ff by pinky shah

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Posted: 18 years ago
#1

hi guyz iam back

guyz merii ff ka 1st topis closed hay so main apna 1st part ka link send ker rahin hon aur 2nd part update ker rahin hon so plz dont misss it....

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=395749&T PN=1&#6722793

NEXT PART.........

hi guyz iam back thx 4 wonderful responce.........

Arjun says 2 kripa

A-krips tum yahin rukoo main abhi atta hon

k-okz big b plz juldy anna

A-ok baby bus abhi ayya

k-mujhay baby mut kahooo

A-ok ok dadii amma abhi atta hon main

arjun actuall main bhoomi say milnay jata hay aur ussay kafi derrr ho jaty hay bhoomi to ussay nahin milty but kripa bechariii

k-yeh bhuyan kahan gay

and kripa find the arjun she enter a room and uss room main guess what kiya hota hay angad-----kripa was shocked and angad is also and says

An-hey what r u doing here tum ander kaisay aai

K-who actuaaly na mera bhaiii .............mera bhai kahin kho gaya hay ...

An-acha jeee kitnay sall ka hay app ka bhai

K-mujh say takreban 5 sall bura hay

An-what main nay sumjha who tum say 5 sal chota hay

K-okz sorry 4 distreb

aur janay lugty hay but suddenly she move n says

K-plz autograph

An-ooohhh and cautch her hand n says

An-sorry main babies ko auto graph nahin deta main sirf hot babes ko auto graph deta hon

aur wahan say smile kerta hoa chula jata hay n kripa bechariii ussay jatay dekhty rehty hay

aur abb mr arjun goenka ka suney

A-yar kahan gai who angad ki sis mujhay uss say aik dafa to zaroor milna hay

but juld hi ussay apnii sis kay baray main khayal atta hay

A- ooooohhhh God kripa ka kiya ho ga who to akailyy hi wahan ho giii

and wahan say bhagta hay but suddenly he sees bhooomi among the crowed of her fans and scuirty gards

A-oooooohhhh to yeh miss yahan hay main nay inhay kahan kahan nahin dhonda but main itnay crowed main iss say bat kaisay karon ga........ ooohh God abhi nahin per miss aik din app humarii dewanii hon gii jaysay hum app kay dewanay hain yeh wada raha app say humara (arjun yeh sub kuch apnay app say hi bolta jata hay like mads lolz)

and arjun finding the kripa suddenly he seees the kripa n shout

A-hey krips listen kahan chuly gai thi

k-gumsum and sees her hand

A-madam kahan gum ho chalooo and they sit in the car

arjun sees the kripa n says

A-yeh kiya hoa hay krips tum nay yeh apna hath kyun pukra hoa hay chot to nhain lug gai kahin

K-nahin big b pata hay mera hath angad nay pukra

A-plz mazak mut karoo mujhay lugta hay tumharii tabeat theek nahin chuloo gher chultay hain n he start the car

K-nahin big b main sach keh rahi hon

A-acha to phir angad nay tumhain auto graph bhi diya ho ga dikhaoo kahan hay

K-who nhain diya

A-kyun ager hath pukra hay to auto graph bhi diya ho ga

k- nahin angad nahin kaha main babeis ko auto graph nahin deta

A- what ha ha ha ha ha ha

kripa gussay say arjun ko dekhty hay but arjun still laughing

K-yeh app ki kion butiisiii bahir aa rahi hay

A-krips tum aur buchi who mujh say aa ker poochay tum kaisii afat ki puryan ho and start again laughing

K-acha acha bus abbb rehnay bhi dain appp yeh batain aappp kahan gay thay

A- who mujhay lakho kam ho suktay hay tumhain batana zaroori hay

k-mujhay pata hay jaysay app bhoomi ko dekh rahay thay na stge per main sub janty hon

A-kiya nam bataya bhoomi

k-oooooooooo to app itnay kho gay thay uss main kay angd nay sub kay samnay uss ka name lay ker ussau introduce kerwaya per appp nay suna hi nahin.........hmmmmmmmmmmmmlugta hay dal main kuch kala hay aur waysay bhi app kahin per bhi beautyful girl dekho app kay to hosh hi kho jatay hain

A-aaayyyy chup who koi ammm nahin thi okz


K- han ammm ho bhi kaysay sukty hay......... hay na akher angad ki sis

A-g nahin appp ko bohut galat fehmy ho gai hay uussay kiissii angad kay support ki zaroret nahin dekha tum nay uss ki awaz kitnii piariii thi oooohhh God seriously krips tumhara big b to samjhoo gaya busss

