Want to share A Poem

My co-memebers i read this poem liked it ,so posting it.

read if u r intrested in poems and do not read if u r not.I don't want any comments for just making fun of this poem .Positive criticism is welcomed.

Moderators can close this if thy think it is useless ,but don't ban me plz. 😆

If someone like it thy can copy it ,as there is no copyright 😆

Here it goes:

zindgi se mile zakhmon ko hi

jeene ka bahaana bana lene mein

kya jaata hai

har roz mout ke khaab saja lena bhi

kahaan humein aata hai

maangne par bhi jab mout milti nahiin

toh aasao seen se lagaaye

jiye jaane mein kya jaata hai

pyaar ki talaash mein bhatak raha hoon

is manzar se us se manzar

thokhar hi khaane ko miltee hai

har darr har manzar

har kadam par jhulse hain apne khaab yahaan

is patthar dil duniyaa ki bhatti mein

par khaabon ke shav uthaye ghoomne se kya faayda

jalte khaabon ko dekh ashq bahaana

bhi humein kahaan ata hai

zindigi se mile zakhom ko hi jeene ka

bahaana ban alene mein kya jaata hai

har dard chhipaaye baithen hai

tahon mein seene ki

har aah dabaye mein

galiyaaron mein apne mann ki

jab jab sahra maangna chahe kisi se

wahii humein khushiyan batorne chale aate hain

muskan bikher unke hothon par

bojh toh halka hota hai magar

kisse kahein ki in zakhom se

bilakhnaa

ab aur saha nahiin jaata hai

zaindgi se mile zakhmon ...

plz. reply if u liked it 😊

awwwwwwww... its a very nice poem... 👏 liked it alottt 😛

Vinayak, Thanks for sharing this poem. Who has written this poem? Badi gamgeen kavita hai 😭 😭. God bless the writer if he is really feeling like that. But it is a great literary piece👏

Originally posted by: SmarterDesiKid

GREAT!!!! 👏 👏 👏

yeah 👏👏

Beautiful Poem.

Why dont members who write poems share them here in the forum?

Wont that be nice.

We had a poetry contest in IF sometime back and here is something that I had written there.

Aaj ki subah ki baath hi kuch aur thi....
aaj suraj shayad pachim se nikla ho...
aur phir chaand bhi aaj din mein aasmaan mein chaya hai...
Aaj ki din ki baath hi kuch aur hai...

Buzurgon se nazaren churakar, woh nighahon ka ishara...
Buzurgon ki nazron se bachke, woh haathon ka sparsh...
Bachon ki kilkaliyon se door, woh hoton ki chuban...
Aur phir Haathon mein chudiyon ki kilkariyan....Hai.. Aaj ki subah ki baath hi kuch aur thi...

Aaj main bani aurat se maa...
Aaj meri goodh mein aaya ek nanha phool...
Jo humari duniya mein khushiyaan le aaya...
Aur laya woh pyaar ka woh suhana ehsaas...

I am sure many of us here write poetry here. Why dont we share them here.

gr8 poems..Vinayak and Priya..

👏

Originally posted by: s.priya

Beautiful Poem.

Why dont members who write poems share them here in the forum?

Wont that be nice.

We had a poetry contest in IF sometime back and here is something that I had written there.

Aaj ki subah ki baath hi kuch aur thi....
aaj suraj shayad pachim se nikla ho...
aur phir chaand bhi aaj din mein aasmaan mein chaya hai...
Aaj ki din ki baath hi kuch aur hai...

Buzurgon se nazaren churakar, woh nighahon ka ishara...
Buzurgon ki nazron se bachke, woh haathon ka sparsh...
Bachon ki kilkaliyon se door, woh hoton ki chuban...
Aur phir Haathon mein chudiyon ki kilkariyan....Hai.. Aaj ki subah ki baath hi kuch aur thi...

Aaj main bani aurat se maa...
Aaj meri goodh mein aaya ek nanha phool...
Jo humari duniya mein khushiyaan le aaya...
Aur laya woh pyaar ka woh suhana ehsaas...

I am sure many of us here write poetry here. Why dont we share them here.

great poem ,Priya ji 👏 👏

Lovely poem priya didi and vinay

vinay kya baat hai yaar itne se hokar itni achchi kavita u deserve an applause 👏

sorry for the delay due to my irritatting net

I will post a poem I wrote for my first love 😊 ..

When I look into your innocent eyes,
The woman inside me cries,
Throws me right into your arms,
Fascinated by your charms,
I am involved in u intensely,
I flicker, emotionaly, mentally,
whether to trust u or not,
But all the care u show me,
enrolls me, compells me,
to THINK about u..

Originally posted by: raghav2009

I will post a poem I wrote for my first love 😊 ..

When I look into your innocent eyes,
The woman inside me cries,
Throws me right into your arms,
Fascinated by your charms,
I am involved in u intensely,
I flicker, emotionaly, mentally,
whether to trust u or not,
But all the care u show me,
enrolls me, compells me,
to THINK about u..

wow hou sweet nd romantic 😉 😊

great 👏