what shubhra should do now...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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alright so here is what I think shubhra should do now because saloni is in a big mess because of her... and I think that we should take turns posting the next part so I'll start off. here goes...

scene in nahar's house where everyone is in the living room and yelling at saloni for disregarding their feelings etc. saloni is crying and asking forgiveness and trying to say something about how she had no idea that they were all trying to get neel and rewa together (rewa looks too old for neel, don't u think?). nahar, "saloni tum ye kaise kar sakti ho? tumne humse ye kyun chupaya." (saloni why did u do this to us? why did u hide from us). aditi, "saloni bhabhi sa, ye aapne acha nahin kiya. apni behan ke liye aapnay humari rewa di ki kurbani de di" (saloni bhabhi u didn't do the right thing. for your sis u sacrificed our rewa di). on the other hand, shubhra had come to meet her sis and heard everything from the door. she walks in and the camera shifts to her angry/guilty/shameful face. shubhra, "Bas! bahut hogaya..." (that's it! Enough...). she walks in and faces the whole family. "Aap logon ne ye soch kaise liya ke meri didi kuch galat kaam kar sakti hain? Woh kisi ka nuksaan karsakti hain. Jo khud doosron ke liye jiti ayi hai woh kisi aur ke saath bura kaise karegi? chee! Aap mein se kisi ne ye jaana ki koshish ki ke ye ab tak kyun khamosh hain?" (How could u people think that my sis could do something so wrong? She can do something bad to someone? She who lives for the sake of others, how can she do anything to ruin anothers life? Did any of u attempt to find out why she is quiet?). At this point saloni interrupts and tries to stop shubhra from telling everyone but shubhra cuts her off. Shubhra, "Aap jana chatay hai na ke inho ne aisa kyun kiya?...(saloni tryin to make her be quiet. "shubhra chup hoja"). nahin didi. bahut sehn kiya hain aapne ab aur nahin. Suniye aap sab...Saloni di chup rahi to woh meri vajay se. meri zindagi abaad rahnay ke liye ye aap sab ki narazgi sehan karnay ke liye raazi hui" (You people know why she did this? No didi. You have endured enough. no more. listen u all...saloni di was quiet because of me. to keep my life going she readily accepted you all being upset with her). Everyone is looking at each other in confusion and shock. Nahar, "Shubhra, ye tum kya kehrahi ho. Hume kuch samajh nahi ahraha" (SHubhra what are u saying. We don;t understand). shubhra, "aapne kabhi samajhney ki koshish hi nahi ki... jab aap meri zindagi mein aake mujhe reject kargay to mujhe bahut gussa aya. meinay didi ko kitna zaleel kiya... (looks at saloni with tears in her eyes and back). lekin inho ne uff tak nahin ki. ulta meri shaadi aapse karvaanay ki koshish ki, meri khatir. aur phir meri zindagi mein karan aya ek buray sapne ki tahran. usnay mujhe pyar ke jaal mein phasa ke mera istimaal kiya. mein toh kisi ko mooh dikhanay ke layak hi nahi rahi. aur tab saloni di mera sahara bani." (u didn't ever try to understand...when u came into my life and rejected me I was very angry and insulted did alot. but she didn't even say a word. in fact she tried to get me and u together for my sake. and then karan came into my life like a nightmare. he used me by getting me into his love trap. he used me and left me and then at that time, saloni di came to be my pillar of support. shubhra tells them the whole story and and the end she looks as if she is completely broken down. saloni is holding her arm and crying telling her to relax. all of a sudden shubhra gets some energy and wipes her tears. She looks back at everyone and walks closer to them. shubhra, "kaise soch liya aapne?" (how could u think that way?) and then she walks towards nahar, "jijasa, aap toh didi ko humse lekar gaye teh ye vaada karke ke aap zindagi bhar unki har ek khusi aur gham mein unka saath denge aur aap inti jaldi haar gaye?" (jijasa, u took didi from us promising to be with her in every happiness and sorrow and u gave up so quick). nahar looks down ashamed and shubhra addresses everyone else in a simlar manner but in group. everyone is ashamed and looks away. shubhra walks towards saloni and takes her hands. she has tears in her eyes. shubhra, "I;m sorry didi. mujhe maaf karna. meri wajahay se aapki zindagi kharab ho ye mein aur nahin bardaasht karsakti. waise bhi aapne pehle hi bahut saha hain." (I'm sorry didi. forgive me. because of me u have had to endure so much and I cannot allow this anymore. and anyways, u have already suffered so much because of me). saying this she runs out and leaves saloni standing there crying and calling after her....

what should happen next? somebody else post please.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nice script but... I think Shubra will not talk back to Nahar's family because she can't be so shameless to tell everybody that she is carrying Karan's child.
She will have to tell them everything if she opens her mouth.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i donot think shubra can do this

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