SP Fanfic: Dostana - part 12 on p17 {10.05.09} - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 8
Neel and Sania are walking in the park...Neel didn't know what to say but after some minutes he stopped with walking and took Sania's hand. They look in each other eyes..
Neel: Hmm..Sania I know I have hurted you...but..I just want to tell you that...
Sania: Neel can I say something..you have hurted me...but actually it's not your fault. You had told me from the start already that you don't believe in marriages but I thought that maybe my love for you had changed you but I was wrong.
A tear came from her eye...without saying anything Neel wiped her tear and hugged her. Sania hugged him very tightly and some more tears came from her eyes. Neel told her that they will stay friends of each other and Sania just nodded her head.
Nahar was at office...a few minutes ago he had a meeting about the new summer collection. After two weeks there will be a fashion show..but they didn't find a model yet for their new summer collection. He had saw some models in the morning but he was searching for a new fresh face. He closed his eyes and suddenly he saw Saloni's face...he was shocked and opened his eys. He took the sketches and again he saw Saloni..but this time in the clothes which he had designed. At that time he knew he had found the new fresh face...he was so happy and was dreaming about how Saloni will walk on the stage with his new summer collection. He saw how he and Saloni will walk together on the stage at the end of the show...and how Saloni claps for him. His secretary knocked on his door and he was back opened his eyes.
Secretary: Sir...Mr. Sharma arrived...he is waiting for you in the conference room.
Nahar: I'll be there within five minutes
He took some files..but before he left he looked at the sketches and saw Saloni again. He smiled and shook his head..than he left to the conference room.
Saloni was in her boutique...she was helping a customer with a new dress when Neel entered the boutique. The customer was trying a red dress...she thought that she wasn't looking nice in that dress because she was a really thick. Saloni tried to convince her that she was looking beautiful in the dress but the customer had still her doubts. Than Neel came and told the customer that she was looking beautiful and that he never had seen such a beautiful dress. Saloni was suprised to see Neel.
Saloni: What are you doing here Neel...?
But Neel didn't answer her question..he went to the customer and gave her some more compliments. He took her hand and gave her a kiss and started to dance with her. Saloni was smiling to some other customers and went to Neel.
Saloni: Stop it Neel...if she don't like the dress than...
But before she could finish her sentence the customer told Saloni that she loved the dress and she would take it. Saloni was stunned...she looked at Neel who gave her a wink. The customer took the dress and before she left she had gave Neel her telephone number. Neel and Saloni looked at each other and started to laugh. Neel asked her if she had time to go for a walk now..Saloni was looking around in her boutique and told her colleague that she will go for a walk and that she will be back after a hour.
Neel started to tell her about Sania and that he really felt bad for her. Saloni was happy that he talked with Sania..and told him that Sania will find her true love. Than she asked him about his work and about the painting project. He told her that he had to wait because they were still thinking about the subject. After a while they were sitting on a bank in the park and were drinking coffee...Neel looked at her and he couldn't remove his eyes of her. Saloni turned her face to him and smiled...he was blushing and wanted to drink his coffee but his cup was empty and Saloni saw this and started to laugh...Neel was also laughing but than he stopped and was just looking at Saloni...she was so beautiful..and everything what she said or did it touched Neel on a different way. He had never felt before like this..he knew that something was happend with him but he couldn't understand it. Saloni stood up and told him that she had to go now...he also stood up and told her that he will walk with her till the boutique. Saloni was holding his hand and was talking about the thick woman and about the coffee incident..and she was laughing the whole time..but Neel was somewhere else.
In the evening when Neel was watching television someone called him...it was someone of the painting project. She told him that the subject of the project will be dreams..he should paint someone who can come in everyone's dream of thoughts..and he had only two weeks. He put the television off and started to think about the subject..he couldn't think of someone like that.
Nahar arrived at home and he saw Neel in the livingroom..he went to him and asked him why he looked so tensed. Neel told him about the project..Nahar was suprised and told him that in the morning he had the same problem..but now he had the perfect solution. He took the sketches of the new summer collection and told him that he was searching for a new fresh face..and that he finally found her.
Neel: You have found her naa...but how will I find mine model..?
Nahar told Neel that he should close his eyes and think about someone who is very special for him..who is beautiful..nice and caring. Who always help and support him in every way..the person where he feels that someone really cares about him. Neel was thinking about all the moments between him and Saloni and after some minutes he realised that Saloni is the one..he opened his eyes and told Nahar that he found her.
Both started to dream about Saloni without knowing that they were dreaming aout the same girl...than the door opened and they saw Saloni.
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Will continue really soon
Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh sense big trouble. Ek haseena do deewane.
Wonderful part reena. I loved it. keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really good - keep it up....But I don't like Neel getting close to Saloni she is for Nahaaaaaaar.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: judyp

Really good - keep it up....But I don't like Neel getting close to Saloni she is for Nahaaaaaaar.

yes di i also don't like it.for husband only nahar suits not neel anyway.......saloni per hak sirf or sirf nahar ka hi hai.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

oh sense big trouble. Ek haseena do deewane.

