ff by pinky shah - Page 3

hello guyz thx 4 responce
after dancing angad apnay room main chula jata hay aur arjun apnay ......and takreban 2:00 pm idher say angad ka room knock hota hay aur udher say arjun ka....... but gyyz yeh kiya bhoomi aur kripa kahan kasay aa gain....okz phelay angad kay room ki side chultay hain
IN angad's room
angad open the door and shocked
An-hey bhoomi.....tum ....yahan ...isss wekt...kaisay
B-kyun main Goa nahin aa sukty
An-nahin aysii baat nahin hay.......aaaooo ander aaoo
B-bhai main nay socha ppp ko surpriesed hi day don
An-bohut acha kiya ....gher main sub kaisay hain
B-sub A1
An-God mujhay to abhi bhi aysa lug raha hay kay main koi sapna dekh raha hon
B-bhai mujhay abhi neend aa rahi hay
An-but iss time to koi room nhain mil sukay ga aysa karo abhi tum yahin issi room main sooo jao
B-ok.........good night
An-good night doll
NOW IN ARJUN's ROOM
Arjun open the door and he is also shocked
A-krips..nahin nahin main koi sapna dekh raha hon.....merii maan mujhay supnay main bhi darana aur dhemkana nahin chora
K-kiya hoa big b its me and HAPPY BIRTH DAY.....(and she hugs arjun)
(guyz actuall main its arjun's birth day but arjun ko yad nahin kay uss ka birth day hain)
A-aarray ajj to mera birth day hain ....oooohhh thx krips...aaaooo ander aooo
K-kaisa luga mera surprised
A-iiimmmm bohut hi bhiyanak like you
K-what?????????jao main app say bat nahin kerty
A-oooohhh sorry baby main to mazak ker raha tha......meray pass bhi tumharay liy aik surprised hay
K-kiya
A-immmm abhi nahin subha batao ga
K-ok ok .....lykin kanjoos big b kul app yahan resort main mujhay party day rahay ho
A-han han bilkul....acha aj tum yahin soo jao phir kul dosra room lay lain gain okz
K-okz big b byeeeeeeeee
A-byeeeeeeeee
IN THE MORNING..........
(guyz yahan sichuation kuch gur bur hay pata hay kiya hoaaaaaaaaa.............angad subha uthta hay aur angad kay room main chula jata hay aur arjun angad kay room main... pehaly kiss room ka haal suna chahain gain ....ok pehlay chultay hay arjun ky room ki taref)
IN ARJUN's ROOM......
angad enters arjun's and sees aik lurki who bhi tawel mainand she singing the song in sweet voice....but affsos angad nay abhi tak kripa ka face nahin dekha hota...and angad thinks
An-yar yeh to who hi hotel walii lurki hay ....but yeh arjun kay room main kiya ker rahi hay aur who bhi tawel main....hmmm not bad (and angad cautch her on back side but kripa shout
K-choro mujhay(and she move and sees he is angad and she shocked and says)
K-tum yahan.....how u dare too touch me like this
An-hmmmm attitude...wooooooooow .....main nay to tumhain aik innocent si baby sumjha tha but mujhay nahin pata tha kay tum to kissi aur ki chracter ki ho....(and he cautch her hand tightly and pull her and come very nearest to kripa)
K-door raho mujh say
An-kyun meray touch kernay say tumhain kiya ho raha hay aur jo poori raat tum arjun kay saath thi who
(aur yeh kiya guyz kripa na angad ko chipka dala sorry meanz she slaps angad and says)
K-who bhai hay mera(and angad shocked)
An-what
conti.....
PEHLAY HUM ARJUN KI SITE SAY HO KER AATAH HAIN
IN ANGAD's ROOM..............
arjun enters in angad's room and he sees angad is sleeping(but but guyz u knows that yahan to bhoomi hay )....and arjun comes near 2 bed and lay down on bed with her...(she is in full of blanket so arjun ko pata hi nahin lugta kay yahan bhoomi hay kay angad)....and says
A-hey angad yar kitna sotay ho tum (and hit her)chaloo main bhi tumharay sath soo jata hon main bhi raat bher sofay per sahi terha say soo nahin suka
(and jub bhoomi ko feel hota hay kay koi iss kay sath bed per hay she shouts)
B-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
(and arjun also shout)
A-aaaaaaaaaaaaaa
B-tum yahan
A-tum yahan
(and she leaves bed and says )
B-appp ko yahan knock ker kay anna chahy tha (actually guyz she is in very short nighty and felling very shy)
A-who....who main nay sumjha angad hay
B-ok abb app yahan say jaooo
A-ok ok iam going (but suddenly arjun ka paoo balncket say atak jata hay and he fall down on bhoomi

