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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
hi guyz
in next scene
abb appp becharii kripa ka halll sunay
K-oooohh yeh big b kahan gay main kub tuk yahan bhetii rahon meray pass to paisay bhi nahin bulkay big b nay hi mujhay mana kiya tha paysay lynay say aur mobile..mera mobile kahan hay ohhhh no meray pass to mobile bhi nahinabbb main kiya karon giii
(veter aata hay bill lay ker aur poooray 8000 ka bill ata hay kripa was shocked)
K-yeh main nay itni bhi ice creams nahin kahiii kay app nay yeh itna billl diya hay
v-no mame jo sir app kay sath thay na who bhi kuch khana pack kerwa ker lay ker gay hay aur kaha tha kay bill appp pay kurain gii
K-kiya ........but meray pass to paisay hi nahin
V-g iss main main kuch nahin ker sukta appp humaray maneger say batt ker lain
k-okz
kripa menager kay pass jaty hay aur kehty hay
K-sir who kiya hay na main bill pay nahin ker sukty
M-what yeh kehnay kay liy app meray pass aii hain ager app ki 5 stars hotel kay billl pay kernay ki aukat nahin to yahan attii kyun hain
K-ooooo Mr mind your languge app ko pata nahin main goenka famile ki ikloty bety hon.....ager meray uncel mansen goenka ya phir meray dad sidhart goenka ko pata lug gaya na kay app mujh say isss tune main bat ker rahay hain to who ratoo rat app ka yeh hotel .............hmmmmmmmm app say kiya kahon meray apnay bhai nay mujhay phusaya hay........appp mujhay batay main kuch bhi kernay ko tayar hon siway bertan dhonay kay
M- no maim sorry mujh say bohut buriii gulty ho gai sorry maim app jain
k- nahin main kripa goenka kissi ka ehsan nahin lety
M-ok maim apppp gana ga sukty hain
k-thora sochty hay .......han kyun nahin
M-to phir theek hay ajj humarii singer nahin ai app plzzz
k- ok ok n she drinks brandii (she sings the song meri chandi tu sona to hira to buna from sislsilay)
nushay main to kripa ko kuch pata nahin hota kay who kiya ker rahi hoty hay but yeh awaz sun ker angad kay hosh urr jatain hain and he thinks who is she but unfortunity he cant seee kripa's face lykin foren hi arjun wahan aa jata hay and he was shocked
A-krips yeh kiya ker rahi hon but krripa behosh ho jaty hay
(arjun becharay kay to hosh hi urr jatay hain)
A-ooooohhhhh God yeh kiya ho gaya main nay to mazak kiya tha and he payed the billl and leave
(but angad itnii piarii awaz ko bhool hi nahin pata n he find that girl but who yahn hoty to milty na) aur udher arjun ka halll
in the car
A-plz krips uuutho merii jan plz dekhooo but she is not well arjun kripa ko docter kay pass lay ker jata hay and docter kehta hay kay iss nay 1st time bohut ziada drink kiya hay isss wajha say issay reaction ho gaya hay main nay inhay injection day diya hay appp inhay gher lay ja suktay ho aur subha tuk inhay hosh bhi aa jay ga and arjun sochta hay main iss halet main issay gher kaisay lay ker jaon lykin jaisay bhi ker kay arjun kripa ko gher lay ker jata hay but arjun ka good luck kay sub soy hoy hotain hain and poori raat arjun kripa kay pass guzarata hay aur bohut puchtata hay
IN the morning:-
kripa ko hosh atta hay and arjun says
A-kripa kripa merii jan kiya ho gay tha tumhain raat ko
K-kuch nahin hoa tha aur app ko is say kiya app ko to budla lyna tha na lay liya acha hota kay main mer hi jaty (wid teary eyes)
A-kripa plz aynda aysa mut kehna tum mujhay mujhay meriiii jan say bhi ziada azeez ho meriii jan
k- appp mujhay wahan akalay chor ker kahan gay thay
A-main wahin tha
k-jhooot
A-han kripa main to sirf tumhain sta raha tha per wahan angad wallo ki party chul rahi thi aur pata hay main nay bhoomi kay sath dance bhi kiya
k-sub kuch bhool ker kiya angad wahin tha oooohhh G0d appp nay mujhay kyun nahin bataya
A- main to khud kisii main kho gaya tha
(guyz sub say bura jhoota hay iss main arjun mana kay bhoomi kay sath dance kiya per wahan yeh Mr apni kissi girl frd kay sath tha)
A-acha merii piyariii si sis mujhay maaff ker doplz kissi ko mat batana
k-okz nahin bataon gi bus kush
A-thx meriii jan and kiss on her forhead ok krips tum aram karoo n leave
IN KHANA HOUSE
Angad says 2 bhoomi..................................
