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Posted: 20 years ago
hey esha n tia....help me cont this story guys...
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Posted: 20 years ago
that is just fantastic writting. 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
gr8 lamina 👏 👏 👏
i dont feel i will b able to cont today .....so some of u will have to.........lamina if free plz cont
but tommorow for sure i will
esha
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Posted: 20 years ago
both of them agree to tias plan
the next day tia goes to the cafe with a very sad face arjun notices this and asks her wat happened
t-arjun tia ko lagta hai ki ranveer tia se pyaar
a(very happy but not expressing it)-no tia ranveer tumse bohut pyaar karta hai
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Posted: 20 years ago

TIA-RANVEER

Meanwhile Ranveer is watching from some distance along with Aman
R: Agar Arjun Tia ke jyada nazdik gaye ya unke hurt karne ki koshish ki tum hum unhe maar dalenge!

A: Shant..ghadha dhari bhim..i mean Ranveer shant...dekho dont get this angry warna humara plan flop ho jayega

Ranveer looks at him angrily and then focuses his attention back to Tia

T:pata nahi...Ranveer has been acting so distant again...Tia ke toh kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai..Tia is so confused...Is saare tension ke wajh se dekho Tia ko dark circles bhi ho rahe hai dekho

AK (Arjun Khanna):Tia dont worry...kuch nahi hoga...u r worrying just like that

T: Tia hopes so too Arjun...pata nahi kyu Tia yeh saab tumse keh rahi hai...may be Tia still considers u a friend thats y...Tia should go now...If Ranveer see u with Tia he wont like it..

AK:Tia..tumne mujhse is liye kaha..ki i am ur friend..aaj bhi...Tia believe me when i say this...i know i have acted a bit stupid in the last few days...but i do care about u a lot and if friends is all u want us to be...i will be ok with it...Tia i will be ur friend always and u can come and talk to me whenever u want...u know that right

T: ha Arjun...is liye toh shayad Tia tumse yeh saab keh payi..Thanks for understanding Tia...u always understand Tia so well...Accha ab Tia ko chalna chahiye

AK: ok Tia

Tia goes walks away and comes to the place where Ranveer and Aman are. Meanwhile the angels are still keeping an eye on Arjun

AK: Arjun lagta hai mujhe kuch karne ki jaroorat hi nahi padi....my plan is working already...aab sissodia jyada din Tia ki life main nahi rahega...i was worrying over nothing...mujhe pata hona chahiye tha ki flunky jkuch na kuch mistake karega...sissodia .u are gone now

Arjun has a sarcastic smile on his face and walks away

Meanwhile..

R: Tia aap thik hai na...Arjun ne kuch aapko kaha toh nahi nah

T: Nahi Ranveer...dont worry Tia is ok...Arjun na kuch nahi kiya Tia ko

A: Kya kaha Arjun ne..did he buy it

T:Tia ne uss kaha ki lagta hai Ranveer doesnt love Tia anymore and he is acting distant..aur Tia abhi bhi Arjun ko friend manti hai is liye she can talk to him abt it. aur Tia ne yeh bhi kaha ki if Ranveer finds out then he will be angry...Tia ko lagta hai ki Arjun ne yeh maan liya hai...He was saying that he wants to be friends with Tia too...

A:hope us ne yeh maan liya ho

R: Tia hume abhi bhi aapka Arjun ke saath aakle baat karna safe nahi lagta...hum bohot worried hai...kahi woh kuch aapko hurt na kare

T:Ranveer...(holds his hand)...jab tum har wakt Tia ke saath ho toh Tia ko kuch worry karne ki jaroorat hai...Tia know that u cant bear Tia getting hurt..but Tia trust u..Tia know that u will always protect her...That is what gives Tia the strength to do this..

Ranveer holds Tia in his arms

R:Tia hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai..aur aab i feel so proud of you...aap ki siwa shayad aur koi yeh hamare liye kabhi nahi karta..thanks Tia

T:Ranveer...Tia loves a lot 2...and Tia can do anything for u

just then the angels come running

P&M: Tia...Tia

A: kya hua...