Wonderful part reena. I loved it. keep it up.

Thanks for the sweet and wonderful comments di
Yup..ek haseena do deewane..dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...aur ine do deewane mein kaun hai jho use haseena ka dil chura sakta hai...😉
I will update really soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: judyp

Really good - keep it up....But I don't like Neel getting close to Saloni she is for Nahaaaaaaar.

Thank you very much dear
well at this moment Neel and Saloni shares a good friendship...it's true that Neel started to feel something for her...but that's the same for Nahar also.
No the question is that when will Saloni feel something...and for who...😉
I will update really soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I will post the next part tonight
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 9
Saloni came in the livingroom and Nahar and Neel both stood up. She was looking from Nahar to Neel and than from Neel to Nahar...both had a smile on their face.
Saloni: What happend with you guys...why are you both smiling...?
Nahar and Neel looked at each other and stopped with smiling. Both started to tell her about their new projects and asked her if she wanted to help them. When they had asked her...Saloni was very confused...and at the same time Nahar and Neel turned to each other and they realised that they were asking the same girl for their project. Nahar whispered in Neel's ear..
Nahar: How could you do that Neel...I told you to think about a girl who is very special for you..I didn't told you to choose Saloni. She is mine..allright..so you better think about a other girl.

Neel: What...she is yours...?

Nahar: Sshh..I mean I had her first in my mind for my new project..and this project is very important for me..so she is mine !!!

Neel: You didn't tell me that your perfect model is Saloni so I would I know..but to tell you the truth for me she is the special person in my life...so I won't change my mind.

They started to scream at each other...Saloni asked them to stop with screaming but they didn't hear her so she went to them and came between them.

Saloni: What are you both doing...? Why are you both screaming at each other...? If you both will continue this fight I won't help anyone of you..understand..?

Both nodded their head and looked down...they were ashamed of their behavior. Saloni took Nahar hand and looked in his eyes...than she also took Neel's hand and took them to the terace. They were sitting on the edge of the teracce with their feet in the sand of the beach.

Saloni: You both are my closest friends and I want to help you both...but there is one problem..because if I would help Nahar than I have to work with him the upcoming two weeks because the fashion show will take place after twe weeks and if I would help Neel it will be the same. So I think it will be better if you both choose someone else..because I won't hurt anyone of you.

Nahar told Saloni that he understands her very well...and that it was very sweet of her to think about them this way. They were looking at the sea for a while without saying anything..and than Saloni screamed...

Saloni: I have the perfect solution...I will help you both

Neel: and how will you do that Saloni...?

Saloni: Well...I will walk at the fashion show for Nahar...and I know I have to do some photoshoots during the upcoming two weeks...and Nahar and I have to go to different places but you can also come with us..during the photoshoots you could make your paintings of me for your new project...and when we are free we will make a lot of fun together... What do you both think...?

Nahar: Wow that's great Saloni...I think it's perfect !!

Saloni looked at Neel and asked him how he was thinking about it...Neel nodded his head and told her that it was perfect. They shared a group hug...and both guys took Saloni in their arms and ran to the sea with her...Nahar made her wet and so did Saloni also..they had much fun.

The next morning they were sitting on the breakfast table..Nahar was telling them about the plans..where they will go and when the photoshoots will take place. The first photoshoot will be take place tomorrow in Italy so they must leave tonight for their flight.

Saloni was very excited and after the breakfast she went immediately to her room to pack her clothes. Neel went to the restaurant to tell them that the upcoming two weeks he couldn't come at work. When Saloni had packed eveything what she needed she went to Nahar's room to check if he had packed everything already. He was still busy with searching his clothes..

Saloni: For the first time I see a guy who takes so much time to search his clothes...nice..very nice..

Nahar: Well..I'm a fashion designer so I should look perfect..

Saloni came close to him and smiles..he was blushing...she took a nice shirt of him from the wardrobe and told him that he should take this also because it's her favourite shirt. She left from his room and Nahar was smiling...

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I'm so sorry that I have updated after such a long time..my laptop has been crashed that's why I couldn't work on my fanfic...I haven't get my laptop back yet..I'm using the computer of my di when I get the chance..so I hope you will like this update and sorry for the mistakes.

will continue soon

Edited by jaanlover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

WOW! Reena i just read all the parts..and im speechless

i'm sorry i haven't been able to read them, but i finally found time,and wow im just speechless...
i love the friendship between the three, but i hope saloni and nahar end up together...
anyways all the parts were great as always
and thank you for the dedications!
Love you!
apki nazia didi👏

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