'Old Memories'-FF(PT 7 PG 5)

HI guys this is my second attempt of fanfic.If u like the idea I shall continue.Its basicaly a AY FF again.

As she walked towards the attic of her house she felt weird.It was a strange feeling.She looked at the lock which was covered with dust.Slowly she wipped it of and took the keys from her pocket and opened the lock.When she entered the room she saw dust everywhere and was about to sneeze but controlled herself.She was careful not to make a sound or else she would wake someone up.She hunted for a something on all the shelfs and finally found what she had beem looking for and smiled to herself and her eyes were filled with joy.She came out locked the room ,ran down .She then tiptoed to her grandparents room and put the key back and made to her room.She cleaned the dust on the book that she had just "sneaked out" from the attic and wondered why she and her cousins were not allowed to that room?Anyways she thought I found what I wanted."But should I tell Naina about it?" she thought."No,no shell tell the whole world about it.

She suddenly yawned,she looked at the watch and saw 3:30am 1st May ."oh no "she thought."Tommorow I have to go for my swimming practice".And she put the book in her cupboard and locked it and went to sleep.

Hope u liked it.

sure do continue... i really liked the concept of ur 1st fic 😳 will read this and edit my post 😳

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ya great start continue soon
i liked the concept 😛

very ....... nice yaar......excellent start.... 👏

great start... do continue asap 😳

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/617414/relations-part1page2

this is my other ff though its not related to remix i HOPE U LIKE IT

PART2

BRINGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!the alarm went off.A girl who was aged about 23years looked at the clock it showed 6:30."Damn it! I got only 3hours sleep."she thought,"anyways i think ill miss my swiming practice today",she thought and went back to sleep and after few seconds she heard a bang on the door."Ira,wake up."said a girl from outside, she also was about the same age.Ira woke up and went to the door."Naina how many times have I told you not to bang my door!"she yelled.Naina frowned and said "whatever come down fast we have to go".
Ira-Im not coming you carry on.
Naina-Oh Come on,hurry up.
Ira(irritated)-Woman! dont you understand plain english Im not coming you carry on or should I say it in hindi.mein nahi arahihu.tum jao(sorry for the hindi)
Naina-But why?
Ira-coz I need to sleep.
Just then a man of around 60 enters
Man-whats happening here?
Naina-Nothin nanu I was just asking Ira to come down so that all of us can go to the club-
Man-Club?at 6:45 in the morning?
Naina-Nanu remeber there are somethin called sports for which we have to practice?
Man-oh ya I forgot
Naina(slowly)-ya remember you are growing old.
Man-did you say something?
Naina-nothing.just that Ira's not coming down.
Man(looks at Ira)-why?
Ira-Because Nanu im sleepy and I need sleep.
Man-Naina if Ira wants to sleep then let her and you go and do your practice and stuff and dont you dare trouble my angel again.
Ira-Yehhh
Naina-but.oh whatever.
Ira makes a face at Naina which she ignores and goes.
Ira-Thanx nanu.now i need to go and sleep.
Man-its ok my baccha.go and sleep.
A woman who is about 55-60years comes there.
woman-ur spoiling her.
Man-shes my granddaughter.
woman-Shes my granddaughter too.I love her but I dont pamper her like you.
Ira-oh nani,you are just jealous that nanu lives me more than you.Anyways goodmorning and gooodnight.
The woman is surprised for what Ira just said and looks at her husband who is laughing.
Woman-stop laughing.me and jealous?Doesnt she know that her Grandmom,the great Soniya Ray Ahuja isnt jealos of anybody?
Man-Whatever Sonia.(and he goes)
Sonia-Summet stop

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
itz amazing....... snia nd sumeet r just so old.... nice to hear that in their old age also they r so charming............

continue soon
love ya loads
sonam 😳 😳