P:hum ne Ajrun ki baatein sun li

M:ha usne Tia ko believe kar liya hai...usse lagta hai ki uska plan toh us ke kuch karne se pehle hi work kar raha hai

R: are u sure usse koi shak nahi hua

P: bilkul nahi...woh toh yeh keh raha tha ki woh ab sissodia toh Tia ki zindagi se bohot jaldi door kar dega

Tia looks at Ranveer

R:Arjun...ab hum tumhe jyada din yaha nahi rehne denge...(looks at Tia)...Tia aab Arjun jyada din humari zindagi mein nahi rahega...yeh hum aapse wada karte hai

Tia smiles at Ranveer

A:this is good news...now we should start finding out some info on him too....plan B ke baare mein bhi sooch na chahiye

R: ha bana...aab hum is mein der nahi karna chahte

Pri and meher go away ..to snoop on Arjun

A:(looks at his watch)...band ki pratice 1 hr mein hai...i will go and find ashi and yuvi...i will meet u in the shed in an hr ok

R: Thik hai bana

Aman goes away

T: Ranveer...kya aabhi bhi tum worried ho

R:nahi Tia...hum toh uss plan B ke baare mein sooch rahe the

T:Ranveer..woh kya tum us ke baare main baad mein nahi sooch sakte...now focus on Tia only ok

Ranveer smiles

R: jaise aapka hukum my princess (and kisses Tia's hand)

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
thats soooooooooooooooooooo cute lamina i really enjoy reading your bits anyways
ranveer-tia hum aapse kuch pooche
tia-ofcourse ranveer shoot
ranveer-tia aapne humme aisa kya dekha ki humse itna luv kari hai
tia-(in a teasing manner)-ranveer tia ko pata nahi ki tia ne tumhe kya dekha coz ti apna time kabhi ek gawar oaor dehathi pe apna time waste nahi karti(and then runs away)
ranveer then rund behind her to catch her
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Posted: 20 years ago

thx esha and tia...love ur parts a lot too 😃

TIA -RANVEER

Ranveer runs behind Tia and catches her...well she couldnt run too far in her short dress na 😉 ..Ranveer puts his arms around her from behind

R:accha toh hum gawar aur dehati hai...(saying this while smiling)..toh...phir aap hamare saath kya kar rahi hai

T:Ranveer..(trying to break free..well not really 😳 )...kya kar rahe ho..koi dekh lega toh...

R:koi dekh lega toh dekh lega...hum kisse se darte nahi

T:Ranveer chood bhi do...we will get in trouble

R:humne aapko chodne ki liye thode hi thama hai (total flimi huh ..i know 😉 )

T:Ranveer...

R:Tia ..hum aapko tab tak nahi chodenge jab tak aap hamare sawal ka jawab nahi deti

T:konsa sawal

R:yehi ...ke aap hum inta pyaar kyu karti hai

T:..waise sochne wali baat hai...tume koi ek khubhi thogi na hai

R:kya...(and is about the let go of Tia)

but Tia stops him

T: Ranveer...tume koi SIRF EK HI KHUBI nahi.. jiske wajh se Tia tumse inta pyaar karti hai...u have so many..Ranveer....Tia ke liye tum perfect ho...

R:Tia....hamari nazar mein bhi aap se accha aur koi nahi

T:Ranveer...Tia ko hamasha aise hi pyaar karte rehna....

R:Tia...hum yeh wada aapse nahi kar sakte

T:what do u mean?

