'Old Memories'-FF(PT 7 PG 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeshhhhhhhhhhhhhh
me first one to rpeply!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey its really nice...so sonia n sumit r grandpa n grandma......sweet 😳 n since u say its an AY fic I presume Naina n Ira r ashi n yuvi's kids 😃...neways continue soon....cant wait to know whats the mystery behind that book😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part 👏 ss r gp now 😉 cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool part !!! 😛 cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART3

"When is Ira coming?",asked someone one for the 100th time."How would I know?",Naina yelled back.This three letterword"Ira" seemed to be on everyones mouth and Naina was irritated.No she wasnt jealous of her sister but just that she was waiting for her too like the others and she needed her bestfriend by her side for one of the most important days in her life.She jumped when she felt a pat on her back and turned to see a boy of around 25years."Vivaan you scared me",she said .
Vivaan-didnt mean to sweetheart,by the way you look great.

Naina-Thanks !but you are late.

Another boy who was also around 25 years joined them and he hugged both of them.

Vivaan-Hey Arin! hows life man?You are here on time

Arin-Lifes good man!!(lookin at Naina)Im on time coz of her!Sometimes you have to do things which you are not used to do for sisters.

Naina-Shut up Bhai.By the way were are the others?Arin turned around to point to his friends when three of them spotted few girls surronding a boy of about 23years.

Naina-who is that?

Arin and Vivaan-Who else?

Naina-Oh no!Ryan not again!!!

The boy who heard his name looked up and saw his friends and pushed the girls aside and came over to the three of them and hugged them.

Ryan-So all set?Lets start the programme.

Naina-We cant we have to wait for Nanus little Angel

Ryan-That loser? we dont have to wait for HER!!!!

Vivaan-Thank God Im not the only one whose late.Suddenly the lights went off and the dj made an announcement.

Dj-We have some one special here today who wants to say something.

A girl took the mic from him.

Girl-Today is a very special day for my sister,but im late so I just wanted to tell her that this time I really was held up in a traffic jam.By now everyone realised who the girl was.

Girl-So this song specially fro you Naina.The lights came back and everyone saw a girl who was wearing a black shirt and a short cargo skirt and she looked gorgeous,few guys were awe-struck.Ryan looked at them and asked them to shut their mouths.The girl was Ira.Then the song played it was basically an apology and at the end there was a bday wish.

Naina-Thank you

Ira-Its ok! My pleasure.Both of them then hugged and Naina was wished by Vivaan,Ryan and Arin.Ryan and Arin then went to get a drink and Naina was being wished by the others.So this left Ira alone with Vivaan.

Ira-So when are you doing the big thing?

Vivaan-after everyone leaves.Im scared!

Ira-Dont be you know her answer.

Vivaan-Ya but what about your grandparents?

Ira-Arin and I can manage Nanu.Ryan is the only one who can manage Nani.But you have to say PLEASE if you want any help from me.

Vivann-ok PLEASEEE

Ira-fine ill do it.They then left to meet all their friends .Ira was happy to see her friend Kiara and went to her and they hugged.

Ira-Hey .Kiara Long time.

Kiara-Ya I know.Suddenly Ryan came there.

Ryan-Hey Kiara!you are looking nice.by the way what are you doing with this freak?

Ira-hold your tounge you prat!

Ryan-ooh Im scared!

Ira-Oh just shut up.

Ryan-What makes you think ill listen to you?

Kiara-Guys cut it out

Ira-Ya your rite. I shouldnt waste my time talking to idiots like him.(to Ryan)God save you.

Ryan-which god are you talking about?The one who made you my twin sister?No thanks I dont need his help.Suddenly one of there friend cameup to them and asked them to hurry.

Vivaan was on his knees in front of Naina and he took out a ring and asked her,"will you marry me?",she smiled and said "yes",a tear rolled down her cheek Arin,Ryan and Ira were happy to see them both.

Ok I know guys you are all waiting for AY parts but theyll come soon I promise.Heres a little info about the new characters

Mahi -Elder daughter of Nakul and Lathika.25yra

Meha-2nd daughter of Nakul and Lathika23yrs

Bhuvi -daughter of Pri and Aseem.25yrs

Charu -2nd daughter of Pri and Aseem.24yrs

Moksh-1st Son of Meher and Sid.25yrs

Nirav-2nd Son of Meher and Sid.26yrs

.Kiara-daughter of Mp and Aman24yrs

Tara-daughter of Vrinda and Varun.24yrs

Ishan -Son of Vrinda and Varun26yrs

Parth-Son of Mp and Aman26yrs

Vivaan-Son of Kabir[uvs friend] and Yamini.Nainas love intrest.27yrs

Arin-son of Tia and Ranveer25yrs

Naina-Daughter of Tia and Ranveer24yrs

Ryan and Ira-Ashi and Yuvis twins24yrs

ok so these were the 2nd gen of remix!!

hope you liked it.

ok so the love angles are

Mahi-Ishan

Meha-Moksh

Bhuvi-Nirav

Charu-Parth

Tara-Arin

Naina-Vivaan

Kiara-Ryan

Ira-unrevealed.

Note-In this story AY are the main characters but equally important are Ryan and Ira(more than Ryan).You will she AY's story being repeated through Ira.

Edited by rockingrebel - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4

"Hello aunty & uncle said Kabir & Yamini(Vivaans parents).
"Hello beta how are you?".said Summet Ahuja and his wife came in from the kitchen with the servants who brought some snacks.
Kabir-Uncle coming straight to the point we want Vivaan and Naina to get married as they love each other.What is your opinion?
Sumeet-Iam very glad that Naina chose a correct boy for herself.
Sonia-Of course we have no problem with the marriage.
Everyone is happy
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Ira is in her room and takes out the book that she had got from the storeroom and she opens the first page looks at a picture of her parents Yuvraj and Anvesha Dev and smiles.They looked so good together she thought.No couple could ever look so good and no guy could look as handsome as her dad she thought.Before turning the page she wondered if what she was doing was right could she read someone elses diary?"of course I can its my moms",she thought.

She started reading the diary from the time her mom joined Maurya High that was where she Ryan,Naina and Arin had studied.She read about how her mom found her teenage love and how her father had once broken her moms heart but she wasnt ready to accept her dads fault afterall she had admired him she blamed 'Sid Uncle' for it.She also read about Kabir and Yamini and was shocked they were Vivaans parents afterall.when she read about one of her moms boyfriend-Aditya she was stunned she had heard that name somewhere she tried to recollect but exactly then her granddad came and called her for dinner and she couldnt refuse him.
Edited by rockingrebel - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey the fiction seems interesting... i am looking forwards for more chapters 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dis is really intrstng!!plz cont sooooon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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too gud n unterestin...plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting fic!
please continue soon!
i'd like to see how AY's story progresses through Ira

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