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Posted: 20 years ago
arjun is gonna tell sumeet ahuja when ranveer and tia come and interrupt
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arjun & sumeet r talking.......when ranveer tia interupts

r: sir app yaha...kuch kaam tha

s: nahi bas aise he..apni princess se milne aye tha

t: oh ..papa ......chale

s: ek min..lagte hai arjun mujse kuch kehna chate hai

t: papa tia ko app se aur bhi imp baat karni hai....plz papa app chaleye

a: sir plz.....tia tum mr ahuja ko saach kyu nahi baate deti

s: tia.........yeh arjun kya baat kar rahe hai???????

t: papa ....kuch nahi .woh tia .tia ...haan tia ke marks is test mai ache nahi the na...woh

a: tia stop lying....u wont say then i will tell mr ahuja everything..........sir ranveer ne tia ko toh apne jaal mai phase liye ............par mai tia ko apni life distroy nahi karne de sakte

s: arjun.tum kya kahe rahe ho.........come straite to point

t: papa plz chaleye........(begging him to leave....ranveer is just scared to see mr ahujas reaction)

s: tia plz ....wait..mai sunna chate hu

a: sir ...ranveer tia se pyaa nahi karte...usse ne tia se pyaar ka natak kiye ....taki woh app se badle le sake.....uske father yani mr (dont know the name)sissodia ki maut ka zimmadar woh app ko mante hai....isseliye app ko barbad karne ke liye ussne tia se pyaar ka natak kiye .....aur phir tia ko koi home made story sunna kar convince kar liye ke woh usse pyaar karte hai........

s(finds sissodia surname familar): wat??????????

a: je haan sir..........aur woh tia ko bhi sirf hurt karne chate hai...aur kuch nahi

t(holding sumeets hand): papa plz tia ki baat sunye.......

he show his hand indicating to keep quite...moves toward ranveer & gives a tight slap(my poor karan😭)

t:(screams) papa??????

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Posted: 20 years ago

TIA-RANVEER

T: Papa...(runs towards Ranveer and hugs him)...yeh aap kya kar rahe hai...Arjun ne aapse kuch kaha aur aapne maan liye....aap sochiye..kya Ranveer aaise kar saakta hai

Sumeet is now confused

S: Ranveer ....i want to know whatz the truth now

In any other situation Ranveer would have lost his temper...but knowing that what was said was true he doesnt know how to react to this...Tia steps in for his defence luckily

T: Ek min..papa..Tia batayegi....Arjun jooth bol raha hai...Ranveer Tia se saach much bohot pyaar karta hai....and Tia loves Ranveer too....par hum dono ko misunderstanding ho gayi thi....aur gusse mein..Tia started dating Arjun...par jab Tia realised the mistake...Tia broke up with Arjun...aur isse liye Arjun is angry with Ranveer aur usse revenge le raha hai

S: kya....(looking at Ranveer and Arjun)...Ranveer..kya jo abhi Tia ne kaha woh sach hai

R: ha sir....(realising that what tia said is in fact true and she has ensure that the revenge bit doesnt come up)....hum Tia ko kabhi hurt nahi kar sakte...hum Tia se bohot pyaar karte hai....aur hum jaante hai ki aap Tia ki liye kitne imp hai...toh hum aapse kaise revenge le sakte hai

Sumeet realises what Ranveer has said just now is true...he gets really angry at Arjun

S: Arjun....this is too much...i will complain abt u to Jambhwal now...how could u say such a thing about Ranveer

A: but sir....maine jo kuch kaha sab sach hai...yeh dono jooth bol rahe hai

S: kya tum tia ko date kar rahe the?...kya tia ne tumse break up kiye?...answer me now

A: ji ha..lekin.......

S: enough....i dont want to hear to anymore of this...u better stay away from tia and ranveer...if i see u hurting them again or lying to anyone about them...i will have u expelled...consider this my final warning

A: par sir....

