SP Fanfic: Dostana - part 12 on p17 {10.05.09} - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
di i am speechless..... i suggest you that you should write story on nahar and saloni and publish them you are great writer di.
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Posted: 16 years ago
my laddoo jaanu.. i m back to read ur updates =)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shobbybee

my laddoo jaanu.. i m back to read ur updates =)

I'm so happy that you are back jaanu 😃
I have missed u so much...can't wait to read your comments 😳 😳
Love you very much
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _Naz_

WOW! Reena i just read all the parts..and im speechless

i'm sorry i haven't been able to read them, but i finally found time,and wow im just speechless...
i love the friendship between the three, but i hope saloni and nahar end up together...
anyways all the parts were great as always
and thank you for the dedications!
Love you!
apki nazia didi👏

Awww Nazia di..You made me speechless today !!!
Thank u so much for ur sweet comments 😳 😳 U know how important ur comments are for me.
I'm very happy that you loved it...
I will update really soon
Love you very much
Tumhaari choti behan Reena
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Posted: 16 years ago
I will post the next part this weekend
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow great part so they are going to shoot in beutiful Italy great. going. keep it up Don't worry i too am busy for next 10 days. look forward to italy with trio.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas

wow great part so they are going to shoot in beutiful Italy great. going. keep it up Don't worry i too am busy for next 10 days. look forward to italy with trio.

Thanks for wonderful comments di...It means a lot for me
The three friends are going to the very romantic and beautiful Italy...
I will update very soon
Take care....loads of love
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Posted: 16 years ago
Will post the next part today in the evening...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 10
They arrived at the airport...after they had checked in they had one hour still before they were going to fly. They went to some shops at the airport...and they made a few photos. They had eat something in a restaurant and after that it was time to get in the plane.
During the flight Neel was listening to music and Nahar and Saloni were talking about the fashion show. He showed her some sketches about the summer sollection and Saloni was very excited. After a while Saloni fell in sleep on Nahar's shoulder. Nahar was still talking about the fashion show when he saw that Saloni was sleeping on his shoulder...he looked at her. She was so beautiful...she was sleeping so peacefull. He could look at her the whole time...something was happening with him...but what this feeling...he couldn't understand it. He wanted to touch her face...but first he looked at Neel. He saw that he was also sleeping...he smiled and took a blanket and put it around Saloni. Gently he laid his head on her head and after some minutes he fell also in sleep.
After two hours they arrived in Italy...they were in the city Rome. Nahar and Neel were searching their luggage while Saloni was looking around her. It was beautiful...she couldn't wait to go outside. When Nahar and Neel found all their luggage Saloni ran outside...both guys looked at each other and smiled. It was a crowed city and they had to wait for ten minutes for a cab. In the meanwhile Neel took his camera and took some photos of Nahar and Saloni...than Saloni took the camera and made some photos of Nahar and Neel. They had so much fun togeter.
They finally arrived at their hotel after a long drive...it was a beautiul and very expensive hotel. Because they didn't mind to share one room they had booked a big suite with three rooms. It was a classic beautiful suite...the view was wonderful. Neel decided to go outside for a walk because he wanted to see how the girl here was...Saloni decided to take a shower because in the eveing the have the first photoshoot..and Nahar decided to go to the place where the photoshoot will take place to check if everything was ready.
In the evening Neel and Saloni went to the Trevi fountain where the first photoshoot will take place. When they arrived there Nahar introduced Saloni to the member...everyone told Nahar that he had a great choice..Saloni was the perfect face for their new summercollection. A stylist came to Saloni and took her to the dressing trailer. Neel was helping Nahar with the decorations..and after some time they saw Saloni..she was wearing a beautiful cream – colored silk dress to her knees..she had beautiful golden shoes and cruly hair. It was like Nahar and Neel were glued to the ground...they couldn't move their eyes off her.
Saloni came to Nahar and asked him how she was looking...Nahar was still staring at her..he couldn't say anything. She looked at Neel who was also still staring at her..she smiled and snaps in her fingers. Nahar and Neel both told her that she was looking gorgous..she was blusing and ask Nahar where she should go stand for the photoshoot. He took her hand and took her to the fountain where she had to sit for the first few photos...she took various poses..than they made some photo's where she had to play with the water of the fountain...and after that she had also do some other poses on the other side of the famous Trevi fountain. Nahar and Neel were looking the Saloni the whole time...and both felt something.
After the first photoshoot everyone told Saloni that she was very beautiful...they started to pack everything. Saloni went to her two friends and ask how she was doing. Both gave her a lot of compliments...she hugged them both. She went to the dressing trailer to change and after some minutes she cames back. She was still looking beautiful in her white skirt with pink top.
Nahar and Neel were looking at the photos on the laptop..the photos were beautiful. Saloni came and was very happy with the photos. Neel had choose for his painting project the photo where Saloni was sitting by the fountain. Nahar told Neel that it was a perfect choice.
Everyone left from there...only the three friends were still there. They were sitting by the fountain and Saloni started to made her two friends wet...and it took not much time till Nahar and Neel also started to make Saloni wet. They had a lot of fun...after a while they had enough of the water fight and they decide to walk...Saloni was walking between Nahar and Neel..she was holding their hand and she was feeling so happy.
Neel saw a icecream parlor..he ran to the icecream parlor and took three chocolate ice...they were enjoying. Neel and Saloni had eat their icecream already but Nahar was still eating...Saloni and Neel looked at each other and smiled. They grabbed his icecream and pressed it against his face. Both started to laugh and ran away...Nahar wiped his face and ran after them...he was close by Saloni and grabbed her hand. He turned her to himself...he looked at her...Saloni was still smiling..but than Nahar came more close to her. She stopped with laughing and looked right in his eyes. He came with his cheek against Saloni's cheek and wiped the icecram on her face. He felt her breath in his neck...they looked at each other and Saloni was blushing. Nahar started to laugh and ran away...Saloni was smiling and looked at Nahar how he ran away.
Neel came to Saloni and saw icecream on her face...he told her that Nahar had caught her. She nodded her head smiled...he took her hand and they ran after Nahar
The next morning Neel was starting to paint the moment of yesterday by the fontain...he was almost finished with his painting when Nahar came to him. He was looking at the painting and told him that he should add some light colours on the top of the painting...Neel added some light colours and after some minutes the painting was finished..both were looking at the painting with a feeling which they never felt before.
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To be continued
This part is special for my sweet Nazia di..you always help and support me with everything..I really love you.
It's for Raksha di who is always so caring and helpful...and also for my sweet little sister Swati and my great friend Judy
And ofcourse for all SP lovers
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Posted: 16 years ago
This is my first time reading a SP FF. I read all parts today and I must say I truly enjoyed it, job well done. Love how you sketch and shape each character and settings of the story. I love Nahar, he's so in awe of Saloni, and Neel he just needs to take his player ways elsewhere. Do continue soon.
Edited by g_spice - 16 years ago

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