in love and heartbreak - Page 3

cmon,fate,i'm waiting 4 another dose of ur poems.write some more plz

great work Fate.. brilliant.. keep the good stuff coming

this is gr8 fate 👏 ....really nice ones 👏

wish someone could write something like this for Tia and Ranveer

ppl this poem is slightly different........
hope u guys like it......


dedicated to myself coz i need to remind myself tht they r reasons to live.......

in darkest of times

even in heaven
i presume
no angel can sing beautifully enough
to take away dis pain.....

in hell as i reside now,
as dayz turn to nights'
as with my own hands
i paint my life pitch black
i give up hope.........

as death sundances
on the parapet of my window sill
i cant help but give up.....
trust me i am not a coward
but neither do i have the will to try
nor do i want to ......

i just want to be free...
can it be true?
wat is it i hear?
footsteps?or the rain??
is my death approachin or
is someone up there cryin for me??

trust me its not easy to live
wen u love urself first....
its hard to survive,
wen wat u believe in,
with that u never compromise....

love has become a mere word to me
i hear no violins no wedding bells ring...

i have left my spirit,my pasion,my fire
long behind
as i move ahead in life
i feel so empty.........

dis decision is mine,
only mine,no one told me
and i asked no one,
to say the final good bye
probably dis time is rite........

i don knoe wat to say..no funny messge...just tht tis is a exetrmely personal poem....

please comment...a... nd no its got nothin to do with me not havin uv ........

well fate y is there so much pain and remorse i dunno but it seems like u have passed through something really traumatic......the poem was fine but ...y so much sadness???well the thing abt" i paint my life pitch black"well i can't say it pessimism but.....there is something which i feel is really bothering u...all i can say is this is life everyone has their own ups and downs.........let them come while i smile and take it...............but should say the poem contained ur feelings......i luv ur riting and keep up de good work.

Hey guys... Can I also contribute here..

Fate, if you dont mind, i am pasting my efforts here too, however,if you mind, let me know, I will put it in another post...



WHY?
I ask myself that question often
Yet I find no answers…
No answer soothes my broken heart…
No solace I find in anything anymore…

Why did I step out that evening…
When the rains were gently falling on the parched soil…
When I saw you for the first time,
Walking by the corner of the road…
And when you turned and looked my way….
I realized what it felt when the rains fell on barren soil…

Why Why Why!!! I ask myself
Why did I ever feel that way…
Why did you give me those wonderful memories…
Which today kill me.. in your absence….
Why did you give me so much love…..
That I feel deprived today…

I wish I can forget.. I can wipe the slate of my mind clean..
I wish I can throw away the rose…
I wish I can just complete the book..
The book we once read together…
I am still at page 871….
Waiting for you to complete the last journey to page 908…

waah waah priya kya baat hain!it was very sweet yaar................ 👏 👏

hey fate.....u express ur feelings really well.....but as everyone said there is too much of pain in it

and priya that was too good

i really dont mind ppl postin up their poems or stuff here....i really love it...really.....so priya great poem....

cool.. thanks fate!!! come on guys.. why dont the rest of you also write more poetry too... we got fan fics happening. Lets write some poetry too... it would be fun.