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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
GUYS PUH-LEEZ MORE TIA N RANVEER STORIES!AND ROMATIC ONES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Karan rocks...!
luv AnKu!! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
hey lalit what u where abt to say plz continue.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
U GUYS ARE 2 GUD.KEEP IT UP
MANALI
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
under the moonlight
part 1
disclaimer: remix belongs to star one

note: this story belongs to me but any one can edit

he was looking at the female lying on his lap sleeping peacefully with not a care in the world

how heavenly her face was

he could gaze at her forever and ever

the moonlight was streaming across her face like a thousand rosebuds in spring

the sounds of the night cooing him to sleep

he yawned

stretching himself carefully so as to not wake the love of his life

he gently placed a kiss on her forehed

before dozing off resting by the tree trunk

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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
part 2
it was approaching midnight
and mp and vrinda were at their wits end
where was ashi
was the question topmost on their minds
vrinda" i am getting worried "
mp" i am too "
vrinda " ab kya karen "
mp" karna kya hain us yuvi ka sar fodna hain"
vrinda" are aise mat bolo koi problem ho gayi hogi"
mp "he mate vrindeshwari aap kabhi kisi ko bura maan sakti hain ya nahin"
vrinda " use chod aur bol ab karna kya hain"
mp " yuvi ke dosto ko pakdo aur unse poocho ki kahan gaye hain"
vrinda" itni raat ko"
mp" to kya subah uthaye ge unhe?"
vrinda " par main nahin jaa sakti "
mp " tujhe aana hain to aa"
vrinda " chal main bhi aati hoon "
vrinda and mp were tiptoeing their way to the boys hostel
but they were caught by Arjun

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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
part 3
nakul and sid were laughing
"so hes gone with ashi and they have still not returned"
" go to sleep now and dream that we too have this chance"

winking at nakul sid went to sleep

the sun dawned as usual making its way about the sky

filling the atmosphere with its colours banishing the darkness of the night

yuvi waked up slowly

and ashi got up disturbed by his jerk

"oh god are we still here"
ashi said as she came to her senses
" now what will everybody think of me"
" first we gottA GET out of here " yuvi replied
" u knew i feel asleep why didnt u wake me up" said ashi in a foul mood
"i feel asleep too"
"good excuse"
"shhh " he put his finger over her mouth and stared into her eyes


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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
Part 4

Ashi looked up into his eyes,full of warmth and care.
His naughty eyes hyponitizing him in an instant.he made her feel like no one ever did. god when did someone become so important in my life.
yuvi drew ashi closer to him.
"Ashi" softly sai d yuvi.
"yes yuvi " still gazing in his dark eyes.
" Maurya high nahin jaana hain kya"?
Ashi was back to earth.
wrapping his arms around Ashis neck
they made their way slowly towards school not knowing of the storm ahead.


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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
part 5
vrinda and mp were sitting in front of jamwals office
thankgod arjun had caught them before they went to the boys hostel otherwise..............
"so mp waiting here" said arjun with a smirk on his face
"vrinda tum kaise aa gayi ? lagta hain tumhe bhi bevakoofi karne ki aadat pad gayi hain?"

"arjun we are no mood to talk with u "
"is it so well then mr jamwal will talk to u"
just then latty goes by thinking what are the two girls doing here
she peeps into the room
mr jamwal rings the phone asking gloria to let the three in
"can u tell me what this is all about , arjun?"
"well sir these two were trying to sneak out of their hostel at night?"
" is that so well then punish them as u like arjun?"
arjun , his eyes showing a evil glance,just smiles.


meanwhile ashi and yuvi are returning to the school
ashi is desperately trying to call but her cell is down
she asks yuvi"can i borrow your cell "
yuvi replies "sure dear"
handing her his phone
ashi calls vrinda
vrinda sees her cell
"its yuvi calling"
mp says " give it to me i will smash this dumbhead"
latty continues to listen
"why is yuvi calling so early that too on a sunday"is the question in her mind


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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
part 6
mp grabs the phone and shouts"wheres ashi? "
"is shee all rite or i will kill u"
"hey mp be sufi main theek hoon"
"kahan thi tu ab tak"
pata hain kitne pareshaan ho gaye the hum log"
"aur yuvi ko dena zara usko do thappad marna hum dono ke taraf se"
ashi laughing "nahin yaar uski zaroorat nahi padegi"
latty listening to all this so ashi was out for the night hummmmmmmm
ashi" i be reaching in half an hour"
vrinda "let me talk"
but before she could talk ashi had disconnected
"so what was she saying" yuvi said
"yahi ki tera sir fodna hai" ashi replied
"baap re, pata nahin pyaar mein kya kya sehna padta hain?"
"yahaan par bhi daddy ko le aaye"
"waise bhi ab main hoon mein tumhara khyaal rakhoongi?"
ashi touches his head lovingly
yuvi takes her hand and kisses it
he draws her closer to himself
he fills her face in his eyes
their heads move closer until their lips touch each other
tentative at first and passionate in fury they kissed till they ran out of breath and had to separate
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30
part 7
yuvi slowly opened his eyes. he had done this b4
but this was special
sumthing about ashi had made him feel that way
what he was feeling was purelove ot lust or his hormones going out of control
he could start imagining himself with ashi after 50 years still being together

she had done this to him
made him a good for nothing lover
who cant think beyond ashi


ashi POV:

ashi slowly separated herself from yuvi
in her mind thought were coming and going quickly
"that was my first kiss"
"i know i luv him too much"
"only he is the person i can imagine being with"
"not anyone else"
"mom i found u a sonin law"
"how shocked mom will be?"
"this is the love of my life"


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