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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
hey pinky ,again ur ff is gr8, plz post da next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
hello guyz thx 4 inna changa responce 😉 😉 😉
now iam updaiting
IN THE PARTY:-
bhoomi wishs to arjun and says...
B-HAAPPY BIRTH DAY arjun ...sorry main tumharay liy koi gift nahin la suki ...who bhai nay mujhay abhi thori dair pehlay hi bataya....sorry
A-its ok bhuvrii...
B-hay.....yeh bhuvrii kon hay
A-app..main app ko bhuvrii keh sukta hon
B-han ,,,,but bura hi ajeeb name hay
A-ohhhh thx bhuvrii g...(but suddenly kripa aty hay and says)
K-hello kiya ho raha hay ....kiya batain chul rahin hain
A-kuch nahin bus tumharii kumi thi
K-big b app kuch ziada hi nahin boltay....dekh lo bhoomika iss liy kehtay hain kay innn bhayon ko na ziada ser per nahin cherhatay(suddenly angad comes n says)
An-aayy lurki merii sis ko bherka rahi ho
K-g nahin main to sirf itna keh rahin thi kay cake kub cut kerna hay jum saray guest chulain jain gain???
A-ohh chaloo cake cut kurtain hain
B-ok chalooo
And arjun cut the cake ...and that they dance on (kitnay arman from himesh)...and bohut enjoy kertay hay....jub party finished hoty hay charo parking launch main aatay hay and kripa says
K-waoooow angad nice car hmmm red farariiii (but suddenly bhoomi says 2 kripa)
B-car say kuch nahin hota chulanay walay main dum hona chahy
K-choro bhoomi jaisay meray big b
B-merii nazer main meray bhai say achi car koi nahin chula sukta
K-to jo jay race
B-han ...but....main tumharay bhai kay sath rahn gi aur tum meray
K-done
Arjun says to angad
A-yar yeh hum dono ko phusa to nahin rahi
An-yar waysay maza aayy ga
A-ok
phir kiya arjun bhoomi kay sath apni sar main aur angad kripa kay sath apni car main
Angad says to arjun
An-yar lykin yeh rasta kahan ko jata hay mujhay maloom nahin
A- amloom to mujhay bhi nahin per dekhtay hain
An-ok
and they both start the car...........
to be continue.........
Precape.....arjun aur bhoomi agay nikel jay gain and angad ki car out of way ho ker kharab ho jay gii
ok guyz hope u like it
byeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
nice update 👏
da precap sounds nice 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
gr8 update 👏 ,plz update da next part soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
plz read it yar ....kia app logon ko pasand nahin aa rahi yah ff 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
hi guyz iam back
now iam updating.............
dono car start kertay hain .....bhoomi aur arjun ki car to agay nikel jaty hay aur angad short cut lynay kay chuker main out of way ho jata hay ..........pehlay app angad ka hall sunain
in angad's car....
K-dekha mera bhai humesha agay rehta hay....
An-acha!!!!theek speed say kuch nahin ho ga abb angad tujhay short cut lyna puray ga (and he change the way)
K-angad yeh kahan lay ker ja rahay....humain inn rastoo ka sahi say pata nahin hay
An-tum na apni chonch bund rakho yeh short cut hay
K-angad nahin main nay kaaha na wapis chalooo....yeh galat rusta hay
An-tum chup rahooo werna yahin utar don ga sumjhin
k-ager hum kho gay na to main ...main tumhain nahin choron giii....
An-kripa i said stopit(lykin yeh kiya car ko kiya hoaaaaaaa.....yeh kyun ruk gai)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
k-angad iss car ko abb kiya hoaaaaaaaaaaa
An-tum chup nahin reh sukty...1 min main dekhta hon(and angad car say nichay uterta hay and he open the bonit
An-ooohh shit ,,,,,
K-kiya tumhari is lal dulhan ko
An-aaayyy merii car kay baray main kubhi kuch nahin bolna sumjhin....kuch nahin hoa bus becharii ko thorii pias lugii hay
K-acha ...abbb itnii sunsan jagha per tumhari is car kay liy pani kahn say aay ga(and he hit on the car)
An-ayyyy merii car ko hath bhi mat lugana 😡 😡
K-hath nahin lugaya pair say mara hay kahoo to aik aur 😛 😛 😛
An-kripa main keh raha hon sudher jaoo....aysa karoo tum yahin rukoo main pani ka intazam ker kay aata hon
K-nahin main bhi chalon giiiii
An-chup chap yahn beth jao werna main tumhain iss ghunay jungle main chor don ga...aur kissi ko kano kan khaber bhi nahin ho giii
K-ok ok but plzzzzzzzzz juldy anna
An-ok (and he leaves)
kripa becharii akelii wahan angad ka wait ker rahi hoty hay but suddenly wahan aik jeep aa ker rukty hay...jis main kuch mawalii type gumday motay say admii hotain hay aur unho nay kafii drunk bhi kiya hota hay...
unhi main say aik mota ...kala...bhuda sa admii kripa ka hath pukerta hay n says
Man-aaay hyyyyy aik to farariii uper say sath free aik lurkii kurariii....kyun kiya hoa janyman yahan kyun khurii ho aooo humaray sath
K-aaayyyy motay bhalo door reh mujh sayy .....tujh main say visky ki smell aa rahi hay..tum jantay nahin main kon hon...ager meray bhai ko pata lug gaya na kay tum nay mujhay touch kiya hay to who tumharay yeh motay motay hath kat day ga
Man-aaayyy hyyyy nukhray ...wah
K-shout angad angad kahan ho tum plz help meeeee
man-kyun angad tera bhaii hay
aik dum heroo sahab pichay say enter hotain hain
and says
An-ooooyyyyy meriidunya main aik kay ilawa koi behan nahin sumjhay.....abey yar moon acha nahin hay to bat hi achi ker looooooo...shub shub bolo
Man-oooohhhhh to tu hay angad
An-g han gulty say.....abay yar iss kay pichay kyun apna time west ker rahay hoo...meray pass iss say achi achi lurkiyan hain 😉 😉 😉
nahin yar humain to yah hi chahy...and he touch kripa and angad's car
An-yar issay touch kerna hay to karoo lykin meriiicar ko nahin
Man-ok yar tu aysa ker apni car lay aur ja plzzzzzzzzzzz
An-ok n he sits and start the car
kripa agay burhaty hay and says
K-angad mujhay chor ker kahan ja rahay hoo...plz angad aysa mat karoo in janglion kay pass mujhay akela chor ker mat jaoooo 😭
angad ignore the kripa and start the car.........and becharii kripa ussay jatay hoy dekhty rehty hay......who gunda agay burhata hay .....kripa bechariiii to shocked si angad ki car ko jatay hoy dekhty rehtii ...but angad ki car kuch door ja ker ruk jaty hay...aur angad car say uter ker nazdeek atta hay...kripa apna hath chura ker angad kay pichay chup jaty hay...and angad says to bad men
An-yar kiya karon issay main chor ker nahin ja sukta...iss liy app iss kripa per kripa ferma ker aram say chulay jaoo
but unn main say aik man agay berhata hay and he hit on angad's face
An-abbey star kay face per dag luga diya abb nahin bachoo gay.....and he fight with men
to be continue.................
ok guyz hope u like it
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
hello guyz
plz read it na plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
oh!! i just read all the parts of ur fan fic...... and i would say that its awesome and superb.......really ur doin a good job......the ff is really nice....and its sums up to double masti... wid An-K and A-B.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
gr8,suberp,excellent,awesome,.....etc 👏 . ur ff is very nice pinky ,post da next part soon

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