KAYA FF/: Can i not be yours ? ( chapter 4 updated, pg-6)) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
amazing part...
kaya coversation was fantastic and dilogues were perfect fit to character.
yipeee...
now kaya are friends.
looking forward to see their frndshp bond.
thank u so much for giving 2 updates in a day
so plz maintaining this speed plz give us nxt part soon. 😉
thank u so much for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: krazykaju

amazing part...
kaya coversation was fantastic and dilogues were perfect fit to character.
yipeee...
now kaya are friends.
looking forward to see their frndshp bond.
thank u so much for giving 2 updates in a day
so plz maintaining this speed plz give us nxt part soon. 😉
thank u so much for pm.

thnq 😳
I'm brainstorming with a few ideas, maybe I'll update today 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Read all three chapter in one go 😊
I loved every bit of it 😳
Thank u so much for writing this FF on Kaya 😊
Also I must say that u r a fantastic writer 👏
Update soon 😉

P.S: can you please make index for your FF 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: pd786

awesome dearie

i want ananya and kabir both's pov
coz it makes it more interesting
i leave it on you as a writer to put it up as better as it suits the scene
thanks for the pm
update soon
pm me with the link
it becomes easier please

hi! I have sent you buddy request u may Consider accepting it 😆 😆 coz it's easier for me to pm u that way
Aaanndd... I'll try to write from kabir's POV too but his mind is too complex to get into *sigh*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Excellent chapter! Just loved the pov's...😊😊😊 Please present some more...would love to read them!😊 Please pm me on next update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Constantin

Excellent chapter! Just loved the pov's...😊😊😊 Please present some more...would love to read them!😊 Please pm me on next update...😊

thnks for liking my story 😛 aaand..i'm just updating 😆 in a minute
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
..u re almost making me go crazy...
wow keep going girl ...u rocked it..but me as usual besharam dil hai ki manta nhi...update soon...:p 🤣 n pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
hi lovely people 😃
so here's the next update
happy reading !
Chapter- 4
Ananya's POV :
After we were done eating he dropped me home and left in a hurry, I was so exhausted that I had trouble sleeping, infact it should be the other way round right ? I should have fall asleep as soon as I'd Hit the pillow..but I couldn't help all the incidents of that day kept on replaying my head over and over again..were we really friends now ? My body was depleted of energy but my mind wouldn't stop thinking. I hugged my pillow tighter wishing he was here.
Naina nu pata hai
Naina di khata hai
Saanu kis gal di phir
Mildi sazaa hai

Neend ud jaave, chain chhad jaave
Ishq di faqeeri jad lag jaave
Neend ud jaave, chain chhad jaave
Ishq di faqeeri jad lag jawe

I drifted off to sleep sometime later and nearly jumped out of bed when I heard a noise near my window in the darkest hours of night . I grabbed a vase from my bedside table incase i needed to attack someone ( more like to defend myself ) no god i cannot die so soon..I've never commited a huge crime, you cannot do this to me, ..silently I tiptoed to the window when someone threw a rock at my bedroom window again .
A : 'Kabir sir?'
I opened the window and stared at him in pure astonishment for good 2 minutes . I glanced back inside my room to check the time. 2:00 a.m.

He was there
Kabir Sharma was there at 2:00 a.m. in the backyard of my house.
Throwing stones at my bedroom window.

