under the moonlight pt 18 comp 11/9/2005

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natasha-remix

@natasha-remix

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 20 years ago

#81

wow

nice twist....

gr8 work lalit
keep it up

its amazing

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lalit1

@lalit1

Dazzler

Posted: 20 years ago

#82

does somebody want to update this story
if yes please pm me because i am too busy these days
any volunteers please come forward
fate rikzik lamina kudi420 angad_cutest anyone plz

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mads

@mads

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 20 years ago

#83

Wow.....awesome twist......u r as good as any of the authors.....plz continue....👏

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ashi_mania

@ashi_mania

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 20 years ago

#84

too good lalit 👏 👏 👏

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lalit1

@lalit1

Dazzler

Posted: 20 years ago

#85

part 11
yuvi was still at the crossroads thinking what to do
life without ashi made no sense to him
he was like a fish out of water
even his beloved guitar seemed like a stranger to him
ashi wwas gazing at him lovingly wanting to tell me that she loved him still
but consoled herself that she needs to get Latty out of their life
But she needed a plan
she would need help suddenly she thought of sid(my way of introducing my fav character and younger bro of my friend)

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rikzik

@rikzik

Inactive

Posted: 20 years ago

#86

hey i dint know sid was ur favourite character.neways good job. 😊

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 20 years ago

#87

👏 👏 👏

nice going lalit

and sid is really great

he has actually been the problem solver during the bday party too nah.am sure he will be doing his jadoo in ur fan fic too 😃

aaahhhoooo Sid/Mithun Style

write more na...am really interested in finding out what sid will do