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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: zakter
I loved it . Please continue and pm me 😊

Originally posted by: shreya_rc
ohh ! this one is real good !

thank you dearies...

hope you will enjoy it further on too😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26
Aeesome Ana. As always I fall in love with your os.I would ce certainly want to read sbout possessive dide of Kabir. Its not there in the show so far. We have only seen little jealous and disappointed Ananya. She is not comfortable with his link ups with Malvika or Tarini.
Ananyas pov is so clear and transparent but kabir is still a mystery.
Please continue. Cant wait for the story to begin.
Thank u so much for this lovely piece of writting.

thank you so much rajani...

I wasnt sure how this os will be taken by u all...

one its so small...

2nd, it was just an emotional display of what we have seen but further on,you will see some changes ;)

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Ana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: .Sandhir
Amazing:):)
loved it

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11
I see som real good stuff here 😃 do notify me plz when u update next 😛

Originally posted by: krazykaju
lovely.
it was so awsome.
plz do continue.

thank you dearies...

plz bookmark to read it further on ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: pink_pumpkin
Wow it was too beautiful the way u described Ananya was perfect.Kabir's jealously ahhh so good
Thanks for writing :)

thank you so much dear...

hope u will enjoy it further more tooo...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sonyjknum
Wow amazing start well we have seen a glimpse of a little bit possessive Ananya and would love to see possessive Kabir and with RK in mind it will be fantastic read
I have enjoyed your work in ktlk forum a lot

yup yaar...

possessive ananya is there n I so wanna see an equally possessive kabir...

thank u for liking ktlk work sony...hope u will like this one too😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Maria_TR
A lovely OS, dear.. Really would love to see such a possessive side of Kabir for his Miss. Kashyap.. Do continue.. This KaYa invaded heart craves to read more of it..😳😆

hehe...thank you maria...

kaya hearts do have the craves to have that unforbidden taste of love...lets see when they get their fill😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Sanya..25
Great
Loved it with core...
Continue sooon

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991
Superb..Loved it 👏 Pls continue soon. Thanks for the pm rajanij. 🤗

thank you so much sanya n diksha...

hope u will like it further on too😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: --Janvie--
Even though I love KaYa alot,I haven't started reading any stuff on them yet,But you pulled me in as I knew its gonna be Awesome being written by you.!!😃
Beautifully written Ana...Pls continue this and I loved this possesive Kabir...❤️Hope We get one soon on the show as well.!! 😛 😳

hey janvie...

thank you so much for having that trust yaar...

so hope that you willnt feel disappointed by it...

possessive sujal was such a treat n I so wanna see a possessive n equally in love kabir soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Awesome start Ana... ⭐️👏
Loved to read Kabir n Ananya's mind n heart through their own words.. ! Its great to have an OS with the same emotional facet when we all are living the life of Kaya now.. 😳 Very fine narration.. !!!
Will be waiting to know more how Kabir wud get the situation right for Ananya as he has put her in with his own anger.. !
Thanks for this superb narration dear.. Plzz do continue.. ! Waiting eagerly.. 😊

thank you sooo much bawa...

glad to see u liking the emotional display of kaya...

haha...do u really think ananya is a girl to get ovrpower by his anger...she do know how to handle him ;)

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