 years ago
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This poem is dedicated to all my friends on IF and everywhere. luvya all dear friends.

Poem # 7 By Raksha Shah


Dosti


Kaash hum samaj pate yeh DOSTI hai kya

Dost pahele dil ke karib hote hai
Or jab bichad jate hai to
Sansar ke gum de jate hai
Tod dete hai jab woh dosti
In annkho se ansoo nikalte hai

Dil humara toot jata hai
Or hume lagata hai
Sath nibhane wala koi nahi
To kyon hum dosti kare
Is dil ko kyon phir se rulaye

Dost magar jab sachche ho
Or hume jab samjate ho to lagta hai
Sare sansar ki khushiya hume mil gayi
Takdir jaise hamari khul gayi
Itrane lage hum apni kismat par

Dost koi aisa hume mila de
Or hamari takdir jaga de
Sari khushiya hume mil jaye
Taarif kare hum uparwale ki
Insaan jab usne aise banaye.


Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg awww that was soo wonderful, jst amazing. see mein houn naa 😆. Dosti hai Rakha Di 👏 😊
Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Anju*

that was just great 👏

Thanks Anju.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow u guys r great 👏 👏 👏
all the poems r so lovely
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Originally posted by: ruby89

omg awww that was soo wonderful, jst amazing. see mein houn naa 😆. Dosti hai Rakha Di 👏 😊

Thanks Ruby.

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