under the moonlight pt 18 comp 11/9/2005 - Page 8

Hey Lalit u r too cool ...pls send all this stuff to remix and u will next one to be on star one....
my regards to aallll of u....may u become future script writers and give us all the pleasure tht we deserve...which is presently been give by remix now a days..

sorry guys for the delay
i was in mumbai with my sis for the past 4 days
so was unable to post the update quickly
was very happy there so temporarily forgot about continuing my story

i have seen that a lot of u have guessed whats the ending gonna be but please this ektafication is neccesary from the too cute scenes that i was writing
evrey good story has a high point and a low point
hope u understand

yuvi did not know what he was doing
but he knew sumthing that hurt ashi would hurt him more
he couldnt bear to see ashi hurt or in pain
but he couldnt sacrifice either her honour or his freind
he wasnt that selfish
i will have to break up with ashi
god i cant do that
i love her too too much to even think that
but will have to do that
coming out of his thoughts
yuvi said to latty " i will break up with ashi and start dating u if u forget this stuff"
latty said" how can i be sure"
yuvi said" i will break up with her in front of u right now"
yuvi grabbed latty by the arm and rushed towards the girls room
he knocked on the door to see a pantingashi opening the door
"are u tired"
"no its all right " ashi replied
" get over with it" groaned latty bored at this sweettalk


yuvi steeling his mind
dying a thousand deaths as he spoke these words
"ashi i dont think i want to be your boyfriend any longer"
yuvi waited for the explosion that was going to come
but nothing happened
ashi replied" well it was good while it lasted "
"hope we can still be friends"
saying this she gave him a kiss on the cheeks and left from there
"by the way " she asked as she turned to go away
"why is latty here"

yuvi was amazed that she did not cry get angry no emotions at all
was only he in love
what was happening to him

hey lalit
iv been waiting for this
now that youve written it

its great....

im realy looking forward to what happens next.... 😊

man.gr8 stuff...looking forward eagerly.
p.s.i seriously understand the ektafication 😆 😉

hey natasha i thought u r leaving for your medical college

too good Lalit 👏 👏 👏....and I agree one can't write just the cute scenes all the while........so I am ok with the twist.....eagerly awaiting the continuation

gunia vanu
i know its hard to imagine yuvi and latty together but u need twists and turns to keep a story interesting

Hey lalit....this part was awesome.
now dont' delay too much yaar....

part 10
yuvi left the room quietly
latty just folowed him out
yuvi still couldnt believe it
he thought ashi loved him as much if not more
was he wrong'
was his love of no consequence


watching them from a distance was ashi
she was gazing at him quietly
why couldnt he trust her
as if we couldnt fight the world together
if we are to live together
learn to trust me in thick and thin
i want to be with u all my life
but with a yuvi who trusts me
who believes that i can fight
i can stand with him
i can bear to face the world
u n i could have handled latty together
what u dont know is that i overheard u and latty speaking