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Anuradha thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
ok ok, im too tired...

I will write for younger sis, younger bro and frnd tomoro 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: filmi_chick99

tum usko to badi bahen kahti ho..lekin tumhara chhoti baheno ki kya hogi??

Tanisha, just out of curiosity..how come each post of yours is posted twice in every thread?😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
Guys All of u great poetry

good job to all a round of appaluse

priya never knew u liked poetry till now great

Ok i luv poetry as well and will write as well: (internship keeps me busy usually and other things)

I will share a poem that touched me soon
Edited by teenindia_usa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
Posting this poem since touched me:

GUESS_GALLERY/AHMED WROTE:
4 all
Members of indain forums

Duniya shahid hame bhula chuki hai,
>Kahi tum log bhi mujhe bhula na doge,
>Bas apnao se meri faryad ab yahi hai,
>Duriya hamare beech ab kitni bhi ajaye,
>Meri zindagi tum log ke bin adhuri hai...
>
>Tanhaiyoun me tum jab kabhi doob jaoge,
>Apne is dost ko tum apne yaado me paoge,
>Kabhi humse milne ki tamanna dil me jageh,
>To muskurakar bas ek baar aasmaan ko dekho,
>Qasam se apne dosti ki tasweer waha bhi paoge...
>
Edited by teenindia_usa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: teenindia_usa

Posting this poem since touched me:

GUESS_GALLERY/AHMED WROTE: 4 all
Members of indain forums

Duniya shahid hame bhula chuki hai,
>Kahi tum log bhi mujhe bhula na doge,
>Bas apnao se meri faryad ab yahi hai,
>Duriya hamare beech ab kitni bhi ajaye,
>Meri zindagi tum log ke bin adhuri hai...
>
>Tanhaiyoun me tum jab kabhi doob jaoge,
>Apne is dost ko tum apne yaado me paoge,
>Kabhi humse milne ki tamanna dil me jageh,
>To muskurakar bas ek baar aasmaan ko dekho,
>Qasam se apne dosti ki tasweer waha bhi paoge...
>

omg bhaiya it is spectacular👏

aap ka indar bhagwan na wo gift dali hain bhaiya jis sa aap shabdo ko asa bun sak tha hain ki jis ki mehak dorh dorh tak phala

thank you for sharing such a great art of yours with us bhaiya

and miss you a lot bhaiya😭😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: teenindia_usa

Posting this poem since touched me:


GUESS_GALLERY/AHMED WROTE: 4 all
Members of indain forums

Duniya shahid hame bhula chuki hai,
>Kahi tum log bhi mujhe bhula na doge,
>Bas apnao se meri faryad ab yahi hai,
>Duriya hamare beech ab kitni bhi ajaye,
>Meri zindagi tum log ke bin adhuri hai...
>
>Tanhaiyoun me tum jab kabhi doob jaoge,
>Apne is dost ko tum apne yaado me paoge,
>Kabhi humse milne ki tamanna dil me jageh,
>To muskurakar bas ek baar aasmaan ko dekho,
>Qasam se apne dosti ki tasweer waha bhi paoge...
>



Message for GG bhaiyah:

doosriyaan aur fasle, insaan ko kareeb laati hain...
door ho phir bhi, yaadon mein aapka naam hain...
yehi hain ek behan ki dua rab se ki,
door kyun na ho bhai mere,
khush rahe hamesha, yehi hain dua rab se...


Edited by ans24us1 - 19 years ago
advil thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67

Wow GG,

Good one !!👏👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: adi_0112

Okay guys..

I am not a poet like you all..neither can i express myself with words..but I had wriiten it for someone close to my heart once when i was missing her ..here it is :😳

One bright sunny morning

You went through a lot of pain

To bring me into this world

Have nurtured me, cared for me since then.

You sat up all night

Took care of me night and day

Been with me at every step

Gave me the joys and took my pains away.

When I laughed at things

You laughed louder with me

When I cried of unhappiness

You cried a lot more than me

When I got hurt or fell sick

You nursed me day and night

When I got into any trouble

You protected me with all your might

When I got hurt at times

You definitely felt the pain

When I had any troubles

You came and took away all the strain

You taught me over the years

To differentiate right from wrong

You taught me how to face my life

How to be nice, how to be strong

You are my guiding factor

I am glad of our special rapport

You are the best my dearest mom

You are my one and only life support

😳😳😳



Ur Moms a very lucky lady...... But yes Moms are our LIfe support arent they.

A quiver in my voice she knows,
A silent tear in my eyes she knows,
A sorrow in my heart she knows,
She knows the ache in the mind....

I come home in the evening
A glimpse of her smile
takes away the worries of the world....

She is ailing herself...
Her knees hurt... Her heart is weak...
But they hurt more... when her dear is sufferning...

She sees us in the door....
A glimpse of our tired face....
A silent prayer passes her mind...
A quiet smile on her face
And Lo behold... Her smile drives away our pain...
And our smile makes her pain go away... just for that moment..
She lives that moment for me everyday.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: teenindia_usa

Posting this poem since touched me:

GUESS_GALLERY/AHMED WROTE:
4 all
Members of indain forums

Duniya shahid hame bhula chuki hai,
>Kahi tum log bhi mujhe bhula na doge,
>Bas apnao se meri faryad ab yahi hai,
>Duriya hamare beech ab kitni bhi ajaye,
>Meri zindagi tum log ke bin adhuri hai...
>
>Tanhaiyoun me tum jab kabhi doob jaoge,
>Apne is dost ko tum apne yaado me paoge,
>Kabhi humse milne ki tamanna dil me jageh,
>To muskurakar bas ek baar aasmaan ko dekho,
>Qasam se apne dosti ki tasweer waha bhi paoge...
>

wow very nice one 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: s.priya


A quiver in my voice she knows,
A silent tear in my eyes she knows,
A sorrow in my heart she knows,
She knows the ache in the mind....

I come home in the evening
A glimpse of her smile
takes away the worries of the world....

She is ailing herself...
Her knees hurt... Her heart is weak...
But they hurt more... when her dear is sufferning...

She sees us in the door....
A glimpse of our tired face....
A silent prayer passes her mind...
A quiet smile on her face
And Lo behold... Her smile drives away our pain...
And our smile makes her pain go away... just for that moment..
She lives that moment for me everyday.......

Priya,

amazing...just too good..wow!!! just a few sentences..but they sum up the light of our lives... great job..👏👏👏

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