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Tvbug2011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: You-Know-Who
Hey! I am not much of an IF person anymore. But I was just browsing through Reporters Forum and found your story!

That story is a great read! You write extremely well. I love the suspense! And I absolutely love the tension between Kabir and Ananya. Amazing and perfect blend of romance and thrill! And written so amazingly well. I am hooked. Please continue soon! :)

Thank you!! 😃Am simply delighted that you're enjoying my story and my writing.

Can I just urge you to please go back and reread Chapter 4 Part 2!! I must have been more unwell than I thought when I posted it a few hours ago, as I actually left out the first chunk of it! Only realised just now and have reposted Part 2.

So please do re-read it. Apologies again - I feel like the host cooking an elaborate dinner and forgetting to bring one of the courses to the table!!

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Sanchari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Enjoyed it ? Absolutely loved it ! This is exactly what works for me at least.. Its absolutely perfect ! Please do continue soon :)

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Tvbug2011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: BedouinMe
This one is turning out to be very very very interesting ! I am just loving the suspense along with the suppressed romantic tension between Kabir and Ananya.. Kirit is so very disgusting ! Hope Ananya doesn't get caught.. Hope to get the next part soon.. Once again, I must say, this is just fantastic !

Thank you Bedouin Me (any other name you'd like me to refer you by?) for your fab comment. It bucked me up no end. This was a tough chapter to close. Writing love making is not easy. 😉 there were a couple of days where I didn't know how much to stop at. More than a few times I fought the characters and changed directions, before giving into them and going with the flow.

In all my many pauses and second-guessing, i'd return to my reader comments to keep me going. So thank you. And please keep commenting.😃

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KnowItAllSwot

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Hey.. just read all the parts.. amazing story...
& loved the first kiss of kaya.. omgieee HOT HOT..😆😆
continue soon yrrr..!!

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Anjali-RoSid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Thanks for the PM ... Lovely update... And the first kiss 😳

Edited by Anjali-RoSid - 9 years ago

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Sanchari

@BedouinMe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

Thank you Bedouin Me (any other name you'd like me to refer you by?) for your fab comment. It bucked me up no end. This was a tough chapter to close. Writing love making is not easy.😉there were a couple of days where I didn't know how much to stop at. More than a few times I fought the characters and changed directions, before giving into them and going with the flow.
In all my many pauses and second-guessing, i'd return to my reader comments to keep me going. So thank you. And please keep commenting.😃

Its totally my pleasure :) Btw, I am Sanchari. Aap jaise chahein shorten kar sakti hain.. Waise bhi ise itne log itne tarike se shorten kar chukein hain, that I won't dare to suggest one.. 😆 And don't worry about it at all.. The lovemaking portion was very beautifully and aesthetically written !
May I know your name?

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drsm44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Very nice update Dear! Took Me to the Shakespearean era! The making out scene was quite exotic😉Do continue soon n hope there won't be any long periods of waiting😳

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
fantastic
i m loving dis suspense
please cont soon

Thank you Sona. 😃 delighted that my story and suspense appeals to you. Part 2 is here. So do read and share your feed back.

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Tia

@tes_v1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

It's interesting how Kabir and Kirit are fighting for the same turf, both know it, and yet, both are trying to play it smooth and act guileless.

As disgusting as Kirit is, I didn't think him to be a fool and make a direct move on Ananya and so blatantly at that.

I'll definitely give Kabir a point for his smooth handling of the situation. He needs to see her last thing at night, that had me smiling. So he's staking a claim on Miss Kashyap, publicly as well as privately.

And being with Mr.Sharma, Miss Kashyap seems to have become quite bold, what with offering help and all that. 😆

I'm waiting to see how Kirit now attempts to fix things with Ananya.

Love the pace of the story as well as your words and descriptions. The tension and suspense is palpable and I can't wait for the next update.

P.S: That incident with the hapless footman! 🤣

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Its totally my pleasure :) Btw, I am Sanchari. Aap jaise chahein shorten kar sakti hain.. Waise bhi ise itne log itne tarike se shorten kar chukein hain, that I won't dare to suggest one.. 😆 And don't worry about it at all.. The lovemaking portion was very beautifully and aesthetically written !
May I know your name?

I know exactly what you mean by the free-for-all shortening of names 😆 Mine has been truncated in very many different ways too in IF. And I could take all but 'Bug'!! 😃 However, please do call me Sabs. And thanks, Sanchari, for your vote of confidence. Lovemaking is always tricky and it's good to know that it didn't feel out of place.

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