update for 6th October

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Posted: 19 years ago
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trying to do this for the 1st time, so xcuseme if it's not that gud

the episode starts with mansen saying" manasvi aaj tumhare Devar aur bhumika jo pehle is ghar ki naukrani thi aur ab hamare is ghar ki bahu ban chuki hai, unhone bhi jo faisla kiya hai usse zara dekho"the camera is on arjun and bhumi walking inside the house , arjun is holding khushi

mansen says" aaj tumne pehli baar dimaag se kaam liya hai arjun"

arjun replies" baat jab apno ki ho aur apno ki feelings ki ho to faisle dimaag se nahi dil se liye jaate hain aur maine bhi vahi kiya"

kushal mama, mansen and yuvraj leave the house

mansavi runs towards khushi and hugs her . then she takes by her hand and says to every1" aaj se meri beti bhi is ghar ki member hai or something like that"

then manasvi is in her room with khushi and tells her" yeh hamara room hai"

kushi says" satya uncle kab aayenge"

arjun walks in with bhumi behind her(these days she is wearing gud suits) and saya" satya uncle aayenge bahut jaldi, voh bahut dur gaye hai wapas aa jayenge"

khushi: " voh mere liye bahut saare toys laane waale the

arjun: unhone mujhe laane ko kaha tha

khushi: aur chocolates bhi

arjun: haan voh bhi aur satya tumhare uncle nahi hain , papa hain

manasvi tumhari aunty nahi mummy hai

aur satya tumhare

khushi: papa hain mujhe pata hai

bhumi then leaves with khushi to introduce her to every1 in the family

arjun says bhabhi aaj bumika ki zid kaam aa hi gayi usne aaj anaathaalye waloon ko convince kar hi liya khushi ke liye

mansavi says tum dono ne satya ki iccha puri kar kar bahut accha kiya and she stars cryig on his arjun's shoulder

Break

bavri walks in

bhavri: arjun pata hai khushi ke aane se bade dadaji bhi bahut khush hai,

baisa aur dadaji to usse chod hi nahi rahe the

baisa usse kahani suna rahi thi to voh vahi so gayi abhi usse manasvi bhabhi ke paas chod kar aayi hoon

manasvi bhabi ne mujh se maafi mangi apne bure bartaav ke liye

when she is talking arjun keeps looking at her, that was a different look( thoda sa pyaar ke ehsaas hone laga hai shayad)

then she realises that arjun is just looking at her not listening to what she was saying

she asks what happened

he replies that thankyou tumhari wajeh se aaj manasvi bhabhi ko unki khushi mil gayi but bhumi says it was because of you you convinced them

they hug each other and bhumi says aaj bahut dino baadh aaj mujhe is tarah tum se baat karne ka mauka mila hai

arjun says haan aaj bahut dino ke baadh acche se neendh aayegi

par phir kal ek aur tension

bhavri says kal ke liye aaj ko kyun barbaadh karen

he then says kal hamari shaadi ko do mahine pure ho jaayenge

bhavri: arjunji agar aap watch dekhen to do mahine pure ho chuke hain aur teesra mahina shuru ho gaya hai

arjun looks around for a watch

he then says jo mangna hai mango

bhavri: kal ke din suraj ji se koi an ban nahi

arjun: (angry) suraj ji voh kisi manya izzat ke layak nahi hai

bhavri is quite and he looks at her and says sorry

Bhavri: abhi to dinshuru hua hai abhi say sorry

arjun: to main kya tum se ladne ke bahane dhoondhta rehta hoon

bhavri just looks at her pointing a fibger towards him

he laughs

arjun: aaj bhabhi ko khush dekh kar accha laga

bhavri:ek aurat ke liye ma ban na bahut sukh ka ehsaas hota hai aur aaj voh ehsaas mansavi bhabhi ke chere par dikh raha tha

arjun smiles and walks away

bhavri thinks: main bhi ma ban ne ka ehsaas karna chahti hoon

BREAK

keshav and arjun r discussing about why did mansen give permision for khushi's adoption, he could have brought suraj to heritage house without that also , nobody would have stopped him

i think both these things (mansen's permission for khushi's adoption and suraj's adoption by mansen) r related

arjun says agrees

bhumi is thinking

kushal, mansen and yuvraj are talking

yuvraj asks why u had to agree for bringing khushi to this house

he says : suraj ki yahi chahta tha

aur main janta hoon suraj ke is ghar mein aane se sab se zyada tum( yuvraj) hi khush hoge.

aur raha khushi ka sawaal to padi rahegi ghar ke kissi kone mein jaise yeh baaki log pade rehte hai

suraj ko main khudh lene jaaonga aur kal uske swagat ki tayari ho jaani chahiye

Kushal: jija suraj ke aane ke baadh yeh log do mahine to kya ek mahin ya phir pandrah din bhi reh jaaye is ghar mein to bahut abdi baat hai

ab to kanhaiya hi bachaye siddhant ke parivaar ko

bhumi comes doen to the hall and is thinkingabout what keshav said

lord krishna (LK):tum soch rahi ho bhumi jo tumhare bas mein nahi hai kyuni tum dimaag se nahi dil se kaam leti ho

bhumi:arjun aur keshav bhaiya kitna sochte hai main kyunnahi smajh paa rahi

LK:bhagwan ne jo tatvarjun aur keshav ko diya hai voh tumhe bhi diya hai bhumi jise dimaag kehte hain uska istemaal karo

bhumi: kahi suraj ji ne mansavi bhabhi ke liye to nahi yeh sab kiya, par ab mainkya karun , mujhe kuch karna hi hoga

LK:bhumi jo kuch karogi tum hi karogi, yahi tumhari niyati hai

camera freezes on bhumi

PRECAP for Monday:

mansen asks suraj to come to heritage house, suraj enters and says" main is ghar ke sab logon ko batana chahta hoon ki maine satya ki hatya nahi ki"

mansavi and arjun look at him

arjun tells suraj" udhar ki zindagi kab tak jeeoge"

Suraj replies" is udhari mein tum bhi hisedaar ho"

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Nankri thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏That was a nice attempt. Keep it up Alvina👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
hey thanx for the update! Aww...Arjun and Bhoomi...i miss their cute scenes together! :D:D
this was a great debut at riting a rvw! :D

And newkidontheblock...since we're not allowed to comment on the videos page..and i think ive PMd u enuf so that ur prolli sick of that now...but ill say thanx for the videos here. :D
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oops...alvina, i didn't know u had posted the update. i posted mine as well. 😆 anyway, it's ok... 😊

nice update.. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thankx for appreciating my effort
well i was so eager to write after i saw the episode, i couldn't control myself
actually i even saw the repeat telecast
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh well i saw the repeat too i will post d video link soon 😊

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