An-hey doll yad hay na ajjjj humariii recording hay
b- han but kitnay bujay
An-thi to subha 12:pm per abb shayud raat ko 11:00 tak ho gi
b-what..itnii ratt ko
An-hey baby aysa hota hay.kubhi kubhi late bhi ho jata hay u dont worried main hon ga na tumharay saath
b-hmmmmm
IN RECORDING ROOM
they both r singing kaisa yeh piyar hay.....after end the recording producer says 2 angad
P-angad tum kuch derr ruko tumharay kuch songs baki hain
B-but bhai merii tabiat theek nahin hay
Angad 2 producer
An-kiya zaroori hay kay main ajj hi saray songs record karon
P-han angad yeh bohut zaroori hay
B-okz bhai u dont worried main garii lay ker chuli jaty hon
An-r u sure tum akelii ja sakoo gi na
b-han bhai main abb buchi thori na hon i'll menaged
An-okz my doll kiss her forhead and bhoomi leave
(but un fortunity car adhay restay main hi karab ho jaty hay bhoomi)
b-uuufff yeh garii ko abhi kharab hona tha uuufff kitnii sunsan hay yeh jagha
bhoomi car say utrtiii hay ohhh garii bhi mujhay theek nahin kerniii aty abb main kiya karon (suddenly kuch larko ki jeap aa ker rukty hay n they all are very bad boyz)
lurkay gari say utertay hain n cautch her hand
b-yeh kiya budtameezi hay
boyz-aray yeh to mr rock star angad khana ki sis hay
b-han to kiya
boyz-humain autograph nahin do giiiiii
b-ok lao paper aur pen main day dety hon
boyz-na na na aysay nahin waysay do jaysay tumhara bhai apni female fanz ko deta hay
b-pagel ho kiya hatoo meray rastay say mujhay janay doooo
boyz-yar waysay cheez buriiii piyariii hay
b-mujhay touch bhi mat karoo....
boyz-acha!!!!!!n touch herface
b chorooo mujhay dont touch me..........n shout help help bachaooo mujhay bachaooo
and aik dam aik garii aa ker pass rukty hay and arjun goenka bhair aatay hain
A-hey yar kiya hoa kyun tang ker rahy ho lurkii ko
and bhoomi says 2 arjun plz mujhay inn logo say bacaooo
A- relex kuch nahin ho ga
boyz-yar janay dain issay to buss humaray hawalay ker day aur to chup chap yahan say nikal ja
A- yar janay do kyun tang ker rahay ho
boyz-tujhay kyun iss ki itnii fiker ho rahi hay kiya behan hay teriii
A-abay behan ho gi terii............ abbbb nahin bachoo gay
and fighting along them aur phir kiya hemasha jeet to heroes ki hoty hay na and who budtameez boyz wahan say bagh jatain hain
A-aaabbbay yarooo ruko to sahi abhi to sirf triel tha full action to dekhtay jaooo
b-thx ager ajj app yahan nahin hotay to shayud.........
