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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART5

"Ok goodnight! everyone i need to sleep early or else i might miss my swimming practice again"said Ira as she hurried to her room as soon as she finished her dinner.Sonia was surprised she never went to bed as soon as she finished eating she would watch the TV or woild use the computer or fight with Ryan or Naina."Anyways i need to sleep too" she thought and went to her room .

IRA's room
"Phew!Finally illl be able to read moms diary properly"
On the first page Anveshas name was written
and there was this pic


She started to read the book

Place-London(my dino dads place)

Hey bhaggu! i never knew that I,Anvesha Ray Banerjee would ever write a diary its something I thought I would never do but I have no other choice.This place is so boring My Dino Dad who remebered that he has a daughter after these many years brings me to this place away from my friends,my school,my Mom,Kuki&Leo!!
There is no one else to talk to so all I can do is to write a diary.
Ok london is a good place but not Dinos house his house is actually nice but the ony problem is that no one speaks to me properly they just ask me what I want blah.blah but dinos butler Mr.Stephen is damn good.The cook Mrs.Lobo is also good she can make any type of food item even Indian!!!!!!Ok now why do i call Mr.Banerjee my "dad" dino?
coz he just dissapeared like dinos he was extinct for me and my mom till that dreadful day he came to take me.
Let me pen down something about myself from the day i joined Maurya.
Day1 was fun I made new friends MP.But i met that snob Tia Ahuja and her "angels" and that Pyscho Yuvraj Dev

Ira stopped here to laugh"mom called dad a pyscho?"
She continued to read.

The following days were spent in goa where the schooll took us for a trip.I made friends with Maatha Vrindeshwari(Vrinda),Ranveer,Varun,Aman and Lathy was fine now she behaves like a loser.Oh ya I also had a boyfriend named Saahil who 2-timed me with that timbet Tia ahuja oh what an insult.Then I meet Kabir,he is damn good though he is Yuvi's friend.Yuvi reminds me of something.oh wait Mrs.Lobo is calling me for dinner.Dino will be late today also but Mr.Stephens said hell bring a dvd of Sherlock holmes God! ilove detective stories so bye bye!!!!!!!!!!!
"Mom loved detective stories too?"


Edited by rockingrebel - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No replies.. 😭
is my fic bad?????????? pls tell me if it is bad
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i didnt even know u hav written a fic 😃 😃 give me some time wld read and replyyyy 😃 but am warning u ok i replyyyyy loooooooooooooooong u wld get tired of reading 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part6

"Ira come down for dinner",called out Sumeet.
Ira could reuse anyone but not her grandpa afterall she was the apple of his eyes.Ira and Sumeet shared a special bond.He always pampered her but never accepted it.His other grandchildren Arin,Ryan and Naina were not jealous of Ira and seemed to be ok with the fact that she was thebaby of the houseand everyone adored her and without her the house was incomplete.Ira reminded everyone of Ashi-the talkative,vibrant,straightfoward,funloving girl.Ashi had made a special place for herself in the hearts of all the people in the house-her family,friends and servants.Even Kailash Kaka who was nearing his75th bday adored ira as a child she would often tell him to rest and try to do his daily chores with her little hands.Ashi and Yuvi were proud to see their two kids Ryan and Ira help or atleast try to help everyone around them.Ranveer and Tia also were proud parents of a mature Arin ,who was the eldest of Sonia and Sumeets grandkids and alittle girl Naina.Sonia and Sumeet were happy with their family two lovely adorable daughters,two sons-in-law who were more like sons and four grandkids.It seemes like picture perfect to them but had that dreadful day not happened they would all be double happy not that they werent happy now but there would be four othe people sitting with them on their huge 14-seater dinnig table instead of just six of them now.


Dinnig Table

"Oh not again!this is the third time in the week that we get to eat palak paneer(cottge cheese in spinach)!"cried Ira who detested the sight of Palak(spinach)"gatuu kaka phir se palak paneer!aap ne paneer butter masala kyun nahi banaya? kya palak wholesale daam mein mil raha hein ya phir ghar mein palak ka koi ped hain jo non-stop palak deta hain."

Sonia cut her short ,"Ira Palak paneer Naina ka favourite hain aur uski shaadi tho teen hafto mein ho rahe hein uske ghar se jaane ke baad tumare pasand ke cheeze he banege"
"Only till you get married sis",said Ryan
Ira gave him a whatever kind of look.
(Ira-I,Naina-N,Ryan-R,Arin-A,Sonia-S,Sumeet-Su)
I-Oh no!!!That means three more weeks of double torture!!
Su-double torture?(everyone looked surprised)
I-yeah,torture1-more of palak paneer,torture 2-more of Naina her shopping sickness and the rituals.
A-you bet(Arin and Ira give each other a high five)
N-shut up both of you .you guys think its a joke im leaving this house and you guys and you guys are laughing?(shes all sad and is about to cry)
I&A-Sorry
They all hug and after they finish their dinner they sit in the hall with ice-creams discussing a few things about Naina's wedding.
S-Ira now that Naina's getting married dont you think that you should also think about settling down.
I-whatever nani.I havent thought about it as yet.
Su-Atleast give it a thought now.
I(yawns)-im to sleepy goodnight everyone.
The other kids also say goodnight and go to sleep.
S-You know this kids are so attached to each they all love each other alot and Ira she is like the whole familys darling I just hope she find herself a good guy just like Ashi did.(tears come out of her eyes)
Su-Sonia dont worry I have complete confidence on Ira she is sensible in such issues and im sure she wont let us or anyone else in the family down.She is my pride and one day Iam sure I can proudly tell the whole world that I am Ira Dev's granddad.
S-Im sure too.Im proud of all my grandkids for though their parents died in an accident 15 years ago when they were all barely 10 except Arin they all took it bravely ,like their parents would want them to.

