KAYA FF/: Can i not be yours ? ( chapter 4 updated, pg-6)) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Grrr..I had to re-type this chapter as my computer decided to give me a mini heart attack after switching off all of a sudden😭😭😭 and it came out a bit different this time ( And hopefully better)
A/N : this chapter is wholly from Ananya's point of view and i bet your inner fan girl would be dancing after reading this 😉😉
Happy reading !!



CHAPTER - 3

Ananya's POV :
That day something changed between us, something changed within me. I was not sure where our relationship stood now. But i wanted to explore...more . Sitting in his car I watched him gripping at the steering, the veins on his arms popping out as he tried to control the vehicle, we were already speeding over 100 km/h
'Kyu sir aise marne ki kya zarurat hai vahin chord dete marne ke liye'
He threw a venomous glare towards me and I skipped a beat.
'how can you be so stupid miss kashyap to go to a place like that alone' he commented, I had no rational reply so i kept mum
'Nhi-Nhi jawab dijiye miss Kashyap vaise to apke paas mere har sawal ka jawab hota hai ab kya hua ? aaj kaise itna chup baithi hain'
'Sir phele speed slow kariye' I felt lightheaded
All of a sudden the car was swerling to the right as a dog raced in front of us. I screamed in terror as the force threw my whole body against the window . Tires squealed,the sound piercing through my head And then Kabir's eye landed on me-- full of a emotion that screamed dread.
And that was the moment i realised there was a possibility that we could have just died
I jerked back and forth when the car came to a complete halt.
SILENCE.
To say i was hyperventilating was an understatement i was choking on my own breath. I heard a seatbelt unfastened and i was suddenly in his arms . He was hugging me so tight that i could barely breathe. I didn't care who I was or who he was all i knew at the moment was that I needed him, my arms came around his back and his grip tightened a bit more- if that was even possible.
'Are you okay' he whispered and i couldn't manage a reply. My heart drummed in my ears , i don't know for how long we stayed like that but he let go after sometime and I was thoroughly embarrased. I was already dreading tommorow when I'll come face to face with him again. But what scared me even more was that i wanted this side of Kabir more..and more .
'Aap theek to hai miss. Kashyap' I turned to look at him only to find out blood dripping out of his torned shirt . shit .
'Sir aapko to chot lagi hai and kitna khoon bhaiyra hai' i gasped and continued ' Sir hume iski dressing krni padegi abhi jaldi utariye car se'
'But miss Kash..'
he retorted
'jaldiii' he had no chance but to surrender . Soon i had dressed his wounds with the help of a emergency safety kit lying at the back of his car ; it was evening already and i was dead hungry
'Miss Kasyap aapko bhook la..' he said as if if stealing my words
'Bhook sir? bhook nhi pet mein hathi kuud rhe hai' i continued cutting him in between and both of us started laughing all of a sudden i felt calm, and things became a lot better.
He parked his car beside a dhabba and i practically raced inside, he followed slowly trying hard not to smile wearing a expression that said 'iska kuch nhi hoskta' .
I was stuffing everything i was offered inside my stomach
'Arrey sir aap bhi to kuch lijiye sharma kyu rhe hai ?' I said while stuffing another piece of paratha and moaning in delight.
'Kya kha aapne miss Kashyap' he said in order to hide his laughter.
'kuch nahi' i said and started eating again. He broke out into a laughter a genuine happy one and i was more than satisfied for being the reason of it .
'So are we friends now' i asked curiously glancing at him from the peek of my eyes
He held a confused face
'We shouldn't be friends Ananya' he said and continued while the word 'Ananya' echoed through my ears over again and again, my name sounded best when it came out from his lips.
'Ye aapko meri jaan bachane se phele sochna chaiye tha' I said retorting and a little heartbroken.
'Okay then, but don't complain later on ki maine tumhe warn nhi kiya'. He smiled a serious smile and i knew he was probably correct
But i wanted to take the risk
Because Kabir Sharma was worth taking the risk...

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A/N : i'm almoost dead and may pass out anytime soon, so how did you find this chapter. Do you want more of Kabir's POV or Ananya's POV ?
and
please, please, please drop a comment if you liked this nothing means more for a writer than people appreciating his/her work
BYE for now
spread love ❤️



Edited by SilverWaterLily - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Yaar tu hai kya yaar...u re almost making me go crazy...super fast updates wow keep going girl ...u rocked it..but me as usual besharam dil hai ki manta nhi...update soon...:p 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is awsum!!!
Really loving ur story and ur writing..!
Awsum story and fast update...hats off! 😊
update soon!


~Amber~
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
This was your best chapter ...
Accha hua... Tumhara computer switched off ... The result is fabulous ... Give us another update ... And this time Kabir's point of view please...
And did I mention I love you for updating so fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Lovely update.. Fantastic love your pace of update so quick 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
very nice
KaYa were so nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Both updates superb

Pl cont soon

Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tibs09

This was your best chapter ...
Accha hua... Tumhara computer switched off ... The result is fabulous ... Give us another update ... And this time Kabir's point of view please...
And did I mention I love you for updating so fast

oh my ! thanks a ton, 😳😳 haven't written anything yet but i will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
interesting story line. please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
awesome dearie
i want ananya and kabir both's pov
coz it makes it more interesting
i leave it on you as a writer to put it up as better as it suits the scene
thanks for the pm
update soon
pm me with the link
it becomes easier please

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