under the moonlight pt 18 comp 11/9/2005

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rikzik

@rikzik

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Posted: 20 years ago

#51

hey lalit.u dont need to improve since u r already good man...........kissing scenes obviously allowed or else wt is the use of calling it romant6ic? 😳

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ashi_mania

@ashi_mania

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+ 2

Posted: 20 years ago

#52

Awesome Lalit 👏 👏 👏 👏.......plz continue soon

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sharanya

@sharu16

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Posted: 20 years ago

#53

excellent work as usual,lalit 👏 👏 👏

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mads

@mads

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 20 years ago

#54

Wow lalit.👏....keep writing like dat.....and u'll hav all the authors of romantic novels packing their bags.....U r toooooo amazing.....plz continue.....now i'm waiting all the more for the next part.....

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Nishi

@nishi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 20 years ago

#55

hey lalit its too good !!!!!

as far as romanctic is concerned kissing scenes may be allowed if thats necessary ,but dont go too much !!

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Gunia

@|Persephone|

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 20 years ago

#56

toooo good...post soon n i think such kissing scenes r allowed cuz they didn't have much gory details if u know what i mean 😆 😉

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natasha-remix

@natasha-remix

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 20 years ago

#57

yep lalit that was amazing

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lalit1

@lalit1

Dazzler

Posted: 20 years ago

#58

part 7
yuvi slowly opened his eyes. he had done this b4
but this was special
sumthing about ashi had made him feel that way
what he was feeling was purelove ot lust or his hormones going out of control
he could start imagining himself with ashi after 50 years still being together

she had done this to him
made him a good for nothing lover
who cant think beyond ashi

ashi POV:

ashi slowly separated herself from yuvi
in her mind thought were coming and going quickly
"that was my first kiss"
"i know i luv him too much"
"only he is the person i can imagine being with"
"not anyone else"
"mom i found u a sonin law"
"how shocked mom will be?"
"this is the love of my life"

sorry guys it took too long but was kind of busy