KaYa TS: Rishte ( Last Part on page 2 )

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Hi guys...
I'm here with a new ts...for a change its a bit emotional so no chapplals please!


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Kabir was sitting in his room...all shattered and broken from within...



He had no expression on his face and sat on his bed like a lifless statue...


Two small and soft hands wiped his tears and two black button eyes looked deep in his hazel brown ones...


"aap kyu lo lahe ho? ( aap kyu ro rage ho?) ...came the soft voice...


kabir gave a fade smile and took his neice...Jiya...in his arms...


K: kuch nahi baby...vo mujhe yaha ( pointing to his heart) chot lagi hai...


J: koi baat nahi main vaha kichchie dungi toh vo teek ho daayega ( kissie)


k: ok...do ( smiled)



Jiya kissed hiT-shirt near his heart...


J: ok chachu! abi ye teek ho daayega...( abhi ye theek hojayega)


Kabir smiled for her sake and kissed her cheek...


Leaving her in Priyanka's care ...Kabir walked to his car...in deep thought...
Why? Why was destiny so cruel to him? Why didn't he deserve true love?


Anita'sAnita's words rang in his eashe had called him to meet and had asked him to break his relationship with Ananya if he truly loved her because she deserved better then him...( according to anita)


He rubbed off a lone tear that tricked down his eye...
He drove for hours here and there aimlessly...



He drank bottles and bottles yet again trying to ease his pain but nothing worked...



Meanwhile Ananya too was sitting teary eyed in her room...her face was red and clearly showed that she had cried a lot...



Just then she got a call...it was kabir...she was happy atleast he woild discuss with her...


A: hullo kabir...

C: hullo...ma'am. ..main Hotel mount view se bolraha hu...ye phone jinka hai vo hamare bar mein hai please come and take him...


Ananya was shocked...she immediately reached there...



A: kabirrr!


kabir could hear none of it...in his semi-conscious state he only uttered...again and again...

k: ananya I love u main tumhare bina nahi reh paunga...


Ananya somehow managed to hail an auto and take kabir home...
She had the spare key and so used it to unlock the door... Sandhya had picked up Jiya by then...she managed to put kabir on the plush leather sofa in the hall and herself hurried towards the kitchen to prepare lime juice for him...



She found kabir blinking slighty after she made him sip the lime juice...
A: ( concerned) kabir!


K: ( heavy voice) hmmm...


Thank god he's ok! she thought. ...


A: aap theek hai?
Ananya asked cupping his face...


K: tum jao ananya...shayad meri kismat mein guilt aur dard ke alava aur kisi cheez ke liye jagah nahi hai...may be I dont deserve a pure hearted soul like u...may be Im not worthy enough to yours...



A: shhh! kabir aisa mat boliye please...do u even know aap mere liye kya maaine rakhte hai...aap neri duniya hai...mera sab kuch...II can't live without u...


K: nahi ananya meri hi galati hai...maine soch bhi kaise liya ki ek ma apni sarv gunsampann beti...jisko sabse achcha jeevan saathi milsakta hai uske liye mujh jaisa divorcee kyu chunengi?
You deserve better ananya. ...much much much better than me...


A: kabir main nahi jaanti ki main kya deserve karti hu aur kya nahi.. .main bas itna jaanti hu ki main sirf aapse pyaar karti thi...karti hu aur hamesha karti rahungi no matter what...( hugged him)...I love u kabir...so much!
aur ma ka kya hai.jab main unko ye sab bataungi...vo samaj jaayengi...



Ananya sqeeuzed his hand in reassurance. ...he smiled slighty taking hint...



Ananya helped him to the bed and tucked him in...
A: ( kissed his cheek) goodnight kabir!


Kabir smiled and closed his eyes...Ananya sat near him for a while and left after making sure he had slept soundly...


Next morning. ...Ananya and Anita went to the nearest CCD outlet in ananya's insistence...


Anita was about to sip her coffee whdn she saw kabir approching...she was about to get up but ananya looked at her pleadingly...


kabir sat down near ananya in front of Anita...



