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Okay guys..

I am not a poet like you all..neither can i express myself with words..but I had wriiten it for someone close to my heart once when i was missing her ..here it is :😳

One bright sunny morning

You went through a lot of pain

To bring me into this world

Have nurtured me, cared for me since then.

You sat up all night

Took care of me night and day

Been with me at every step

Gave me the joys and took my pains away.

When I laughed at things

You laughed louder with me

When I cried of unhappiness

You cried a lot more than me

When I got hurt or fell sick

You nursed me day and night

When I got into any trouble

You protected me with all your might

When I got hurt at times

You definitely felt the pain

When I had any troubles

You came and took away all the strain

You taught me over the years

To differentiate right from wrong

You taught me how to face my life

How to be nice, how to be strong

You are my guiding factor

I am glad of our special rapport

You are the best my dearest mom

You are my one and only life support

😳😳😳

Originally posted by: adi_0112

Okay guys..

I am not a poet like you all..neither can i express myself with words..but I had wriiten it for someone close to my heart once when i was missing her ..here it is :😳

One bright sunny morning

You went through a lot of pain

To bring me into this world

Have nurtured me, cared for me since then.

You sat up all night

Took care of me night and day

Been with me at every step

Gave me the joys and took my pains away.

When I laughed at things

You laughed louder with me

When I cried of unhappiness

You cried a lot more than me

When I got hurt or fell sick

You nursed me day and night

When I got into any trouble

You protected me with all your might

When I got hurt at times

You definitely felt the pain

When I had any troubles

You came and took away all the strain

You taught me over the years

To differentiate right from wrong

You taught me how to face my life

How to be nice, how to be strong

You are my guiding factor

I am glad of our special rapport

You are the best my dearest mom

You are my one and only life support

😳😳😳

Who said you are not a poet... 😊 What an expressive poem... You made my eyes wet... 👏

Wonderful poem bhaiyah 🤗

Sorry, couldn stop quoting it... 😊

Originally posted by: ans24us1

Who said you are not a poet... 😊 What an expressive poem... You made my eyes wet... 👏

Wonderful poem bhaiyah 🤗

Sorry, couldn stop quoting it... 😊

Thanks,Anu.😳😳

🤗🤗

Originally posted by: DAISYRABLE

Wow Adi who said u cant express urself with words....tht's so nice n sweet ....👏 👏 👏

My hand freezes up when i try writing something...probably when i am not thinking ..it comes out..

I cant even write a decent resume or a letter...

Originally posted by: adi_0112

My hand freezes up when i try writing something...probably when i am not thinking ..it comes out..

I cant even write a decent resume or a letter...

Dil se nikli huyi har baat jab express hoti hain toh this becomes beautiful...

awwwwwwww..... cho chweet poem Adi bhaiya 😳 😳 😳 👏

Itna time kahan se milta hai bhai?😕

Originally posted by: vinayaktyagi

My co-memebers i read this poem liked it ,so posting it.

read if u r intrested in poems and do not read if u r not.I don't want any comments for just making fun of this poem .Positive criticism is welcomed.

Moderators can close this if thy think it is useless ,but don't ban me plz. 😆

If someone like it thy can copy it ,as there is no copyright 😆

Here it goes:

zindgi se mile zakhmon ko hi

jeene ka bahaana bana lene mein

kya jaata hai

har roz mout ke khaab saja lena bhi

kahaan humein aata hai

maangne par bhi jab mout milti nahiin

toh aasao seen se lagaaye

jiye jaane mein kya jaata hai

pyaar ki talaash mein bhatak raha hoon

is manzar se us se manzar

thokhar hi khaane ko miltee hai

har darr har manzar

har kadam par jhulse hain apne khaab yahaan

is patthar dil duniyaa ki bhatti mein

par khaabon ke shav uthaye ghoomne se kya faayda

jalte khaabon ko dekh ashq bahaana

bhi humein kahaan ata hai

zindigi se mile zakhom ko hi jeene ka

bahaana ban alene mein kya jaata hai

har dard chhipaaye baithen hai

tahon mein seene ki

har aah dabaye mein

galiyaaron mein apne mann ki

jab jab sahra maangna chahe kisi se

wahii humein khushiyan batorne chale aate hain

muskan bikher unke hothon par

bojh toh halka hota hai magar

kisse kahein ki in zakhom se

bilakhnaa

ab aur saha nahiin jaata hai

zaindgi se mile zakhmon ...

plz. reply if u liked it 😊

Akele aaye thee hum duniya mein
Akele jaayenge hum duniya se
pata nahin, kitne din ki hain yeh zindagi,
do din ho ya do hazaar,

apni zindagi mein,
pyaar karna seekho
rishtey nibhane seekho
karm karna seekho
yehi toh hain ek poonji zindagi ki
kyunki aakhir mein chahiye
sirf 6 foot ki zameen...

Hum le jaayenge
sirf yeh pyaar,
yeh dua,
yeh rishtey...
woh yaadein...
woh kuch seekh zindagi ke,

agar yeh nahin kiya,
toh hamare baad hamein yaad karne waala koi na hoga
rone waala koi na hoga...

Royenge toh sirf hamare paise, kyunki ho gaye hain woh anath

Originally posted by: vinit_fan

awwwwwwww..... cho chweet poem Adi bhaiya 😳 😳 😳 👏

Thanku Meetu..😳😳😳

Originally posted by: ans24us1

Akele aaye thee hum duniya mein
Akele jaayenge hum duniya se
pata nahin, kitne din ki hain yeh zindagi,
do din ho ya do hazaar,

apni zindagi mein,
pyaar karna seekho
rishtey nibhane seekho
karm karna seekho
yehi toh hain ek poonji zindagi ki
kyunki aakhir mein chahiye
sirf 6 foot ki zameen...

Hum le jaayenge
sirf yeh pyaar,
yeh dua,
yeh rishtey...
woh yaadein...
woh kuch seekh zindagi ke,

agar yeh nahin kiya,
toh hamare baad hamein yaad karne waala koi na hoga
rone waala koi na hoga...

Royenge toh sirf hamare paise, kyunki ho gaye hain woh anath

👏 bahut Khub !!!