Su-I know since then they are the world to us.
S-and they love each other alot.But you know what I miss my children
Su-I know but if it wasnt for thate dreadful accident-
S-Summet how any times have I told you that I still feel that it wasnt an accident
Su-we have talked about this several times and please for heaven's sake dont get started again

Ashi Yuvi Tia and Ranveer have all died in an accident the rest will be disclosed later.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NOTE


Hi as you all know this ff is abt 2nd gen of remix. .so i was wondering If I should introduce actors for the new charcters.If anyone has any suggetions pls let me know.
Characters
Mahi -Elder daughter of Nakul and Lathika.25yra

Meha-2nd daughter of Nakul and Lathika23yrs

Bhuvi -daughter of Pri and Aseem.25yrs

Charu -2nd daughter of Pri and Aseem.24yrs

Moksh-1st Son of Meher and Sid.25yrs

Nirav-2nd Son of Meher and Sid.26yrs

.Kiara-daughter of Mp and Aman24yrs

Tara-daughter of Vrinda and Varun.24yrs

Ishan -Son of Vrinda and Varun26yrs

Parth-Son of Mp and Aman26yrs

Vivaan-Son of Kabir[uvs friend] and Yamini.Nainas love intrest.27yrs

Arin-son of Tia and Ranveer25yrs

Naina-Daughter of Tia and Ranveer24yrs

Ryan and Ira-Ashi and Yuvis twins24yrs

ok so these were the 2nd gen of remix!!

hope you liked it.

ok so the love angles are

Mahi-Ishan

Meha-Moksh

Bhuvi-Nirav

Charu-Parth

Tara-Arin

Naina-Vivaan

Kiara-Ryan

Ira-unrevealed.


Note-You will she AY's story being repeated through Ira and Ryan is also imp
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part 👏 nd gr8 idea of having season 2 with der children 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooohh...i luvd it...i jus read ol da prts...ossum mann...u hav gt urself anuther admirer...waitin fr ur nxt prt....sry dunno ur name...bt this fic rox......luvd it nd hopin fr the nxt prt 2 b as awesum.....bt the names r toooooo confusin...whoz whoz daughter nd whoz son..aaaahh....2 mch fr my brain..lol.....ryt soon...
-pinky
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Story upto now
TR and AY have all died and this story is about their children who stay with Sonia and Sumeet.Ira and ryan are Ays twins.TRs children are Arin and naina whose getting married to Vivan


Part7

"Oh ok so you are going to Bangalore,so I have to recieve your friend?",said Naina,"but when is he coming?"
Vivan-Oh on the 23rd.
Naina-23rd.Oh no!! I have to go somewhere with nani that day for our marriage shopping.
V-Oh my god !what do we do know?
N-Well you could ask Arin bhai,Ryan or Ira to pick him up.
V-Yes thats a nice idea.
N-Yes and I guess we should be going back now.

Back at Naina's house
V-Hey guys I need your help.
Arin-What is it?
V-One of my friend is coming from Newzealand for our marriage on the 23rd,and both of us wont be in town so can one of you pick him up from the airport,please?
Ryan-Thats like day after man.Well im too busy that day
Ira-And what exactly are you doing that day?
Ryan-None of your business!!!you are free that day right so why dont you go ahead?
Ira-No im not free.I have some work.
R-And what is that?
I-None of your business
R-Oh yeah?Then why dont you just shutup and go ahead with your"work" and let me do mine
I-Thats because you dont have any work
R-Ofcourse I do-
Arin-Shut up both of you.Vivan Ill go
V-Thanks.But theres another problem
A,R,N&I-Now what?
V-well can he stay here for a few days till I come back?
Sonia-ofcourse
V-Thanx Nani
Sonia-Gattu,woh guest upar ka guest room saaf karna.
I-why?woh room toh aap kisi k use karne nahi deti.
S-par yeh special guest hey na.
Sonia leaves with Gattu.Vivan,Arin and Ryan also leave for some party.
I-Naina I already dont like this friend of Vivan's
N-Well...
I-Oh whatever I know its going to take you ages to reply.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gurllll come onnnnnnnnnnnnnn continue naaa! plz!!!!
i really liked the fic so plzzz!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey yaar awesome fic. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon .we are waiting for early response

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