SP Fanfic: Dostana - part 12 on p17 {10.05.09} - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago

Enjoyed reading very much. Your writing flows easily from one paragraph to the next . Which makes reading the episode enjoyable. Keep it up...

Judy
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swati_j

fantastic part di. you know when i read your fanfic part i can imagine the whole part. really keep it up di. i really like the friendship between neel nahar and saloni.😛

Thanks a lot sweetheart....your comments are always so sweet and kind. It means a lot for me
The friendship will be more stronger between the three friends...but when they will realise that they are in love..what will happen than....😉
I will update very soon
Love you a lot
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: judyp

Enjoyed reading very much. Your writing flows easily from one paragraph to the next . Which makes reading the episode enjoyable. Keep it up...

Judy

Thanks for the lovely comments dear...
I will update this weekend...maybe tomorrow
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

Thanks for the lovely comments dear...
I will update this weekend...maybe tomorrow

wow..that's great di.take your time but haaaaaa not more.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Will post the next part after some hours
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 12
It was raining when they arrived at the airport of Spain...they were in the city Madrid. Nahar was trying to get a cab outside while Neel and Saloni were waiting inside. Saloni who was wearing a jeans with a white top has it so cold that Neel gave her his jacket.
Nahar was totally wet when he came back...Neel asked him if he could find a cab but Nahar told them because of the bad weather he couldn't find any cab. He saw that Saloni had it really cold and told her that everything will be fine and that he will find a cab very soon...before she could say anything he left again outside. Neel told Saloni that she must wait here and that he would ask someone on the airport he they could manage a cab for them.
Saloni was sitting on a bank at the airport and was watching outside...there she saw Nahar in the rain. He was always so sweet, caring and understanding. She was sure that he could do anything for her and for Neel. She turned around and there she saw Neel talking with a lady by the reception...she knew that the most peoples were thinking bad about him but she knew that he have a golden heart and that he really care about her and about Nahar. Whenever she was thinking about Nahar or Neel she felt so happy...she felt so lucky to have them as her best friends.
Nahar came back inside and went to Saloni...he was totally wet and he started to sneeze. Saloni made her bag open and took a towel..she started to dry his hair and face. Nahar was looking at Saloni while she was drying his face...day by day they came closer and he felt something in his heart...now he was also dreaming about her. He just wanted to say something when Neel came and told them that he had found a cab...he will come after ten minutes. They had to wait outside because there were so many peoples outside who were waiting for a cab.
When they were waiting for the cab outside all the three friend were totally wet...but fortunately they hadn't wait very long. Finally they arrived at their hotel...this time they had three rooms because that was the only option at this hotel. All three went to their room first and took a warm shower...after that they had decided to have together diner at Nahar's room.
Saloni was the first one who came at Nahar's room...Nahar made the fireplace on and both were sitting near by the fireplace to get some warmth. He saw that Saloni has it still cold so he took a sweater of him and put it around Saloni...she looked in his eyes...and smiled. After some minutes Neel came with some Spanish food...and they had a great time together. They were drinking some good spanish wine and they were talking about the photoshoot of tomorrow.
After the diner Neel decided to go back to his room because he was very tired...Saloni wanted to sit some more time before the fireplace. Nahar was sitting beside Saloni..he looked at her. She was looking beautiful...her hair was still wet. After some time Saloni felt that Nahar was staring at her...she turned her face to him and looked in his eyes. Nahar started to blush and looked down...Saloni came close to him and gave him a kiss on his cheek. He was stunned...he looked at her and she told him that she was very happy to have a friend like him. They hugged each other and after some time they were sleeping on each others shoulders.
The next morning the photoshoot took place at some famous places in Madrid and the photo's were amazing. Nahar was very pround of Saloni and after the photoshoot the friends decided to go for shopping...they bought some new designers clothes...had together lunch..went to a party and had much fun. After the party they went to the airport because they had to leave to New York now where the first fashion show would take place after three days. During the flight all the three friends were sleeping because they were very tired.
It was a bright sunny day when they arrived in New York...Saloni was so excited and couldn't wait to see this wonderful city. When Nahar and Neel took all the luggage Saloni took some photos of them. They went to the hotel first to fresh up..after a hour Nahar and Neel were waiting for Saloni in the lobby. Finally she came downstairs...she was looking gorgous..she was wearing a beautiful blue silk dress. Nahar and Neel both gave her some compliments..she smiled and took the hands of her best friends.
They walked through the city...they had so much fun together.. They couldn't live without each other anymore. In the evening Nahar had to go for a meeting about the fashion show . Neel was working at his painting when Saloni came in the room..she was looking at the beautiful painting and asked Neel if he she could also paint so beautiful. He smiled and took her hand...and gave her the brush. They started to paint something...Neel came very close to her because Saloni made some different moves on the paper and he was still holding her hand. He could smell the parfume...he looked at her and felt something. Saloni turned to him and they looked in each other eyes...this was the first time she was so close by Neel.

For one moment both were quiet...they just looked in each other eyes. Than suddenly she took the brush and put the color on his face...and ran away...they started to laugh and Neel ran behind her. She was looking behind and when when turned around she bumped to Nahar and the whole plate with colours came on his clothes. She stopped with laughing and was shocked...Neel also came and saw Nahar with all the colours...he laid his hand on Saloni's shoulder and both started to laugh. Nahar put his bag on the ground and came close to Neel and Saloni...they were walking slowly behind and when Nahar came too close they run away.

They were screaming...laughing and they were throwing pillows to each other...everyone in the hotel knew how much fun they had. After this fight they were sitting on the ground...they were so tired from the running and screaming.
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To be continued
It's not too good but hope you all will like it.
In the next part some friendship feelings will turn into love feelings..so don't miss the next part friends
Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
great part reena full of masti and yes they do deserve that 3 best friends loving each oterh and full of masti.
Saloni will have hard time choosing. Keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
great part di. who told you that this part is not to good? come on di........it is our right to comment about it.so i will comment on your part that it is ..............................................................................................................
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.............................................................toooooooooooooo sweet as like you.👏👏👏
continue really soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

As usual great.. Love the fact they are visiting some great cities around the world.. Keep it up... Keeping my fingers cross that Nahar gets the girl.................

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas

great part reena full of masti and yes they do deserve that 3 best friends loving each oterh and full of masti.

Saloni will have hard time choosing. Keep it up.

Thanks a lot Raksha di...your comments are always very important for me
Their dosti is getting stronger and stronger...but what will happen when dosti will change into love...😉
I will update very soon

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