TBC😳




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res 😊
Edited by ...Srushti... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aap kuch bhi likho Riya Di...woh toh awesome hona hi hai!!!!!
Superb first part...plz continue Di!!!!!
Loved it as always!!! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...Riya on a roll after such a long time. Exams the kya?
Please continue.
Jiya is too sweet. Assume she is Rajveers daughter? then Priyanka is the maid here?

Kabir started drinking again? Oh no...
Anita Ananya and Kabir need to sit down and talk.
Sab theek ho jayega..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi and sorry for being late!
Here is the update!

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Something in Kabir's eyes made Anita sit down without protesting...her heart Strictly denied That this man could do something so wrong...



But...her mother's instinct always forbade her to take any risk...yet she wanted to hear out what he had to say...( Ananya left as she got a call...coffee shop is empty since it's really early)



K: uh...a..auntie...I hope..I can call u that?...uh...I have no idea ki Shreya ne aapko exactly kya bataya hai...but...sach nahi badalta iss baat se...ha main maanta hu...ki main bhi kai galatiya ki thi...Taarini was my best friend and I have no hesitation in saying she still is...usne mere bure wakt mein mera saath diya hai...toh kya main usse uske bure wakt mein chod du?...mera Aur uska vahi rishta hai jo Ronnie Aur Ananya ka hai...nothing more...




Auntie...I'm bot trying to justify myself...main sirf apni ma ko sach bata raha hu...aap mere liye meri ma hai...bhale hi aap mujhe apna beta na maane...Aur main apni ma se kuch nahi chipaana chahta...main sirf chahta hu...ki agar ek pal ke liye bhi aapne mujhe apne bete ka darja diya ho toh mujhe ek mouka dijiye...main apne vaade nahi bhula...



Main Ananya se junoon ki hadd se kahi zyaada pyaar karta hu...main usse har Vo khushi dena chahta hu jo Vo deserve karti hai...uski ussi innocence ko preserve karna chahta hu...jo mujhmein kabhi thi ...uski sundar aakho mein jo sapne mujhe dikhai dete hai unhe poora karna chahta hu...Ananya mera sapna hai...Vo meri jaan hai...uski bina main ek laash se kam nahi hu...



Aakhri faisla aapka hai...main apni ma ke khilaaf jaakar kuch nahi karunga...I promise!



Anita was in tears by now...she kept on staring at kabir and suddenly slapped him...



An: besharam kahi ke...tumhe kya lagta hai zindagi bhar t saare dukh akele jhelte rahoge...ha!
Tum bohot bade gadhe ho Mr Kabir Sharma...itna pyaar kaise kar sakte ho meri beti ko?




( concerned face) beta tum ye pehle hi bata dete toh ye sab nahi hota...tumne itna dard jhela hai beta ki ab...tumhe Aur dard dene ke baare mein koi soch bhi kaise sakta hai?




Tumse behtar jeevan saathi meri Ananya ko mil hi nahi sakta...




K: ( tears in his eyes) matlab...aap...



An: ( facepalm) ye saare mard bevakoofi ki gutti peekar janam lete hai kya? Tumhare hone waale Sasurji bhi aise hi the...pata nahi Ananya shaadi ke baad kya karegi...



So...daamad ji...chalein?




Kabir was so happy that he hugged her tightly...



K: thank u so much auntie...thank u so very much...I promise aapko shikaayat ka mouka nahi milega...




An: ( put a hand on his head) beta...tumne hi kaha na ki main tumhari ma hu...phir?
Bete apni mummy ko thank u nahi kehte...kyunki ma apne bachchi ke liye kuch bhi karsakti hai...



K: ji...ma...



An: abhi chalo...yahi se baaraat nikaloge kya?



Kabir smiled and both walked out...




The end😳



I know this is practically only Anita-kabir part but it looked better this way...hope u guys like it...


😃

Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me first
Superb update
Aakhir sasuma Maan hi gayi
Time for party Mr sharma🥳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sasuma is sooo cool😎
But why did she slapped kabir.😲..bina mare bhi to baat ho sakti thi😉

Nice TS👏👏

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