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Posted: 20 years ago
#11
part 4
yuvi decides to tell ashi everything

he is about to go out of his room when sid and nakool enter

sid says" yuvi tere pair(legs) kahan hain mujhe choone hain"

yuvi"cut the crap" visibly angry

sid says" kya hua shart to tu jeet gaya hain"

nakool " chillax yuvi"

yuvi " just leave me alone " desperate to get out

sid" why are u in tension bro"

yuvi is now at his wits end and blurts out" bcoz i am in love with ashi"

covering his face with his hands and sits down

nakool" what"

sid"shut up nakul "

sid places a hand on yuvi and tries to uncover his face

a tear escapes yuvi eyes and he brushes it away

yuvi says " will ashi forgive me about the bet"

sid signalling nakul to keep quiet replies " why should she find out dont tell her "

" as it is only we 3 know about the bet . nakool and i will keep quiet"

" now cheer up pretend that u have regained ur memory and still love ashi"

" aakhir hamare yuvi ko ashi pasand aa gayi hain" said nakul hugging him


meanwhile ashi was on the phone " can i talk to aditya ?"

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Posted: 20 years ago
#12
part 5
aditya comes in the canteen to meet ashi.

he is in head over heels in love with ashi is quite obvious

but ashi totally ignores his advances

ashi says" hey aditya, could u meet me at the disco tomoorrow"

aditya mouth wide open" ya sure"

just then sid happens to go by

seeing this ashi quickly hugs aditya

sid sees this and decides to tell this to yuvi

he rushes back to his room

yuvi is on his bed strumming the guitar

sid" hey dude, guitar bajjate rahega aur ashi wahan kisi aur ke saath chali jayegi"

yuvi" what the hell are u saying" throwing his guitar to the side

sid quickly filled him with the details

yuvi , a mean look on him "aditya's dead"

and rushed towards the canteen

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Posted: 20 years ago
#13
part 6
ashi sees off aditya telling him to come to his birthday sweetly

adity a still dazed from the hug mentions a yes nervously

he cant beleive his luck

ashi sends him away telling she will meet him later

yuvi reaches the canteen the anger boiling in his eyes

he cant find aditya but sees ashi

he is in a rage and goes towards ashi' table

seeing the rage in his eyes ashi smiles and thinks u will pay for what u did to me

indifferently she pretends not to look at him and drinks her coffe

yuvi reaches her and grabs her arms

"what ver u doing with aditya" he explodes

ashi thought he looks so convincing

if i didnt know i would have melted by now

her hate unable to see the true love in his eyes

she said "what did i do"

yuvi " i luv u how dare u hug aditya"

ashi " be broad minded yuvi hes just a friend "

yuvi " broad minded my foot u r mine i dont anybody near u"

saying this he takes her in his arms and hugs her tightly

ashi unable to control her emotions wishes if only this was true



but ............

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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
part 7
making out her way from his arms

ashi says" dont be jealous"

and continues" yuvi i am yours come to my birthday i will show to the world how much i luv u"

yeah right she says to herself

yuvi wanting to argue but unable to , feels relieved that she loves him

little knowing that the explosion that was waiting to explode for him

ashi went away plotting her own revenge leaving yuvi mesmerised with her beauty

he was simply staring at her unable to think what would happen if she was not in his life

how could he have not realised it before

he was hopelessly in love with her

i will make up to her

i will luv her more than anyone else can even dream of

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Posted: 20 years ago
#15
part 8
ashi was in her room thinking

he looks so convincing

his eyes his feelings

the warmth of his shoulders

just then vrinda enters the room

she sees ashi very quiet and despondent

"kya hua ashi"

"mate sab ki fikar karna chhod de " replies ashi and leaves in ahuff

her emotions were getting too much to bear

she loved him too much to really hate him

but i must be strong she said to herself

and called aditya again

" hey aditya how about tonight ? can we meet outside maurya high"

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Posted: 20 years ago
#16
part 9
ashi's preparations were in full swing

she wanted to free herself of all these feelings

and rid herself of yuvi forever

but her heart was out of her control

she was all the time thinking about yuvi

her thoughts wandering off to his memories

meanwhile yuvi was also in mission mode

he wanted the day to be perfect

after all it was the blessed day when ashi set foot on this planet

he would announce to the world what he felt for her

and also he did to her before everybody

i love her forever and i want her forever

i want her love for the rest of my life

i will ask her for her forgiveness

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Posted: 20 years ago
#17
part 10
d day was approaching soon

but ashis mind was not in it

she had no wish to celebrate her birthday

all she wanted was humiliation for yuvi

just then sonia make s her entery

"mam mam wassup , have a look at these dresses"

" hey bhaggu,is dinosaur se peecha chuda"

sonia visibly hurt " fine i am helping tia now"

aashi knowing she has hurt starts to say something but sonia has left the room

"fine all this because of yuvi i wont leave him"

yuvi was in his room

thinking of the perfect gift for ashi

no good at writing,

he was tearing pieces of his wasted efforts in paper

then he decide

direct action is what will work for me

i must confess to her in front of the world

only then wil she forgive me

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Posted: 20 years ago
#18

part 11

ashi mom was trying to get her into various outfits but ashis mind was too busy in her thoughts

she called up aditya and asked him to be ready and come to her party at maurya high

tia meanwhile was happily lokking at all the dresses that sonia was giving her

ranvir was watching her from outside telling nothing about his true love for her

yuvi was in his room rehearsing what to say when sid and nakul walk in and make fun of him

he just blasts them away

and makes his move towards the party venue

just then aditya arrives at the party

and ashi warmly greets him

making yuvi go into a jealous rage

he shouts "aditya"

part 12
yuvi lunges towards aditya and gives him a punch in the face

black eyed aditya says" whats the matter ?"

before landing yuvi a punch that flattens yuvi on the ground

"now what do u want to say yuvi " ashi taunts him

her heart crying a thousand times

"ashi please listen to me i love u and i................"

"i dont want to listen to u"

ashi grabs the mike

" look at this man the great yuvraj dev , pleading before me ha, ha, ha"

" wheres your manhood"

yuvi taking the mike from her hands

" ashi i want to tell u sumthing , i took a bet "

ashi turns around gazing at him

confused as to what is happening

" that i will make u fall in love with me"

"but little that i knew that i also love u"

"i love u , ilove u, ilove u"

"i am ready to accept whatever punishemnt u want to give me but dont leave meplease"

tears in his eyes making no effort to wipe it

allthe people sonia tia ranvir are staring at him

slowly they turned towards ashi to see her reaction

ashi was in two minds

her haert wanted to believe but her mind was not ready

seeing yuvi so hurt

sid and nakul reach the stage and say

"ashi he really loves u that bet was just a joke but this is seriuos"

all dams that ashi had built in her heart broke away as she ran into yvi outstretched arms caring not a damn of the world

Edited by lalit1982 - 20 years ago
lalit1 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#19
the above is the story in parts
as they were written
for the topic please follow this link
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/remix/55919/ashis-revenge-finished
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Posted: 20 years ago
#20
REAL COOL BUDDY....SCRIPT WRITIN HAAA...

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