K : 'Ananya?' he whispered a grin on his handsome face which was probably due to seeing my reaction.
A : 'Sir aap yha iss waqt?' I hissed trying my best to hide my happiness
K : 'Jaldi neeche aayo' he was serious suddenly
A : 'Lekin sir kya...'
K :'Arrey jaldi neeche aayo time nhi h hamare paas'
A : 'Matlab' I replied confused
K : 'Arrey kabhi to meri baat maan liya kro?'
A : 'okay aati hu 1 min'
I hurriedly and quietly ran down stairs after checking my reflection in the mirror...I was wearing shorts which were way to short, not that I had any time to change; when I opened the door he was standing in front of it, I noticed he had not changed his clothes and still wearing the bloodstained shirt.
K : 'Ananya?'
A :'Yes..sirr' I replied tearing away my gaze from his body
K: 'Tumhe ghar drop karne ke baad main uss jagah firse gya tha'
A :'Kya' I was shocked
K :'Hmm..ab meri baat dhyan se suno, police ko phele se pura shaq tha ki vha pe drugs layi gyi hai vo bhi heavy quantity mein...isliye unhone vhape raid kri'
A :'Hmm..'
k : 'Unhe kuch nhi mila' he said
A : 'lead galat bhi to hoskti hai'
K : 'Nhi maine us building ke ke peeche waale forest mein investigation kari..aur'
A : 'Aur?' I further inquired curiosity rising within me second by second
'jungle mein beecho beech...trucks the' he said letting out a breath
A : 'Trucks?'I was starting to understand what this whole ordeal was
K : 'hmm..and sabhi trucks par shimla ki name plates thi, maine vhape kuch logo ko baat karte suna aand...'
his gaze suddenly shifted from me to a certain place behind my back as if he was deciding something...
'And...un trucks mein heavy amount mein drugs le jaye jarhe hai' he continued.
A: 'sir..kya aap bhi vhi soch rhe hai jo main soch rhi hu ?'
He darted his eyes back at me and for a moment i forgot what i was speaking..
K : 'tum kya soch rhi ho'
A : 'Shimla ..'
K : 'Suno Ananya ye boht dangerous ho skta hai, ek baar sochlo ...main nhi chahta ki tumhe baad mein regret karna pade..main.,'
A : 'sir' he continued cutting me in between
K : 'Ye lead tumhe mili thi isliye mujhe lga, tumhe na btana beimani hogi'
Danger ? i laughed a sarcastic laugh inside...i was already playing with fire to let myself feel anything for him
A : 'I'm in and that's final and i'm not changing my decision'
Moreover i don't think i'll ever get a better opportunity to make my name in the field of journalism...
K : 'be back in 15 minutes exact, i'm waiting outside'
After packing few necessary items i left a few notes on the fridge,on the door of my bedroom and one on the dining table so that mom won't freak out not finding me in the house when she wakes up.
I entered his car and he started to drive i glanced at him his face was devoid of any emotion.
A : 'how are we supposed to reach shimla?'
K : 'hamari flight hai exactly 3 hours mein' he replied staring at the road
A : 'wait..wait ye airport ka rasta to nhi hai'. I said when I noticed that we were on a very secluded road surrounded by clusters of trees
K : 'aap itne sawal kyu karti hai miss kashyap?' he continued 'aapko lgta hai mujhe is halat mein airport mein entry bhi milegi ?'
I noticed his torn clothes, stupid ananya you're very stupid i thought to myself, why are you acting so dumb ? I shrugged off. So were we heading to his house ? OH MY..i swear noone knew where he lived in the KKN not even khalid and that had been quite a gossip and he was not minding me invading his space ? Maybe i needed to stop overthinking, definitely i was overthinking.
Soon we were on the outskirts of the city, where the hell did he even lived ? I side glanced at him, his face still devoid of any emotion.
It was so black out on the road that i couldn't even see infront of us..thank god for headlights.
The moon seemed to be winking at us and the stars were sparkling..there was a beauty in that moment and a weird calmness. I turned to look back for cars or any sign of life . There was none . The trees we were passing by were becoming a blur and the yellow and red lights at the pavement of the road reflected as the car lights hit them .
I glanced at kabir again and this time to my releif he looked back with a expression I couldn't figure out ..his intense eyes darted at me as if trying to figure something out; after sometime we were at his place he quickly got out of car and opened the door for me
A : 'thankyou' I said as he lead me into his house I couldn't help but notice the surroundings..eerily silent and secluded on one side of his house started a forest which was spread across in a very large area. As i entered his house I noticed it's lavishness ; I saw his living room first : posh black and white furniture, expensive paintings hunged over the wall, matching heavy curtains draped from the ceiling ...every thing was perfect..but devoid of a feeling called 'home' ..i mean every thing was great but not at all personalized.
A :'Sir aap akele rhete hai' i couldn't help but ask
K :'hmm' I got in response. I wondered who cooked for him
K : 'main aata hu abhi' he said and dissapeared soon after, he seemed tired, one more thing i noticed was he wasn't acting his cocky self maybe this was real side of him ? I let out a breath, I was certainly very tired too . I closed my eyes and started to think again . The more i tried to decode kabir sharma the more complex he got
what was the point of living so far away from the city ?
was he escaping something ?
but what ?
his past maybe ?
i wanted to ask him questions but kept mum knowing how inappropriate that was considering this situation.
k :'sogyi kya ?' I snapped out from my train of thoughts.
A :'nhi-nhi chaliye' i replied calmly trying to hide my inner turmoil

we were joined by two of his stingers at the airport, i felt nervous with our close proximity as he took a seat beside me.

K : 'Meri khalid se baat hogyi hai'
A : 'hum yha...'
I tried to reply but i was soon cut off by a hostess
hostess : 'sir apko kuch chaiye' she asked kabir smiling from ear to ear
K: 'no thankyou' kabir replied smiling his usual flirty smile which caused women to worship the ground he walked on
hostess : 'are you sure sir' she was dazzzled now
A : 'yes we are sure we donot want anything now can we talk if you allow please ? we have some important things to discus'
and she quickly dissapeared a bit too fast i guess
K : 'ye kya tha miss kashyap' kabir asked looking clearly very amused
A : 'sir ek to is case ki itni tension hai upar se isne dimaag khrab krdiya'
I turned to look back at her, and to my surprise she was still staring at kabir...i threw my best possible poison filled stare to her; I glanced back at kabir who was more than amused now
A : 'kya?' i questioned him and he shook his head chuckling a little.
I dozed off to sleep
K : 'Ananya' i heard a familiar voice
A : 'uhh...kya hai' i said sounding like a pig
K : 'ananya utho hum pohnch gye..hain oh god u're such a heavy sleeper'
i snapped back to reality only to realize i was sleeping on his shoulder the whole way. I hoped he doesn't notice my blush I instantly looked away blushing even more

YOU ARE IN DEEP SHIT ANANYA
my inner voice told me, while i mentally slapped myself

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A/N : was it too long ? tbh
aaanddd...
comment your views regarding this story please😳
p.s. next chapter's gonna be from kabir's pov 😃😃

bye for noww
spread love😳❤️


Edited by SilverWaterLily - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: zakter

Read all three chapter in one go 😊
I loved every bit of it 😳
Thank u so much for writing this FF on Kaya 😊
Also I must say that u r a fantastic writer 👏
Update soon 😉

P.S: can you please make index for your FF 😊

omg so glad you liked it 😊
and yeah..thanks for reminding me i'll put up an index now 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Ohoo kabirs POV I want to know what he thinks ..but this one is fantastic as usual...well update soon...waise wen will u update??sorry but Kabir attraction cant Help it.. 😳

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