KAYA FF/: Can i not be yours ? ( chapter 4 updated, pg-6))

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Posted: 10 years ago
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index :
chapter 1 - pg 1
chapter 2 - pg 2
chapter 3 - pg 4
chapter 4 - pg 6


hello folks ❤️
this is riya 😳😳
And this is my first post on this forum actually on the site itself, and i thought starting with a story on our lovely KAYA would be great .
This is my first attempt on writing something about them
A/N : this story contains trillion grammar errors.
Can I Not Be Yours ?
Ananya's POV :
There was no freaking possible way that i was going to be late that morning. I got up as early as 6:00 a.m and was ready by 8:00 a.m. sharp. I had gulped down enough caffeine to be ready to take over the world .
Besides, unlike the rest of the world I was very well a morning person . Mom had packed lunch for me and I left for office almost one hour earlier, but as soon as I stepped out it started raining . LUCK . I stepped back into my house to grab a umbrella.
I was in my own peace of mind sitting in the autorickshaw but then it suddenly stopped with a jerk and a thrashing sound with my head hitting it's railing which was just in front of me, damm that was gonna hurt. I peeked outside and the sight broke my heart a car had collapsed into the divider of the road, smashing a small puppy in the process . I got out of the auto hurriedly
'bahiya kitne paise huye'
'lekin madam, abhi to hum pohnche bhi...'
i handed a 500 rupee note in his hands and rushed to the poor soul no one was paying attention too . This world needed to rot in hell, I picked it up carefully examining it and just in the spur of a moment i think i saw a car stopping infront of me and a glimpse of kabir sir; but before i could confirm anything the car sped away.
One and a half hour later i was standing at the gate of KKN, half drenched, shivering with cold and deciding whether or not to enter . Kabir sir was probably going to chop off my head and feed it to crows and pigs . But i was glad I saved that puppy's life . How can be people so ignorant to let that miserable poor soul die there ?? huh..Taking a deep breath I opened the door only to find out kabir standing near my desk, a sudden wave of some unknown-unrelatable feeling passed through me when I heard him telling the peon to get a hot coffee for me.
'Good morning miss kashyap' he said with a smile which was to die for instead of asking for a solid possible reason for getting late.
'Good morning sir' i looked up to meet his eyes and looked away instantly. No possible sign of frustration, multiple personality disorder maybe ? huh..i thought and shrugged off; the very next second he turned his back and was marching away in the direction of his cabin, leaving me tracing his perfectly chiseled back. After he was gone i loosened my fists, why do i forget to breathe whenever he's near me ?
'Ye kya hogya aaj kabir sir ko' Richa asked looking as confused as me,
'pata nahi yaar, kabhi to aise act karte hai jaise i don't exist and kabhi kuch aur'
I glanced in the direction of his cabin only to find out him looking in our direction, i shifted my glance as hurriedly as i could, while skipping a few heartbeats.
The effect he had on me was dangerous, like a child craving for something for too long, like a truck hitting me straight on my head, like all my f**king bones getting crushed with something severe .
STOP IT ananya, just stop

Kabir's POV :
She had probably caught me staring at her for 1000th time today, but i couldn't stop
She was so pure and innocent, i was a monster
She was as lively as a little kid, i almost stopped living 5 years ago when everything ruined, when i ruined tarini's life had i reached on time that bas***d could not have touched her, she would not have been a single mother and the worse was shreya the woman i had loved once accusing me of cheating on her and leaving me hanging without ever listening to what i had to say, she'd left me when i needed her most but that's what people do right ? and then this girl came this stupid stupid girl who without any efforts was already shattering all the walls, i had built around me all these years, and got me wrapped around her finger. But she needed not to be a part of my f**ked life and that's why i was never gonna let her in, that;s why i was never gonna fall for her that's why KABIR SHARMA was not supposed to fall for ANANYA KASHYAP.
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A/N please please please please do let me know how did you find this ? do you want this to be continued ?
sorry if it sucks
spread love <3

p.s. i'll continue it if you want just reply and share your views
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Nicely written...
Continue soon...

thnq 😳 will try to
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one yaar nd ha der wer no grammatical errors at all...loved it btw wen is da next update waiting fr it eagerly..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ria.2710

Good one yaar nd ha der wer no grammatical errors at all...loved it btw wen is da next update waiting fr it eagerly..

I'll update soonish, maybe tommorow 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dat was awesome start... 👏 & warm welcome to the forum...
Wud b waiting for further updates 😳 ...let's see how long Mr. Sharma is able to resist his stupid reporter 😆 😆

p.s-- didn't found any grammatical error in update 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting concept.
lets see what happ s when these 2 come closure.
very well written.
and and beautiful.
lovely.
update soon snd pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely thought
please continue
you can leave me on a cliff hanger
if you don't continue I'm gonna spam you with pms to continue 😈
okay please continue 😳



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written!
Yes!! Plzz cont. 😊
Edited by a.patel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazingly beautifully written


Pl cont soon
Excited to know what happens next

Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pd786

lovely thought

please continue
you can leave me on a cliff hanger
if you don't continue I'm gonna spam you with pms to continue 😈
okay please continue 😳



i'm just updating hehe 😃 thanks btw

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