under the moonlight pt 18 comp 11/9/2005 - Page 10

hey congs man u too have hit a century. 👏 👏
ashi is my favourite too............and of course yuvi. 😳

Great goin' lalit.....
I am really glad that you've decided to include Sid! No one ever writes any fan fic bout him...there was just 1 by priyanka if I remember right on sid & latty!

I hope you intend to bring a little bit of humour... taht would be awsum.

Anyways, waiting for the next instalment!!!

lalit plz find some time to write some more..........and a big thanx for including sid coz he is my favourite too

amazing stuff lalit 👏 👏 👏 👏....really eager to know what ashi and sid r planning to do

wow lalit...amzing....keep it up.....thank god yuvi aur latty ko separate nahin kiya.....lol

part 12
sid was in his room
swinging to the tune of the latest enimem song
trying to rap along with him
but failing miserably
fortunately he was alone in the bathroom
otherwise he would have been the laughing stock
coming out of the bathroom in a towel
he imagined a mike in his hands
and was rocking wildly when ashi came in through the door
in spite of the serious mood she was in
she was laughing uncontrollably
sid turned around highly embarassed to see ashi
he ran into the bathroom again
got dressed and came out
ashi had managed to stop herself from laughing by then
sid said" what are u doing here yuvi is out call his cell?"
trying to make her go out of the room
ashi said" i have to talk to u"
sid said " i am busy"
ashi said " listen airhead this is important its abt yuvi"
sid replied" awww everything about yuvi is important to ashi dearest"
ashi" and latty"
sid kept quiet as he pondered over what she meant
then ashi quickly filled him with the details as to what had happened so far

ohk
i write this every time i read ur fanfic and im writing it again

ur awesome

and i mean like you fill in on every detail in ur fanfic....

not leaving any corners blank ....

amazing stuff...

pls continue ... 😊 👏 👏 👏

should post one part by end of day today

well im sure we're all waiting for it

Hmm...Lalit, again, I have to just say:
Lookin forward to the next part (as usual)
I really enjoy your fan fic.
Hope you are'nt too busy so that u can post ur fan fics faster.
I just hate waiting and havin to wonder what's gonna happen next. Or are you doin it on purpose?? 😡 Just to raise our curiosity and have a good laugh while we are all desperately waiting for the story??? 😉

ok...i didnt c ur follow up post....so I'll look for the next part this evenin'