KaYa OS: Her Trust, His Love *Part 2 Updated- Page 5* 15/7/15

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Hi Guys😃


No I still don't have a proper internet connection yet😭 but i still managed to pen down something. I believe the drawing Ananya made will be something more significant in the future episodes and this is what i hope happens as a end of the Shreya track. Okay, i am planning to write another part to this but i purposely didn't write TS because if you guys had your hopes high and i didnt get time to write then you all would start hating me so i promise i will try my best to write one part to this OS if time permits.

I am very thankful to each and everyone of you for all the amazing love and support you shower on me everytime i write something and its all your encouragement that made me write this, i hope you will like this piece from my imagination as much as you loved my previous works.😳


Now one request, no tomatoes or flipflops please 😆


Happy Reading!




KaYa OS: Her Trust, His Love






Kabir sat down on the sofa sighing deeply. He felt empty, yes he stayed alone but today not his house but his heart felt empty. The curse of his past had come back to destroy his present and surprisingly the past had done a wonderful job! He had not spoken to Ananya since two days now.

Two days ago he had seen Ananya running out weeping from Shreya's cabin and before he could run after her she was gone. He walked in to Shreya's cabin to ask her what she had done when he had heard her laugh giving a Hi-5 to Malvika saying "Yeh toh gayi! Iska patta saaf!!" and the two most wicked women of his life broke into fits of laughter.

"Kya kiya tumne?" he roared at Shreya.

Shreya turned back and laughed, "Maine kya kiya?" she asked ignorantly sitting on her chair, "Sirf tumhara sach bata diya use, ki tumhari aadat hai apni juniors ke saath affair karna. Aur wo bhi tumhari sirf ek time pass hai..." and the next moment Shreya found herself in a standing up position due to extreme force and her face bent sidewards burning red with pain, Kabir had pulled her up and slapped her hard!

"How dare you?"

"Kabir, I'm your boss!" she shouted at him.

"Not anymore! I quit! And tumhe jo ukhadna hai ukhaad lo.." his voice dangerous, "Main Ananya se pyaar karta hoon samjhi tum? Aur pyaar ka matlab tum kabhi samjhogi hi nahi. You are the worst part of my past and I hate you. I hate the moment I met you and I think it was the worst moment of my life! My biggest mistake!" saying that he stormed off, almost running, to find his girl.

He stood at her doorstep ringing the bell but no one had opened the door so he returned home and kept calling Ananya again and again but she just wouldn't pick up. He had not slept that night, worried about her state more than he was worried she was misunderstanding him. He didn't want her to cry, ever, but she was miserable because of his past.

As soon as he woke up next morning he had rushed to her house again, only to see her crying in Ronnie's arms. He stepped back silently without entering her house, moving away he thought, she deserves better and Ronnie is a better choice for her, she needs a man without a scarred past so that she can be happy. With me she will always be over shadowed my dark past.

He sighed again, looking at his phone for the umpteenth time wishing for a call or message from her, even a blank message would do. Although he had decided to let her go, his heart wouldn't let her. He still had hope she might come back and ask him for answers. How he wished she had listened to his past when he wanted to open up to her, however she had insisted to live in the present as she couldn't change the past and she wasn't wrong either, she knew him very well that if he had recited his past then it would have reopened his wounds and she didn't want that to happen, she didn't want him to remember his past ever again. It wasn't her fault Afterall because least did she know that just when they had started living their beautiful present together, the past came right to their door knocking so hard blowing off all their happiness. To be honest for a moment he felt really hurt with Ananya for not trusting him, but he knew just how shrewd and manipulative Shreya was and Ananya was so pure and nave. Shreya was so hideous for playing with her innocence!

He took out the neatly folded paper out of his wallet which he always kept with himself no matter what, Afterall it was the first token of their love from her side, their drawing with "I love you" written on it. He slightly caressed the paper, smiling. She was the best thing that had ever happened to him and he had meant it, he would always remember her and love her, always!

He slowly refolded the paper and kept it back neatly in his wallet when he heard the doorbell ring. He looked at his watch skeptically, who could be there at this hour, it was almost about to strike. If it was Malvika with her stupid wine bottle again, he swore he would break the bottle on her head there itself!