A-relex and see on her face she looking very beautiful,cute and innocent in pink kurta and blue jeanz and says
A-waysay app yahan is wekt akelay
b- nahin who meriii gari kharab ho gai aur mujhay gari sahi kerni nahin atty
A-ooohh its ok ager app mind na kurain to main appp ko app kay gher tak chor don
b-no its ok main chuly jaon agay hi app ko merii wajay say itnii takleef uthanii purii
A-no its main app ko gher tak drop ker don
b-ok thx
and sit in the car
IN THE CAR (arjun ka mobile bujta hay and arjun attend the phone and says)
A- yes arjun goenka speaking(aur yeh name sun ker bhoomi shocked and thinks)
b-yeh to who hi newz paper wala bacholer,handsome and famouse bizness tycon arjun goenka hay wawoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww
(after few minutes arjun phone off the phone then suddenly bhoomi says 2 arjun)
b- appp arjun goenka hay
A-g kyun kiya hoa
b-oooohhh GOD who hi na jin kay baray main kul kay newz paper main likha tha
A-g bilkul who hi
b-ooohhh main to app ki bohut buriii fan hon
A-(dil hi dil main ......yar main to isssay apna fan bunanay kay chuker main tha but yeh to phelay say hi and says to bhoomi)ohhhh realy....waysay yeh nacheez iss kabel bhi nahin kay aik rock star ki sis bulkay aik khud rock star kissi bizness tycone ki fan ho
b- nahin aysa hi hay na...main bhulay aik rock star hon but nahin main singing ki dunya main nain aana chaty thi yeh to bhai ki zid thi lykin main to start say hi apnay dad kay bizness main involve tho aur main aik biznesss women hi buna chaty thi
A-hmmmmmmm intresting waysay aysa hota hay abbb appp yahin say andaza luga sukty hain kay merii choty nutkhut si sis main chata hon who meray sath bizness main aay per nahin who who to singing ki diwanii hay bulkay app kay bhi ki
b-ha ha realy intresting
(and arjun sees the bhoomi hustay hoy kitni piarii lugty hay yeh lurkii)
b- ok bus bus mera gher aa gaya
A-ohhh to yeh hay app ka gher
b-aaayy na ander coffe ho jay
A-nahin ajjj nahin phir kubhi ok byeee
b-byeeeeeeeeeee
guyz hope u alll like this
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12



hey pinky again a good stuff.....that was awesome and beautifully writen 👏

all this applauds for u for writing a superb ff..... 😛

ab to itna hi keh sakti hoon......

hum logon se jyada intezr mat karwana aur jaldi se aur achche updates karti rehna...... 😉 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
hey nice update 👏
do cont soon
n' i am sure u don't want to keep ur fans waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
hello guyz 😊 😊
thx 4 wonderful responce
in heritage house
krips hey krips kahn ho tum
k-idher hon big b apnay room main
A-ooohhh God pata hay ajj kiya hoa
k-(choclate khatay hoy )kiya hoa
A- ajj jub main gher wapis aa raha to rastain main kuch gunday aik lurki ko chair rahay thay and guess what who kon thin
k-kon thi!!!!!!!
