SPOOK...!!!ONE PART FIC...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ppl...this is only a one part fic...wrote when i was bored..
statutory warning:its weird


ashi had nvr been so happy in her lyfe...not even with yuvi..
yuvi cud b insensitive sumtimes...irritating at others
she had thot yuvi was the luv of her life but tht was before she had met HIM..
actually she only hazily remembered hoe she had met HIM..she had fainted a long time ago wen she n yuvi were datin
she cud remember nothin after tht xcept HIS angelic face carved to perfection..
from then on she had been in bliss
nowadays yuvi was forever concerned abt her...perhaps yuvi thot if she ws with sumone else she cud b in trouble
her mom kept askin if she was allrite
se tried to assure them tht she was allrite since she was wid HIM
this brouht even more bewildered looks
none was able to catch them when they roamed at nite...
then a day came wen ashi had enuff of ppl askin her if she was sane..
she asked HIM to assure them tht she was fine..
he just shook his head ,gave her a chilling smile and dissapeared into the fading nite

then it hit her wid enuff force to knock her over..
none had evr seen him
she was the only one who cud see him
HE was her imagination cum 2 life......................................


this thot sent chills up her spine...
she fainted n woke up in yuvi's arms..
later in life she wud marry yuvi n live happily ever after...
well...almost
she wud always remember the time she spent in a completely fabricated illusion....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dont really know wat to say.....i mean well ashi as a psycho is to must to digest ....its well different....i am sry if i hurt u ...but its honest...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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s'okay...i thot it was weird 2...but the idea of living in a world of ur own really interests me...thanx 4 readin it atleast.. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey...I didnt get it... I'm a little confused.

Was Ashi whacked
was she suffering from partial amnesia (which seems to be rampant all over these days!)
was Ashi havin a nightmare?

Overall....ya...a bit weird and a little confusing. But its' really different!
I like short stories!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey by any chance did u see "MADHOSHI " !!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ya in tht Bips was having these kinds of illusions
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishi

hey by any chance did u see "MADHOSHI " !!!!!

😆 ya even i have seen the movie its kinda funny!!!!!

nice fanfic hellraiser!!😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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no i din get my inspiration from madhoshi....ive always had this idea....a recent song of madhoshi just reminded me of the idea
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey its different hellraiser but cant imagine Ashi being insane....i mean she's the most sensible of the lot....dont mind but i'm not much into such spooky stuff 😊.......neways.....it was good......😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well i really didn't get the thread of wt u want to convey.sort of confusing.
sorry.

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