sorry guyz ajj itni hi baki kul continue karon gi
INSHALLAH byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

thnx pinky for da update i was getting scared tht u might not update well do cont soon
rocking update 👏

gr8 ff ,ur ff is really nice pinky ,plz continue soon ,can't wait

no update 😭
pinky i'm sure like me every1's waiting desperately for u to update 😉
so do cont soon i wanna read wht happens at arjun's birthday 😉
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hey pinky plz update ur ff soon , v r waiting 4 da next part

hello guyz
iam very sorry....yahan meray pc main kuch problum ho gaya tha so sorry ....abhi mera fast hay so main ajj raat apna next part update ker don giii
and thx 4 wonderful responce....mujhay bohut khushi hoi app logo ka responce dekh ker
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😊

your fiction is really nice pinky 👏 keep writing and post soon , me waiting 😊

hello guyz thx 4 wonderful responce ....now iam updating
RECAPE:-kripa aur bhoomi goa pohunch jaty hay apnay apany bhayon ko surprised denay ......kripa arjun ko birth day wish kerty hay.......by missunderstanding arjun angad kay room main chula jata hay aur angad arjun kay ....angad kripa say budtameezi kertay hay aur kripa angad to thepaer mar dety hay.....udher arjun falls down on bhoomi...
NEXT SCENE
and dono aik dosray main kho jatay hain......but sudenly arjun ka phone bujta hay and dono hosh main aatay hain....
A-excuesme abb app choray gi mujhay...mera phone bej raha hay ager ijazet ho to main apna phone dekh loon...romence to bad main bhi ho jay ga......
B-Sorry (and uthty hay aur arjun phone sunta hoa baher chula jaat hay and bhoomi thinks)
B-hmmm sumjhta kiya hay apnay app ko....khud mujh per gira ...aur kehta hay choro mujhay jaisa main nay puker ker rakha tha .....hmmm dekh lo gi bad main..
NOW IN ARJUN's ROOM
angad says 2 kripa sorry 4 all but kripa says...
K-yeh kon sa roop tha tumhara angad ....yeh woh angad to nahin jis ki main fan thi
An-main nay kaha na sorry....jis terha say tum arjun kay room main thi koi bhi kuch bhi samjh sukta hay aur sbb her kissi ko yeh pata nahin hay kay tum arjun ki sis hoo(and janay lugta hay but arjun enter the room)
A-hey angad tum yahan aur main tumhain tumharay room main dhond raha tha....oooo iss say milo she is my lil sis kripa...pata hay kul iss nay mujhay surprised dia....ajj mera birth day hay aur mujhay hi yad nahin
An-ooohhh HAPPY BIRTH DAY yar....pary day rahay ho kay nahin
A-han yar zaroor party to hogi
An-ok waisay ajj tumharii koi meeting wegaira to nahhin hay na
A-nahin
An=to kiya khayal hay chulain phir ajj beatch per
A-Good idea yar
An-chaloo phir miltay hay beatch per(and he leaves)
ON THE BEATCH:-
charoo bohut enjoy kertay hain ....but angad thora sherminda sa hota hay aur kripa ko akelay paker aik dafa phir sorry kerta hay
An-kripa sorry again.....who mujhay bohut bura feel ho raha hay
K-its ok
An-abbb tum bhi mujh say sorry karooo
K-main aur tum say sorry .....who kyun??
An-kyun kay tum nay mujhay thepar mara ...aur angad khana kay sath kubhi koi aysaybehave nahin kerta......girlz to mujh per merty hay aur tum nay mujhay thaper hi mar diya
K-ooooo mr main unn main unn stupid girlz main say nahin hon....got it
An- got u.....tum bhi yeh mat bholo kay tum bhi merii aik fan hoo
K-galty thi who meriii
And she leaves
(bhoomi ko abhi tak nahin pata kay ajj arjun ka BD hay...sham main angad bhoomi ko batata hay kay ajj party hay)
An-hey doll tum abhi tak tiyar nahin hoi
B-kyun bhai ajj kiya hay??
An-arjun ka BD hay aur uss nay humain party bhi di hay
B-oooo bhai mujhay pehlay to batatay...main koi gift hi lay lety
An-ooohhh DONT WORRIED ....tum arjun say excuse ker lyna...ok
B-ok bhai....main bus abhi tayar ho ker aatti hon
IN THE PARTY:-
TO BE CONTINUE

sorry guyz abhi itni hi baki kuch dair main send kerty hon
ok byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😊

awesome yaar 👏
do cont soon 😉 😛 😊
i was abt to comment on ur update earlier but i think u know abt Pakistan n' loadshading