A-who angad ki sis bhoomi
k-nahin nahin suchi bolo big b
A-han such keh raha hon and u know main ussay kiya apna dewana banaon who to phelay say hi mujh per fida
k-hain big b kahin app nay pii to nhain hoi
A-nahin krips who actually main na ussay biness man bohut pasand hay aur who to meray baray main kafii dafa newz paper main perh bhi chuki hay
K-kiya ohhh wawooooowwwwww big b app ho hi itnay sweet
A-thx merii jan
k- ok abb kafi derr ho gai hay main ja rahi hon sonay
A-ok bye take care or han tumharii tabeat kaysii hay
k- main bilkul theeek or main app ko aik bat batana to bhool hi gai
A- kiya
k-mansen uncle or yuv bhuya lundon say wapiss aa rahin hain kul
A-suchii wawoooooooooow aur suraj bhuya aur mansvii bhabi nahin aa rahy
k- nahin who kuch dinoo main hi ay gain
(sorry guyz isss ff main kuch aysay log hay jin ka introduce main kerwana bhool gai but app logo ko agay pata chulta jay ga ...chulain main app ko mansen,yuvraj .manasvii aur suraj ka introduce to kerwa don)Mansen goenka younger bro of sidhart goneka .....Yuvraj goenka mansen goenka ka ik lota beta hay........suraj goenka elder sun of sidhart and younger bro of arjun and kripa.....manesvii wife of suraj goenka
guyz mansen ko aik betii ki khuwaish thi but ussay betii to nahin hoi but who kripa say bohut bohut piyar kerta hay
NOW IN THE MORNING AT KHANA HOUSE
bhoomi on the breakfast table says to angad
b-pata bhai kul rastain main merii car kharab ho gai aur phir wahan kuch gunday aa gay
aur mujhay chernay lugay
An-what merii buchii tumhain kuch hoa to nahin na main nay kaha tha akelii mat jaoo
b-aaaray nahin bhai who yad hay newz paper main jiss bizness man kay baray main likhatha arjun goenka uss nay merii jan buchaiii
An-what tum nay uss say uss ka phone NO: liya kay nahin
b-who to main bhool hi gai
An-ooohh tum bhi na buchi hi hoo kamazkam mujhay uss insan ka thx to kernay detin jiss nay merii jan ko buchaya
B-koi bat nahin bhai uss say phir mulakat zaroor ho gi
An-okz (and mr khana and naina khana join both of these)
Mr khana-how are u my childes
Angad and bhoomi-fi9 dad
naina kahan -angad itna kam kyun kertay ho beta tumharay dad ka itna bura bizness hay beta aur waysay bhi yeh agay tumhain hi sumbhalna hay
An-plz mom u know na mujhay music say kitna piyar hay aur han yeh bizness main hi sambhalon ga but abhi nahin
B-mom main sumbhalon gi dad ka bizness
An-tum chup abhi tumahin meray sath bohut sarii albums kerni hain
mr kahna-aaray naina main apnay bucho ko bound nahin kerna chata who jo kertay hain unhay kernay do bhai abhi poori life purii hay unn ki
An-ooohh my sweet dad yeh hoi na bat
naina-jo kerna hay karoo main nahin aty tum baap beta ki batoo main aur bhoomi ajj bhoomi poojen hay aur pershad hum dono nay milker banaha hay
b-g mama mujhay bilkul yad hay
An-ohhh main to yeh bhool hi gay tha kay meriii doll aik achi cock bhi hay
b-han to aur kiya insan ko her kam aaana chahy
An - han merii man sub galat buss app sahi
mrkahan-angad meriii betii ko ziada tang mat kiya karoo
b-nahin dad bahi to mujh say bohut piyar kertay hain
naina-dilip inn dono behan bhai ki batoo main aanay say kuch faida nahin dono aik doosray ki buraii nahin sun suktay
(oooohh guyz mujhay mr khana ka anme yad aa gaya its dilip)
D-han bhai naina tum sahi kehtay ho
and they all are laughing
B-dad appp bhi na
N-chaloo bhoomi bohut ho gai pooja ki tayarii ho jay
b-g mom
and they both are leave.........
