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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: BedouinMe
A Huge Thanks to you for continuing this fantastic piece of work.. Eagerly looking forward for the next part.. :)

Thanks very much for your encouragement. I wasn't sure if after this longish break there would be any readers still around. So it's great to know that my significant efforts won't be wasted.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: aash2302
Hey,
Awesome, you have an amazing writing skills and the way you have described Kirit's place was amazing. 👏

KaYa as usual are amazing, sitting in front of Kirit the PDA displayed by kabir was all awww..👏

I always keep on thinking about your fic and come up with lot of options about what will happen next..

waiting for the next part eagerly.

Please Update soon and do PM me if possible

Love,

Aashritha

Thank you Aashritha. 😃 Delighted you liked it. Kabir's PDA was quite opportunistic, but much needed, to send a message to Kirit, and to protect Ananya, although Ananya would be the first to refuse any protection.

Hoping to update tomorrow night, although, since this is a long update, I might update part 1 tonight and the second part in a couple of days as soon as I finish it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: krazykaju
omg... amazing chapter. full of suspense, thrill, romance. i soo love it. well i have a doubt... kabir is doing all this just to show kirit or he actually enjoying all this. well whatever it is, i'm very happy with this. moonlight and sweet talkings. amazing and awsome part. love it.thank u so much for pm. update soon. and i hope you are fine now. be hale and hearty , keep smiling.

Thank you KK. 😊 Delighted it appealed to you, and that it struck the right notes. That's exactly what I hoped the readers would feel on reading this chapter.

With Kabir, it was to tell Kirit to "back off, this girl's got a protector, so be very careful of how you treat her" and, of course, because now it's to show how he feels, so he can actually indulge his deepest desires with a purpose in mind.

And thank you for asking about my health. It's really sweet of you. Apart from lack of sleep 😉 as I wrote this after work, I am generally fine now. A big smile for you. And I hope you enjoy the next chapter just as much. Posting as soon as I finish replying to all the wonderful readers who commented.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: pd786
lovely update
sorry for late reply
i just came online
kabir is a smart chap
this kirit guy gives me spooky feeling
i don't like him at all
update soon
pm me if you can

Thank you pd.😊 So glad you enjoyed it. Loving your reactions. Will Kabir's smartness be enough to keep KaYa a step ahead? Will Kirit's low cunning foil Kabir's plans?

Updating soon tonight 😃.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: doll9
nice story

Thank you. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Manyata5
You are driving me crazy...
Itna perfect??
Lovely yaaar...
Cont soon

Thank you Malaika. 😃 You sure know how to encourage me. Hope you enjoy the next chapter.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz
this is going so good, sabs. i visited the forum after a long time and onlyread ur updates and now bhago ing again. u r creating fireworks really, keep it on ! and see, u have such fan followings ! i am not surprised though.

Shreya ji, kahaan hain aap? Still in the big apple? AD was crazy hectic these past 6 months and I was just too occupied to write. Now I've made the time - can't stay away from writing for long. 😉 Do drop in again and catch me up on what's happening with you and what you're watching.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Mani_k_145
Please please please update the next chapter waiting for so long. But only update if u have time 😊

Mani, this one's for you - for letting me know that someone was still waiting to read what happens next. Hope you enjoy it!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Mehek25
Absolutely wonderful
Brilliantly, written...

Keeps me glued till the very end...and.makes.me want more...

Please update soon...

Thank you Mehek. 😃 I'm just so delighted by your reaction - your encouragement is such brilliant fuel to my fire; ink to my pen. It makes me want to write more. So thank you for keeping me going.

Update almost there...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: BedouinMe
Its absolutely beautiful ! Such a fine blend of 'Romanch' and 'Romance'.. Read all the 3 parts at one go ! Loved it ! Please do continue ... Pretty please !

Thank you BedouinMe. 😃 Thrilled that it appealed to you. It was great to know that you wanted to read on, and that helped me to keep writing.

Continuing in just a mo'...