in love and heartbreak

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi ppl well I wrote these poems thinking myself to be in uv and ashi s shoes

Hope u like them….an don't forget to comment please……..

To my sweetheart….

U act as if nothing happened

U say u care nomore for me u

U say it was all a mistake

And now u say u have to leave…..

Wat happened b/w us

was it just a game ??

Can u deny wat u felt for me?

Can u forget those moments we spent?

Do u truly think tht u can live

Without me in ur life??

Its not just a feeling…

Dis is true love..

I am in love with u

Y don't u just believe me???

Wat happened,was history….

Lets 4get it and get on with life,

Hurtin each oder can never

Take us far in life,

So just fall in love with me again…..

Is it true wat I hear???

Tht u love someone else noe??

Is it true wat I c?

Tht look in ur eyes??

U can deny it as mant times as u want 2,

Yet d fact tht u love,

No one can ever change it..

The look in ur eyes

answers my questions,

tells me tht u still luv me…..

then y dis pretense?

Why dis distance??

Y don't u just come bak 2 me?

I can take it anymore

Dis pain this emptiness inside

Deny ur feelins as many times as many times as u want to

But this is wat I say------

I love u today,

Like I loved u a certain yesterday….

And I will love u in all tommorows..

U mean the most to me..

My beginning and my end..

And apart from dis

Dere is nothing else left to say….

Urs forever in life and death

Yuvraj dev

Noe for ashis feelins…..perhaps an answer to d above poem….

To my nemesis…..

In a few moments-----

I cant figure out wat 2 tell u

After u broke my heart.

I am suppose to hate u

Yet every time I c u

I cant help but fall 4 u again

Give me a few moments guy,

Ill be bak on my feet

I ll surely get o

But ill get over it soon…ver u…

And all I need is—

Time

Ppl tell me I am strong

But noe I don't feelso

Dis is my first heartbreak

But its so strange

Even noe u can take my breath away…

U r so beautiful..and u knoe it to…

U r so perfect,but then y did u break my heart??

Y did u leave me so so alone??

But give me a few moments guy…

Ill be bak on my feet

I ll surely get o

But ill get over it soon…ver u…

And all I need is—

Time

U act as if nothing is wrong,

U say it doesn't matter

U ask me wat my problem is?

Guy cant u c?

U r breakin my heart….

U r shaking my comfort zone?

U ask me to 4get the past

To start afresh again

But I cant

Sorry guy,I cant trust u nemore.

U've broken my hert

U've made me cry

U've made me feel so damn insecured

Boy I need u yet I am askin u to leave,

Coz I never wanna get hurt again

Give me a few moments guy

Ill be bak on my feet

I ll surely get o

But ill get over it soon…ver u…

And all I need is—

Time

Some time

Tht is just mine

From ur campanion in pained love

Anvesha ray bannerjee

Please……..comment…

And ya its entirely my work even though the characters re from remix….

Can v call dis a fan fic???

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow!!!!!fate u just get better everyday...........it is so beautiful and the words r so simple and yet they convey their feelings so well. 👏 lovely fate...............really beautiful.
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fate it's beautiful
it's gr8 work keep it up
but a small request to you tht u write very well very well so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
write sumthing for tia-ranveer
don't mind but
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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fate is is beautiful.You really write well.You describe their emotions really well.But you are sure its for yuvi and ashi.......... not you n someone 😉




But keep up the good work.I am a big fan of yours.
so plz keep writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh my god!r u a superb poet or what??that was so amazing and it really was very touching.so r u gonna write one for ranveer and tia too?
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Fate...so you are a poet as well eh!!!
I've never known anyone who writes so well.

The poems were really apt for each of them.
I do hope that there will be more such poems in the near future.

I was still "wow" 'ing😕 😳 over your sitaara story and now these poems take the cake!!!!

Fate....babes....I think you've just found yourself a fan!
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I have no words fate 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏....this has left me totally speechless....it feels as though u have actually got a peek in to their hearts and conveyed their feelings.......its absolutely mind blowing

and fate along with aparna count me in ur fanclub too 😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
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fate.......u r just amazing writer 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: melon

fate is is beautiful.You really write well.You describe their emotions really well.But you are sure its for yuvi and ashi.......... not you n someone 😉




But keep up the good work.I am a big fan of yours.
so plz keep writing

well its totally for ashi and uv but yes.... somethin like dis happened with me..i mean i wrote the poem as ashi and uv but at the bak of my mind there was a certain personal pain...but hey it really doesnt matter now...i hope so atleast!!!!!!!!!1

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Posted: 20 years ago
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AREY BAAPRE YEH TUMNE LIKHA,THEN HATSOFF FATE,VERY NICE,WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY

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