guyz main applogo ko aik aur person say to milwana hi bhool gai its keshave
he is belong 2 khanderwal family he is also a rich person and a best frd of arjun and brother of shefalii and anita(guyz anita ko to applog jantay hi ho gay angad ki cozen but meriii ff main yeh keshave ki sis hay)
IN heritage house:-
entry of mansen and yuv raj
kripa dono ko dekhty hay and shout
k- mansen uncle .yuv bhuya and dono ko hug kerty hay
M-kaisii hay merii buchi
k-app kay begair pp kli betii kaysii ho sukty hay
y-kripa baki sub kahan hay
k-papa apnay room main hain aur big b office unho nay nay office nahin jana tha ajj but shayud koi importend meeting thi looo papa bhi aa gay
sidhart-aray yuv mansen yar kitna intazar kerwaya .aur sunaooo mansen jiss project kay liy tum log london gay thay uss ka kiya hoa
yuv-uncle appp ka beta yuv jay ur project ussay na millay aysa kaysay ho sukta hay
S-hmmm yeh to bilkul sahi kaha tum nay.........looo arjun bhi aa gaya
A-hello uncel hi yuv kaisay hooo
Y-bilkul theek tum sunaoo
A-A1 yar
M-aur sunaoo yahan kaakm kaisa ja raha
A- A1 uncle
M-hmmm very good
A- arrray han main to batana hi bhool gaya kay ajj mujhay Goa jana hay bizness kay silsilay main
S-ok beta jaoo tum janay ki tayarii karo
A-ok dad byeeeeeeee......... aur han yuv tumhain shefalii bohut yad ker rahi thi
Y-merii to abb khair nahin
A-best of luck
Y-thx yar
IN KHANA HOUSE:-
angad-hey bhoomi ajj mujhay Goa jana hay merii photo shoot hay
B-bhai lykin main ajj nhin aa sukty aur waysay bhi merii photo shoot to kuch din bad hay na
An-ok doll jaisii tumharii merziii .......acha merii packing main help to kerwa dooo
b- okz bahi appp chalo main aaty hon ok
An-okz iam waiting (and leave)
(yahan say angad by road goa ja raha hay aur wahan say arjun............but yeh kiya arjun ki gari kay agay yeh bucha kahan say aa gaya ohhh no and usss buchay ko buchatay hoy arjun ki gari ka accident ho jata hay gari to pahar say nichay girr jaty hay per arjun pahar say hi latek jata hay and he shouts help koi hay .plz mujhay bachao
and co-incedencly angad ki gari bhi wahin say guzrtii hay and who arjun ko sun lyta hay and thanx star humaray aik hero nay humaray dosray hero ki jan bucha li)
An-hey mujhay apna hath doo
and arjun ussay apna hath day deta hay and angad save him
An- appp yahan kaisay
(phir arjun angad ko sub batata hay and says)
A-ager app ajj yahan nahin aatay to shayud main nahin buch pata....thx yar
An-its ok......appp goa main rehtay hain
A- nahin main mumbaiii main rehta hon main actually by car goa ja raha tha
An-ohhh main bhi to wahin ja raha hon....aayy main app ko goa tak lift dain don
A-ok thx yar
An-tum mujhay bar bar thx mut kahooo.......(aur angad apna hath agay berhata hay and says)friends
A-Friends (and they both huge )
IN THE CAR
Angad-yar tum nay apna name to bataya hi nahin
Arjun-han main to nahin batay per main tumhain janta hon
An-tum mujhay kaisay jantay ho
A-yar bura cheap sa sawal pocha hay
An-kyun
A- i know yar u r a rock star angad khana merii sis hay na who tumhariii bohut burii fan hay
An-aaray han ........abb to mujhay apnay baray main bataoooo
A-i m arjun Goenka
An-what ....who hi arjun goenka na jis kay baray main ayyy din newz paper main likha hota hay
A-han galty say
An -thx yar
A-kis liy
An-tum nay meriii choty sis ki jan bachaii thi
A- nahin abbb tum mujhay bar bar thx mut kehna ....tumharii sis mujhay thx keh chuki hay
An-ok yar ....aik bat bataon merii sis tumharii bohut burii fan hay ...who start say hi bizness main intrested thi but main nay ussay music per luga diya
A-yar hota hay ayssa abb jaysay main chata hon kay merii krips aik achi bizness woman bunay but nahin ussay music ka bukhar hay
An- ha ha ha.......tum kon say hotel main theroo gay
A-main ....goa beach resort main
An-wawooooooooooow main bhi to wahin ja raha hon