K-meanz app kripa kay fan ho gay

A-han but main bhi ussay apna fan kerna chahata hon

K-to kiya big b app bhi singer banoo gay

A- g nahin.... tumhariii akel kahan hay kripa mujhay koi intrest nahin hay singing main tumharii terha mera bizness world main name hi kafi hay ussay mera fan bunanay kay liy

k-ha ha ha who kaisay ho ga

A-who tum mujh per chor doo

K- okz

IN THE NEXT SCENE

angad and bhoomi sit in one room

b-bhai mujhay nahin pata mujhay nahin kerni yeh singing

An-array kyun itniii piyarii awaz hay merii doll ki n u know public ajjj mujh say ziada tum per fida thi

b-but bhai mujhay dad kay bizness main intersted hon na plzzzz bhai bus yeh mera 1st n last show tha jo main nay app kay sath perfome kiya aur sirf appp ka dil rekhnay kay liy

An-array doll tum bhi na u know yeh mera sapna hay kay meri yeh choty si sis bohut name kumay aur who bhi singing ki dunya main

b-who to main bizness ki dunya main bhi kama sukty hon

An-han per meriii yeh khuwaish hay kay meray sath ager koi female singer perform kurai to who koi merii apni ho mama to singing kernay say rahin aik tum hi to ho na

b- oooohhh acha to yeh bat hay to main dad aur mom say bat kerty hon kay angad bhai ki shadii kissii achi singer say kerwa dain phir appp who aur singing ki dunya sath sth main kush

An-tum kubhi to serious hoa karoooo

b-acha acha kul subha bat kurain gain

An-hey doll merii bat to sunoo yar ajj main aik choty lurki say milla kitnii innocent thi na bilkul sehmii hoi curia ki terhan she was 2 innocent

b-bhai waysay aik bat bataoooo app ko to apni female fanz main say kubhi koi buriii lugii hay jo who lugay giii app ky liy to sub hi innocent aur piarii hoty hay

An-nahin dolll who bilkul aleg lagiii

b-appp mujhay hosh main nain lugtay kul bat kurain gain ok byeeee good night and sweet dream

An-same 2 u my dearst baby doll

b-bhai plz mujhay yah doll mat kaha karain plzzzz

An-ok baba galtii ho gai moaf kar doo or ab jao....(bcz angads sell ringing)

b-han han ab to yahi kahna hay k jaoo(with noghty smile)..ok byee bhai

PRIVEW:- next in that ff .........bhoomi read in newz paperz abt the arjun as a famous and bacholer bizness tycon and angad listen kripaz songs & he was shocked!!!! ( but guys soochnay walli baat yah hay angad or kripa dobara milaay kahan????so dont miss it ...thats a lovely story like me :-).....thnx .........and byezzz take carez all