He opened the door only to receive the biggest shock of his life; there stood Ananya completely drenched in the rain, shivering, she looked up at him and despite her face splashed with rain, he could tell she had been crying all the way and she still was, her eyes red and her breathing contained sobs more than shivering.

She looked at him for a few seconds, taking his beautiful frame in before breaking down, "I'm sorry! I'm so... so sorry for everything! The other day Shreya had called me to her cabin and she started telling me about you betraying her and now you are having time pass with me. I felt like slapping her right there. I told her that I trust you completely and then she started showing me some pictures from your past saying that those were your girlfriends and all in the past. I didn't believe her for a second but I felt miserable for not being able to defend you. I hated and cursed myself for not listening to your past earlier; if I had listened to you then I would have been able to tell her off right there and then. I was angry on myself for not being able to defend you, my love in front of a woman who was trying to defame you. I just ran off because I couldn't register what to say or do at that moment. I didn't go home straight, for the first time I went to the mandir to calm myself down and trying to think what to do to clear your name..." she sobbed trying to grasp more breath and continued, "You were calling me but I couldn't answer because I knew you would ask me questions and I didn't know how to answer you and I didn't want to hurt you in any way by telling you what all Shreya had said. Yesterday Ronnie came to meet me and he asked me not to cry and he said he knew someone who could help me to clear your name and we met that person and I gathered enough proof to prove you innocent. I am just coming back from Shreya's house slapping her with all the proof of your innocence..."

She now cried even more loudly asking him to forgive her, "I am really mmm..." Ananya couldn't speak any longer as she found herself pinned to the wall and his lips had captured hers, he was kissing her senseless! She could feel the passion flying as he deepened the kiss and guided her hands to his neck which he had pinned to the wall earlier. His grip on her waist now tightened and she buried one hand in his hair pulling him closer the other behind his neck. He wasn't letting her go for even one second to regain breath, he was kissing her like he had missed her from a thousand years instead of two days, he kissed her pouring all his love, hurt, care, anger and passion on her, and she wasn't even complaining! *wink*

He finally let her go when they literally couldn't breathe anymore and he took exactly three seconds to regain his breath and take her into a bone crashing hug making Ananya pleasantly surprised. After being satisfied with having her in his arms he finally released her only to pick her up and take her to his bedroom. He provided her with a pair of clothes to change in and went to the kitchen to make her some hot chocolate and something to eat, he could see just how drained she looked. The last two days had been hell for her. She had bared it all alone, he had given up on her but she had held onto him, she loved him despite all odds and yes her trust was still intact as she had promised. Ananya could see the oft smile playing on his lips while he was working in the kitchen silently as she came out wiping her hair with a towel. He looked up at her and his eyes remained fixed on her, she looked absolutely gorgeous!

Wearing his white t-shirt and black pants, face free of make-up and wet tousled hair making her look ethereal! His breath was caught in his throat when she smiled at him and raised her eyebrows asking what he was looking at. He came out of the trance and continued making the sandwich. She looked at him and smiled in content, he looked so handsome in the black t-shirt and pants, she didn't know someone could look so damn handsome in casuals and she just couldn't believe her luck that this dangerously handsome man belonged to her!

She settled on the sofa, tired but satisfied. She slowly leaned in and lied down on the sofa waiting for him. He came with a tray and smiled at her. He sat down in the little space in the sofa in front of her stomach, placing his hand on her forehead he caressed it lightly, "Had a really long day, didn't you? I'm sure you haven't eaten properly. Eat this and I will drop you home. You need sleep."

"I'm not going anywhere." Ananya replied softly and he looked at her confused, "Matlab?"

"I don't want to stay alone tonight. Ma and Armaan went to Chennai. Can I stay here for tonight?" she asked half sleepy.

"Sure!" he glowed, "Afterall this is your house too although future house but I don't mind you getting accustomed to it soon." He winked at her and then asked seriously, "What about your mom? Wont she be angry?"

"I had told you earlier, it was a work in progress na? So now the work is complete. She trusts you as much as I trust you and she loves you as much as she loves me!"

