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Posted: 19 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

Now I completed reading all poems, wonderful Vinayak, Priya, Anuradha, Adi, GG, mohinih, Amzy and Raghav. Nice poems. Jaya bhi kucch likhne wali hain.

Jadoo ji, please aap daaliye kuch..

Even a novice like me attmpted.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Jaadoogar

Now I completed reading all poems, wonderful Vinayak, Priya, Anuradha, Adi, GG, mohinih, Amzy and Raghav. Nice poems. Jaya bhi kucch likhne wali hain.

Maine kabhi poem nahi likha...😕 Mujhe aap logo ki tarah likhna nahi aata...😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: jayc1234

Maine kabhi poem nahi likha...😕 Mujhe aap logo ki tarah likhna nahi aata...😭

Jaya,

If I can , what makes u think u cant..even i dont believe ki i ever manged to write any at all...😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: adi_0112

Jaya,

If I can , what makes u think u cant..even i dont believe ki i ever manged to write any at all...😕

Arre - you have not realised but you write really well Adi...😃 Even your translation for 'Se amar chhoto bon' is terrific...😳

Let me be the reader here.. padhne wala bhi koi chahiye na...😆 If someday I write something, I promise I will dig-up this thread from anywhere and post it....😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: mohinih

Good night everybody

Mere dil ke zillion pieces banake good night karke ja rahi hain mohini...??

Aana raakhi bhandne.. mei tujhe gift dene se raha...😭😆

Pyar ko khokar bhi hum pyar mein jit jayenge.. 👍🏼

Edited by adi_0112 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
Gr88 poems vinayak and priya ji keep up the good work👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: adi_0112

Okay guys..

I am not a poet like you all..neither can i express myself with words..but I had wriiten it for someone close to my heart once when i was missing her ..here it is :😳

One bright sunny morning

You went through a lot of pain

To bring me into this world

Have nurtured me, cared for me since then.

You sat up all night

Took care of me night and day

Been with me at every step

Gave me the joys and took my pains away.

When I laughed at things

You laughed louder with me

When I cried of unhappiness

You cried a lot more than me

When I got hurt or fell sick

You nursed me day and night

When I got into any trouble

You protected me with all your might

When I got hurt at times

You definitely felt the pain

When I had any troubles

You came and took away all the strain

You taught me over the years

To differentiate right from wrong

You taught me how to face my life

How to be nice, how to be strong

You are my guiding factor

I am glad of our special rapport

You are the best my dearest mom

You are my one and only life support

😳😳😳

Awwwww such a lovely poem adi anna👏

Its very touching😊

App toh chupe rustam nikle😛

Edited by livingforce - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: livingforce

Awwwww such a lovely poem adi anna👏

Its very touching😊

App toh chupe rustam nikle😛

Thank u Chhote..😳 .. bus ek do bar ho jata hain..😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wonderful poem by all of them 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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In aankhon mein bhi kuch baat hain,
jo dil mein hain dikhti hain aankhon mein,
Khushi ho dil mein toh dikhti hain nami,
Dard ho dil mein toh bhi dikhti hain nami..

Aankhon mein yeh aansun dikhe,

ab yeh khushi ya ho ya dard,

Dil ki awaz ko suno, tumhe pata chalega,

yeh khushi hain ya gum

Edited by ans24us1 - 19 years ago

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