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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
it's amazing!!!!! 😊
strong plot!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
hi guyz lugta hay app logo ko merii ff kuch ziada achi nahin lugii....phir bhi main apna next part send ker rahin hon...
hi guyz iam back
in next scene
bhoomi subha uthty hay aur bohut fresh fell kerty hay aur tab hi maddy(angad's Servent )calls her 4 breakfast and bhoomi says ok main aaty hon fresh ho ker.......n bhoomi nichay aaati hay aur news paper perhaty hay and newz paper ki head linez main mr Arjun goenka kay baray main hoty hay
in newz paper:-the most handsome ,bacholer and a famoues bizness tycone mr arjun goenka jinho nay itni si hi ummer main biznesss ki dunya main bohut name kamaya hay.....and bhoomi is lil bit surprised!!!!n says
b-wooowwww kash mera bhi aik din aysay hi newz paper main name ayyyy the most bueatiful,famous and a bacholer ..............(bhoomi apni bat pori hi nahin ker paty kay angad pichay say bolta hay)
An:-(he continue her talk n says)the most bueatiful,famous and a bacholer singer jinho nay apnay phelay concert say hi logo ka dil jeet liya ( sees her news paper)yeh dekho my doll yeh sub kuch iss newz paper main hain aur dekho tumharii pic bhi aai hay
bhoomi sub bhool jaty hay and she says.........
B-dikhaoo bhai and says woowwwwwwwww bhai yeh main hon
An-nahin to phir kon hay and guess what ajjj main tumhain bohut bury party denay wala hon my baby dolll
b-ooooooooooooohhhh thx bhai
IN HERITAGE HOUSE
kripa bhagty hoi aaty hay n says
K-dekho big b appp kay baray main kitna acha acha likha hay newz paper main
(but mr arjun kiisi aur hi newz paper main khoyyy hoyy hotain hain)
K-oooooooooohhhhhhhh appp to kissi aur hi newz paper main khoy hoy hain and he pull the news paper frome arjun
(phir kiya kripa agay aur arjun pichay)
A-hey krips stop yar wapiss dooo yeh mujhay
k-na na na phelay mujh say wada karooo gay kay ajjj mujhay ice cream khilanay kay liy bahir lay ker jaooo gay
A-ok ok black maler lurkiiiii main wada kerta hon kay main lay ker jaon ga bus merii buchi abbb wapis day doo yeh newz paper
(yeh shore sun ker shaku bahir aaty hay aur kehty hay)
S-yeh kiya tum dono bacho ki terha lar rahay hooo
....arjun chulooo kripa to buchi hay per tum itnay buray bizness man ho ker yeh herkatay kertay hoy achay lugtay hooo
A-sorry mom yeh krips hay na mujhay newz paper nahin dey rahiii
S-arjun buchi hay who abhi janay bhi do tum kion buchay bun rahay ho aur kripa yeh sun ker jhoty moty ka roo ker kehty hay
K-han mama dekho na big b mujhay dant rahay hain
S-ooooo meriii buchi chup ho jaooo main dekhty hon issay tum chaloo meray sath ander
k-hmmm ok mama n arjun ko mooon chrhaty hoi wahan say chuly jaty hay aur arjun bechara ussay jatay hoa dekhta rehta hay and says ......
A-krips ki buchi choron ga nahin tujhay ice crem khanay to meray sath hi jana hay na and take the news paper and leave
in evening arjun says 2 kripa
A-hey krips chalooo ice cream khanay chultain hain
k-kiya big b appp ko apna wada yad hay
A-arrrayyyyyyyy han buchi apni choty si sis say koi wada ker kay main bhool sukta hon
k-ohhhhh big b u r jusy 2'3'4 '5...................good
A-ooohhh thank you abbb jaoo tiyar ho jaooo werna derr ho jay giiii
k-ok main abhi atty hon
arjun dil main sochta hay krips ki buchi tujh say to budla lay ker choron ga
k-bhai main tiyar hon
A-ooohhhh wawoooooooooooooow krips u looking like doll
k- ohhh thx big b(she wears white top and black short skurt with open hear)
A-(in the car) krips ajjj jitny ice creams khani hay na kha looo
k-suchiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A-han to phir kiya main mazak karon ga
(fortunity kripa aur arjun bhi ice cream khanay ussi hotel main ja rahay hain jahan angad nay bhoomi kay liy party rukhi hay)
IN HOTEL
kripa 3,4 ice cream ka order kerty hay to arjun kehta hay bus itniii sii
K-nahin big b abhi 3 ya 4 aur mengwaoon gi aur 9 ya10 ka parsels bunwaon gi
A-hmmmmm okz jaisii tumharii merzi jan
arjun ka mobile phone bujta hay arjun kripa say excuse kerta hoa bahir aata hay aur guess what who bahir kiya dekhta hay kay party hall ki taref say bhoomi kissi kam say bahir aaty hay aur arjun ussay dekh lyta hay
A-yeh yahan kiya ker rahi hay(phir kuch derr bad hi ussay pata lugta hay kay yahan bhoomi kay honure main party rakhi gai hay and mr arjun uss party main shamil ho jatay hain aur kripa ka hal sunay kripa sahiba ice cream pay ice cream kha rahi hoty hain in the party arjun dekhta hay kay bhoomi akelii khuri hay so he asked her 4 dance )
Arjun to bhoomi
A-would u like 2 dance with me
bhoomi phelay sochty hay phir arjun jaysay dashing personelity walay bunday ko mana nahin ker patii and they both are dance on dheeray dheeray (remix)from ashqui
and suddenly arjun kay mobile per ring hoty hay aur who excuse kerta hoa bahir chula jata hay udher say angad bhoomi say poochta hay
An-hey doll some one special
b-nahin bhai koi fan tha dance kay liy kaha to main mana nahin ker paii
An -ok per bhoomi apnay fans ko itna sir per nahin churatay
b-ooooohhh bhai app bhi na main to bus waysay hi
An-ok leave it
okz guyz u like all this byeeeeeeeeeeee
Sidra.W thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! CONTINUE SOOON!!! 👏
noor zahrah thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#5
just maizingggggggggggggggggggg wowwwwwwwwww maira sapna poora kar dea pinbky 👏 .....plz continue soon
noor zahrah thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#6
yar its juz not fairr.............pinky juz 15 year ki ho kar likh rahgi hay aap log usay apeateate to kar saktay ho naaaaaaaa.........plz cominet to doo 😡
noor zahrah thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#7
pimky iam with u yarr keep continuing ur ff iam love itt/////////////////////////////plz cont soonnnnnnnnnn 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
Hey Pinky, I haven't read you ff yet but would definitely find time to read it..Sounds interesting.. 😊
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18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 18 years ago
#9

yeah pinky....ur fan fic is absolutely sweet and beautiful.....

must say ur a very nice writer.....the story's really sweet and a bit hatke u see......

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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
hi guyz sorry app log noor sis ki baat ka bura nahin mana b/c she is my elder sis and she is danm possessive abt me so plz don't mind and thx 4 this wonder full responce
luvz u all 😊

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