Kabir felt like he was the luckiest man on earth!

"Okay! Now sit up and eat..." he said making her sit and fed her with his hands while she fed him saying, "You haven't eaten too na since two days?" he could see the warmth and concern in her eyes.

"How could I? My life was not talking to me... since two days I thought I lost you and you expect me to eat?" he asked softly making her drink the hot chocolate after blowing it a few times. She realized he had got only one cup and she thought why didn't he bring one for himself and then she saw him sip from the same cup. She was touched by his beautiful gesture of love!

After they finished feeding each other, he took her in his arms and placed her on the slab beside the sink making her wash her hands and patted it dry then he collected the dishes from the living room and washed them, all the while smiling as he saw her adoring him.

"Meri aadatein mat bigaadiye! Warna humesha saare kaam aap hi ko karna padega..." she teased him, chuckling as he washed his hands after finishing the dishes.

He came to her smiling, "I don't mind! Tumhara sirf ek kaam hoga..." he leaned in and whispered, "Mujhe pyaar karna... Zindagi bhar..."

He tucked her in into his bed and got up to go to the guest room when she held his hand, "Kya hua?" he asked slowly.

"Mainse aap se kya kaha tha?"

"Ki you don't want to be alone tonight..."

"Exactly!" asying that she sat up and put one pillow away placing the other one right in the middle of the bed. She slowly pulled him onto the bed and pulled over the blanket over them, making him lay his head on one half of the pillow and laying on the other half, their faces few inches apart.

"Ananya tumhe lagta hai yeh acha idea hai? Tum mere itne kareeb rahogi aur main..." he barely whispered as she placed her finger on his lips hushing him.

"Sshhh..." she closed his eyes with her hands and then began tracing the lines on his forehead, his cheeks, his eyes, his lips and his chin when she felt his grip on her waist tighten and she smiled, "Let it go... let all your worries and your tensions go... free yourself from your past... free yourself from all the guilt... just feel the love...our love... you deserve all the happiness in the world... nobody will separate us ever and I will always keep you happy... I promise..."

That day he had made the first move and confessed and today Ananya had spoken from her side, he looked at her touched with her words and simple gesture to make him close his eyes and feel the love. She came forward and pecked his lips slowly then engulfing in each other's arms they fell asleep, in the most peaceful sleep of all time, with a promise of a bright morning showering happiness upon them.




I hope you guys liked it!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was sooo over-whelmed by reading it...Im litterally crying right now...You wonderfully potrayed the Pure love...in ur wrtting...I have no words... u just left me speechless...Keep writting such stories...
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lovely os
truly beautiful...
keep up the good work 👏
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Wow! The perfect display of trust and relationship.
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I'm out off words it's just awesome
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You are a Castle fan, aren't you?? 😆
I just love your writing... You always describe everything perfectly...
Thanks for this amazing OS...
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Beautifully written... Fell in love with the way you wrote it.. the plot, everything!
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Simply WOW!

You really got me in the start and I was like I know without a doubt that you will make Ananya trust him but then why is she ignoring him?? As I read ahead I realized this is something which we will get to see in the show too ( most probably).

Malvika and Shreya will definetely team up against Ananya and try to question the authenticity of their relationship - of course by telling her Shreya's version of the past. And the reaction that came from Kabir was so him!! Yes, he will go through any paint to keep her happy always even though if he has to distance himself for that - I can bet on this!

Do I need to say how happy I was to read about Ananya's visit and the part that followed. I know deep down even in the serial she will trust him blindly irrespective of what anyone says about him and also that Ronnie will be the most important KaYa shipper in the future track. We are already witnessing that Ronnie and Kabir have also started to develop a comfort level with each other as the story is progressing. Also. Ronnie has been the witness to all Malvika-Kabir talks recently (except the one in the green room) and I guess he also has started to develope a trust in Kabir's love for Ananya.

I guess all Kabir needs is Ananya's trust in him irrespective of all the odds. He is not a man who cares about what people think about him and just cares about the most important people in his life. Shreya, though being his wife, did not trust him in the past and that is one of the reason he has built so many walls around himself. After all, love is all about trust,right? You have perfectly portrayed this in the OS and left me spell-bounded.