A-hmmm phir yeh sfer kafi acha guzernay wala hay
An-hmm kyun nahin akhir tumharay sath angad khana jo hay
A-acha!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW GUYZ THEY BOTH REACHED IN HOTEL
Arjun-ok yar subha mulakat ho gii
Angad-han raat bhi kafi ho chuki hay
A-byeeeeeeeee
An-byeeeee
IN MORNING:-
angad arjun kay room main aata hay but arjun wash room main hota hay
An-hey arjun kahn ho yar
A-main wash room main hon
An-ooooohhhh ok yar (and he lay down on arjun's bed suddenly arjun's mobile ringing and arjun angad ko kehta hay yar plz phone attend kerna )
An-ok yar (and he atend the phone ......actually main phone arjun ki kissi girl friend ka hota hay)
An-hello
arjun's gf-hi arjun darling kahan ho yar
An-arjun to wash room main hay ...........main uss ka khas dost bat ker raha hon
gf-ohhh arjun aay to ussay bata dena tina ka phone tha
An-kyun hum say bat nahin kernii
gf-nooooooo(and she cut the phone)
An-pura introduction to kerwanay diya hota phir dekhta kisay bat nahin kerty
(arjun bahir aata hay aur kehta hay)
A-kiss ka phone tha angad
An-kisi tina ka tha
A-ohhh thx GOD main nay uss ka phone attened nahin kiya really yar bilkul chipku hay
An -achaaaa.....waisay mujhay pata nahin tha kay tum bhi aysii hobbies rekhtay ho main to sumjha tha kay sirf hum jaisay rock star hi aisii hobbies rekhta hain mujhay nahin pata tha kay bizness man bhi aysay hi hotay hain
A-kyun yar hum bizness men dil nahin rekhtay
An-waysay aik bat kahoon
A-han han zaroor
An-khoob jamay gi jub mil bhetain gay diwanay do ....ho jay ajj raat ko
A-nekii aur pooch pooch
An-done
A-done
and they both are laugh ha ha ha ha (phir kiya arjun apnii meeting main aur angad apnay photo shoot main)
IN NIGHT:-
in disco
angad says 2 arjun
An-arjun do u believe in love
A-immmmmmmmmmm pehlay nahin tha per abb ....abbb shayud han ...what abt u angad
An-no main nahin kerta ... main sochta hon yeh sub bekar aur nakam logo ki aadut hay
A-nahin angad main bhi phelay aysa hi sochta tha per jub yeh ho jay na to kuch acha nahin lugta
An-waisay who kush naseeb hay kon
A-wekt annay per pata chul jay ga
An-acha phir jub who tumhain mill jay gii to tum humain kaisay yad rakho gay
A-nahin yar tum jaysay dost bhi achi destiny walo ko hi miltay hain.....lykin tumhain aik bat kahon jub tumhain piyar ho ga na tum yeh sarii batain bhool jaoo gay
An- nahin yar aysa kubhi nahin ho ga
A-lets see.
An-acha sunooo tumhain dance aata hay
A-han yar main hon bizness man but mujhay aata sub kuch hay
An-to phir ho jay
A-ho jay
(and they both dance on the song .....kiya kool hain hum)
TO BE CONTINUE.................................................... ......
gyuz hope u like all these.............
BYEEEEE TAKE CAREZ ALL

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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
plz guyz read my ff plzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Hey Pinky I read the all parts of your FF and I got very much impressed.It was beautifully written 👏 .Pls do post as soon as possible and keep up good job.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
guyz merii ff abb itnii bhi burii nahin abb main next part send nahin kernay walii
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
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hey pinky i read ur ff n ur ff is very nice ,dont stop updating ur ff ,update it soon . 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
hey pinky plz update soon seriously no kidding i have checked after every one hour hoping tht u will update since morning
so plz update real soon
ur ff rockz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
hey pinky nice writing. and by the way for a moment ur post's name surprised me coz my nick is ff n i was a lil bit shocked seeing "ff by pinky shah" 😆

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