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Originally posted by: mytinypaintings
"Not quite Lutyens, I thought,"
you were referring to Edwin Lutyens? Not the Lutyens Zone Delhi though both would mean the same in terms of Architecture. Just wanted to know if I got it correct.😉 I am the first one to come in so you know I have been stalking you.This was awesome, and true to your writing style. Very few would know the intricacies of the modern architecture of Delhi I am glad you at least mentioned it and you did so in an impressive way. I love it when I see people writing something that can give the reader some informative value other than mere entertainment.So the ember are flying and Kabir is evidently not helping to sush them either or is he? I am left rather wondering why he did what he did in front of Kirit. Was it merely for exhibition purposes or did it hold something more?This Kirit he looks inspired by Vijay Malaya?I thought it was a long chapter but then it just finished even before I started reading it.I hope you got it "Ye dil maange more"And please pretty please.Awesome piece of writing...keeps me not only hooked but desperately waiting too. 👏👏👏👏Saumya
Saumya, I cannot tell you how encouraged I am that you thought my SS worth stalking. Now that's a comment I'll treasure!! 😃
@"Not quite Lutyens..." was Kabir's way of charming Kirit. Because surely someone who's gone to so much trouble to make his house look like CP will also know that CP was not designed by Lutyens, who was too busy designing other buildings, but was designed by Robert Tor Russell, Chief Archtt to the Public Works Deptt (Wikipedia). And assuming that Kabir was conversant with that fact, and therefore Colonial Georgian architecture, Kirit would be able to talk at length about his passion. Which he did.
Many 👏 and thanks for bringing that up - the number of nights I've spent researching Georgian and Colonial Georgian architecture for this story have finally borne fruit!!
@ PDA in front of Kirit: Kirit forced his attentions on Ananya, which left Kabir angry and helpless. So he overtly made a point to Kirit that she was his girlfriend, already taken, and not without a protector; and at the same time apologised to Ananya for having been put through that ordeal - the heat in the eyes was involuntary. 😉😃
@ Vijay Mallya lookalike: No no! He's trimmer, better groomed and much, much cheaper, rougher and nastier. But I s'pose description-wise there's a resemblance.
@ Long chapter but not enough: I know what you mean. I really wanted the next couple of scenes in it. But, I was having trouble editing it at this length and it would have taken me at least another 3 nights to get those scenes it. So decided to put myself and the readers out our combined misery.
BTW, would you be happier with shorter (1000 word inputs weekly - half the length of this one and also half the story)?
And please do call me Sabs.😊
Cheers.
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