Oh, I forgot to mention the best part of the OS :

"Sshhh..." she closed his eyes with her hands and then began tracing the lines on his forehead, his cheeks, his eyes, his lips and his chin when she felt his grip on her waist tighten and she smiled, "Let it go... let all your worries and your tensions go... free yourself from your past... free yourself from all the guilt... just feel the love...our love... you deserve all the happiness in the world... nobody will separate us ever and I will always keep you happy... I promise..."

Simply umm..eeh...mmm...I don't even have words to describe these above words had on me! I want to see something similar in the future track as well! I want her to liberate him from the shackles of his past in a similar manner through her trust and love - and not just by proving his innocence in front of Shreya and others!

I love you for writing this one! Lots of hugs and kisses for you

Note : Pardon me for all the errors present in the post. I have not yet recovered from the magical effect of this OS
Edited by idonkno - 10 years ago
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My dream list's Top most scene come to life! 😲

Everything I wanted to see happen and more! ❤️ Sachme Kajol, usually everyone says you read my mind but here, You LITERALLY read my dreams and penned them down into a very nice OS!

I so badly wish to see such a sequence occur in the show!
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Originally posted by: idonkno

Simply WOW!


You really got me in the start and I was like I know without a doubt that you will make Ananya trust him but then why is she ignoring him?? As I read ahead I realized this is something which we will get to see in the show too ( most probably).

Malvika and Shreya will definetely team up against Ananya and try to question the authenticity of their relationship - of course by telling her Shreya's version of the past. And the reaction that came from Kabir was so him!! Yes, he will go through any paint to keep her happy always even though if he has to distance himself for that - I can bet on this!

Do I need to say how happy I was to read about Ananya's visit and the part that followed. I know deep down even in the serial she will trust him blindly irrespective of what anyone says about him and also that Ronnie will be the most important KaYa shipper in the future track. We are already witnessing that Ronnie and Kabir have also started to develop a comfort level with each other as the story is progressing. Also. Ronnie has been the witness to all Malvika-Kabir talks recently (except the one in the green room) and I guess he also has started to develope a trust in Kabir's love for Ananya.

I guess all Kabir needs is Ananya's trust in him irrespective of all the odds. He is not a man who cares about what people think about him and just cares about the most important people in his life. Shreya, though being his wife, did not trust him in the past and that is one of the reason he has built so many walls around himself. After all, love is all about trust,right? You have perfectly portrayed this in the OS and left me spell-bounded.

Oh, I forgot to mention the best part of the OS :

"Sshhh..." she closed his eyes with her hands and then began tracing the lines on his forehead, his cheeks, his eyes, his lips and his chin when she felt his grip on her waist tighten and she smiled, "Let it go... let all your worries and your tensions go... free yourself from your past... free yourself from all the guilt... just feel the love...our love... you deserve all the happiness in the world... nobody will separate us ever and I will always keep you happy... I promise..."

Simply umm..eeh...mmm...I don't even have words to describe these above words had on me! I want to see something similar in the future track as well! I want her to liberate him from the shackles of his past in a similar manner through her trust and love - and not just by proving his innocence in front of Shreya and others!

I love you for writing this one! Lots of hugs and kisses for you

Note : Pardon me for all the errors present in the post. I have not yet recovered from the magical effect of this OS






First of all, OMG!! Such a long an exceptionally beautiful response? I am so dancing right now!! Your reply is almost as long as my OS and i just cant believe you loved it so much. Only one "Thank you" is not good enough to reply for such a touching response from you! 😳

Thank you so much!! I am more than overjoyed by the fact that you liked this so much and i am obliged that i was able to bring a smile on your face.🤗

I am so glad you liked my version of how Ananya will have a complete trust on Kabir and thanks for mentioning that Ronnie and Kabir's relationship is also building very well along with Ananya and Kabir's, thats what i wanted to portray with my little part of adding Ronnie into this OS 😳


Thanks for liking the ending!!!! I love you for that!!!😎


And errors? You kidding me? I love you for this adorable post!! 😳😳😃
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