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Originally posted by: SmarterDesiKid

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CHILDHOOD (by SDK)

Suny,

Good poem !!! very well written..👏👍🏼

A step closer to god..

A lost world,

No seeming direction,

Just a path,

A path that trembles along its course,

I still follow it,

Seeing only a beam of light,

Yes, it is you god,

It is you behind that beam of light,

Who signals my direction,

And in my heart it is you god,

So, how could I fail?

How could I decieve you?

That beam of light

Drops clear on me,

Leaving me bewildered,

The path that I was walking on,

Goes ahead and divides into two,

One leads to the path of a good person,

The other leads to fulfilling that broken wish,

My heartbeat becomes still,

My pulse becomes slow,

I look up into that light,

And once again I see god's face,

I see it as it appears in my imagination,

Those words I said ring in my ears:

"In my heart it is you god,

So, how could I fail?

How could I decieve you, god?"

Moving slowly, I walk ahead,

And choose the path to follow my faith,

The path that teaches me to be a good person,

And as I move on...

My destination relects at me..

As being a step closer to god.....

-Nikita aka ~Nikki

Hi guys, i would appreciate if you guys could leave some insight on my poetry.

Originally posted by: ~Nikki

A step closer to god..

A lost world,

No seeming direction,

Just a path,

A path that trembles along its course,

I still follow it,

Seeing only a beam of light,

Yes, it is you god,

It is you behind that beam of light,

Who signals my direction,

And in my heart it is you god,

So, how could I fail?

How could I decieve you?

That beam of light

Drops clear on me,

Leaving me bewildered,

The path that I was walking on,

Goes ahead and divides into two,

One leads to the path of a good person,

The other leads to fulfilling that broken wish,

My heartbeat becomes still,

My pulse becomes slow,

I look up into that light,

And once again I see god's face,

I see it as it appears in my imagination,

Those words I said ring in my ears:

"In my heart it is you god,

So, how could I fail?

How could I decieve you, god?"

Moving slowly, I walk ahead,

And choose the path to follow my faith,

The path that teaches me to be a good person,

And as I move on...

My destination relects at me..

As being a step closer to god.....

-Nikita aka ~Nikki

Hi guys, i would appreciate if you guys could leave some insight on my poetry, i would appreciate it.

Good poem 😊

👏👏

You have a good poetic sense

and i liked ur poem

Originally posted by: desi.babe

baethae hei hum
inderdhanush kae talae
thaak chukae hein
sonae ka pyaala
dhondtein dhondtein
uper dekhtein dhektein
itni neechein sae




loge kehtein hein
humnae apnae supno ko
bhula diya..
itna bura bhi nahi hei
in inderdhanushi rango ko
dekhna....



usss sonae ki khaan
ko pana hamarein leyein
zarori nahi...
humnae jo paa li
iss naayaab khaan ko


dost or unki muhabbat
hamaree rahoo ko
rangeen banati hein
ek roshni dekhaati hei
jasae heerein sae niklee
ho ek roshni ki chamak


isleyein hum yahi
bethaegein apnae inderdhanush
kae talae....
maza leigein in leharoo kaa
jaantein hein hum
yeh kahi nahi jaayeigee
humae chode ker....

( dis iz ma original so no laughing pleaz)😳

wonderful poem desibsbe 😊