R:Tia...hum aapse yeh wada nahi kar sakte ki hum aapko hamesha AISE hi pyar karenge...par hum aapse itna wada kar sakte hai ki....with every passing day...hum aapse aur zyada pyaar karenge

T:Ranveer!!!...tumne toh Tia ko daara hi diya tha

R:sorry Tia...hum toh baas aapse toda majak kar rahe the...i love u Tia

Ranveer holds Tia tightly and gives her a quick peck on the cheek

Tia frees her self and runs towards her room giggling...Ranveer runs behind her


Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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arjun sees them running & feels something is fishy
tia runs to her room followed by ranveer
both tias & ranveers heart beats have increased....ranveer closes the door...arjun who was following them decides to wait & listen
r: ab app kaha jayengi
he walk towards her & pulls her by her waist
r: ab app ko hummare sawal ka javab dena hi hoge
t: ranveer...plz tia ko chodo
r: phela app kahiye app humse love kyu karti hai?(looking deep into her eyes)
t: tia ko nahi pate.....tum tia se kyu pyaar karte ho??
r: kyuki hum app ke bine jee nahi sakte.....app humari life hai
ranveer hugs her & she hugs him back
r(ranveer has a naughty smile):well tia ab appko huma salery deny chahiye
t: salery .....wat salery???????
r: app bhul gayi..hum jo kuch bhi karenge uske badle huma app se salery ke taur pa kiss chahiye
t:par ranveer tumne toh ajj kuch bhi nahi kiye....sab tia ne kiye....tia ne arjun ke pas jakar friendship ki acting ki.........tum ne kya kiye
r: well humne app ko unke pas jane diye...pate hai yeh kitne difficult job tha....inke badle hum toh apni salery chahiye......aur app ki bat bhi theek hai ...app ne itne kam kiye toh hum app ko bhi salery de date hai
ranveer holding tia by her waist give her a kiss on her cheek
r: ab hummare job khatem ab app ki bari hai tia
ranveer is still holding her
t:ranveer ..plz tia ko jane do(she is all blushing)
ranveer brings her more close & whisper in her ears
r: tia app jab blush karti hai to bahut achi lagti hai
outside arjun has heared all this & is very angry
arjun(thinking):tia tumne yeh mare saath ache nahi kiye...mai tumse itne pyaar karte hu aur tum ne mujse jooth bole....magar mai tumhe appne banekar hi rahunge...by tit or tat)
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: lamina

thx esha and tia...love ur parts a lot too 😃

TIA -RANVEER

Ranveer runs behind Tia and catches her...well she couldnt run too far in her short dress na 😉 ..Ranveer puts his arms around her from behind

R:accha toh hum gawar aur dehati hai...(saying this while smiling)..toh...phir aap hamare saath kya kar rahi hai

T:Ranveer..(trying to break free..well not really 😳 )...kya kar rahe ho..koi dekh lega toh...

R:koi dekh lega toh dekh lega...hum kisse se darte nahi

T:Ranveer chood bhi do...we will get in trouble

R:humne aapko chodne ki liye thode hi thama hai (total flimi huh ..i know 😉 )

T:Ranveer...

R:Tia ..hum aapko tab tak nahi chodenge jab tak aap hamare sawal ka jawab nahi deti

T:konsa sawal

R:yehi ...ke aap hum inta pyaar kyu karti hai

T:..waise sochne wali baat hai...tume koi ek khubhi thogi na hai

R:kya...(and is about the let go of Tia)

but Tia stops him

T: Ranveer...tume koi SIRF EK HI KHUBI nahi.. jiske wajh se Tia tumse inta pyaar karti hai...u have so many..Ranveer....Tia ke liye tum perfect ho...

R:Tia....hamari nazar mein bhi aap se accha aur koi nahi

T:Ranveer...Tia ko hamasha aise hi pyaar karte rehna....

R:Tia...hum yeh wada aapse nahi kar sakte

T:what do u mean?

R:Tia...hum aapse yeh wada nahi kar sakte ki hum aapko hamesha AISE hi pyar karenge...par hum aapse itna wada kar sakte hai ki....with every passing day...hum aapse aur zyada pyaar karenge

T:Ranveer!!!...tumne toh Tia ko daara hi diya tha

R:sorry Tia...hum toh baas aapse toda majak kar rahe the...i love u Tia

Ranveer holds Tia tightly and gives her a quick peck on the cheek


sorry lamina....i too posted.....now u cont...club both & cont.....then i may..not sure...but now u cont

sorry again

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
ok will modify my post to show them running again 😆

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