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Posted: 20 years ago
#41
Why do you do this to me fate????why...why...why....kyun karti ho tum aisa???abhi toh main tumhare fanfic ki duniya se bahar nahi aayi thi...ki ab yeh😉......you just kill me with ur writing👏and count me in ur Fan-Club too....😛and keep witing......
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Posted: 20 years ago
#42
fate..that tia poem...it was so beautiful...actually beautiful is too low grade a word to describe it...really touching 👏

plz write some more na
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Posted: 20 years ago
#43
thnx ppl..........
and specially mads melon and rikzik and lamina......for readin my posts
b t w dis one was for specially for lamina as she likes ranveer and tia so much....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: fate

thnx ppl..........
and specially mads melon and rikzik and lamina......for readin my posts
b t w dis one was for specially for lamina as she likes ranveer and tia so much....

thanks so much tia...😃😃..this is realllllllllllly sweeeeeeet of u😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: fate

thnx ppl..........
and specially mads melon and rikzik and lamina......for readin my posts
b t w dis one was for specially for lamina as she likes ranveer and tia so much....

No probs Tia...anytime...😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
#46
well ppl am d only one to write poems com mon u guys contri...and even if u dont write poems write something ....u knoe ur thots and stuff not necessarily linked with remix.........and also if u want put up ur fave poem.............written by someone else/....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#47
kamall or dhamaal likha thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx so much
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Posted: 20 years ago
#48

ppl me dese dayz in romantic mood.....no for no prsnl reason..just like dat....

a page out of ashis diary....

falling apart

as i close my eyes,
i feel ur arms around my waist
your lips trail down my bare skin
and i trmble with ecstacy...

u draw me closer
yet a part of me wants to break free
u lift ur hand and move my tendrils
away from my face
u swear by the moon
that i am the most beautiful girl u ve ever seen
yet i feel ur lines are a bit 2 corny
tht u r puttin up just a shoe

u whisper something into my ear
and i smile in return
u lift ur finger and trace my smile
and i dont know y but i want to turn my face away

u kiss my closed eyes
& i shiver with a feeling unknown to me
u carress my neck
and i want to run away...
yet, i stand still,
its as if u ve cast some spell over me


u draw me closer
take a deep breath
and slowly kiss my lips
hold me tighter stll,guy,
cause i am falling apart
in your arms again
dont ever let me go
cause i need ur embrace
i realise tht its too late
no matter how hard i tried
i failed,....
failed in keepin away.....
and now i am fallin hopelessly in love again.....

Edited by fate - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#49
ppl please comment...........me down..........please say something....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#50
ppl...i am really sry....this is the last romantic poem....really sry....specially all moderators

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