S: just get out from here...before i change my mind....leave now

arjun goes away angry....deciding to find some other way of getting even...he has to change his strategy...he decides to act friendly with tia and ranveer and try to break them apart...yes thats what he will do

S:Ranveer....i am ...i am really sorry...maine kuch sooch nahi aur bas tumhe slap kiye....agar koi Tia ko hurt karne ki bhi baat karta hai to i lose my cool..i am really sorry...mujhe samajh nahi aa rahe hai ke is behaviour ke liye main tumse kaise mafi mangoo...please i am really sorry

Realising that it wasnt exatly a lie...and that he was going to hurt tia at one point in time....ranveer decided to forgive mr ahuja

R: nahi sir...hum samjhte hai...agar koi tia ko hurt karne ki baat kare toh hum bhi shayad aise hi react karnege...hum samjhte hai sir

T: Ranveer...tum thik ho na....papa this was too much

S: ha tia...woh mujhse galti ho gayi...i am sorry....but i promise ..aise phir kabhi nahi haga....plz give me chance to make this right

R:saab thik hai aab sir...kuch karne ki jarurat nahi hai

S: nahi ranveer...plz...i am feeling really guilty..please let me make up for this..let me take both of u for dinner tonite...just 3 of us....plz give me a chance to apologise properly

R:nahi sir iski koi jarurat nahi hai...aur ....aaj hamari band pratice bhi hai

S: ranveer plz na maat kaho...dinner band pratice ke baad karenge...i will send kaka to pick u up...plz

R:thik hai sir...hum band pratice jaldi finish karnege

S: ok thx...

Sumeet leaves

T: ranveer..tia is really sorry....tia is feeling really guilty abt this

R: nahi tia...aap ki koi galti nahi hai...aur shayad...jo pehle hua us ke liye hum yeh deserve bhi karte hai

T: nahi ranveer (hugs him)....tumhari koi galti nahi hai....tia ke liye tum perfect the aur hamesha perfect hi rahoge..Tia loves u so much...Tia cant see u get hurt like this (a drop of tear falls down her eyes)

Ranveer see this and wipes it

R: Tia hum thik hai...aur phir jab aap hamare saath hai hum kuch bhi handle kar sakte hai...aab aap rooyiga maat...aapko paata hai na..hum aapko roote hue nahi dekh sakte

T: (nods)ranveer...aaj toh tia ne jooth bolke situation solve ki...par next time kya hoga?

R: hum bhi wohi sooch rahe hai...arjun se deal karne ka plan jaldi soochna padege

just then aman comes in

Aman: hey guys..kya hua?? saab thik hai na??

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
tia and ranveer tell him whatever happened
Edited by tia_mehra - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
tia-ranveeer
a: toh ab tum log kya karoge???????
r: pate nahi par kuch toh zaroor karne hoge
then vrinda enters & aman leaves with her
tia is really afarid.....ranveer notice it
r: tia..........kya hua...app theek hai na????
t: ranveer tia ko yeh bahut daar lag rahe hai......tia cant loose u.........
r: tia.....(she doesnt look at him)
r: tia.....hummari taraf dekhye(she looks at him)
she slowly looks at him
r: app ko phiker karne ki koi zarurat nahi..........hum pe bharosa rakhye....
t: ranveer tia trusts u...but......
r: but..but kuch nahi...........bas ab apne mood change karli jiye....app udas achi nahi lagti
tia puts a fake smile which ranveer knows
r: tia hum app ke liye itne kar rahe hai....toh humme kuch to return milne chahiye na
t: ranveer????????
r: tia app ko kya lage hum sab app ke liye free kar denge...nahi ....iske badle humme abhi ek kiss chahiye
tia hugs ranveer
t: ranveer..tia ki ri life tumhari hai....aur kiss woh to tumhe
she seperates & gives him a kiss on his cheek
t: mil gayi
r(touching his cheek where tia kissed): tia agar aur koi kam ho toh kahiye...kyuki app salari bahut aachi dati hai
tia is all blushing & full red 😳 😳
t: ranveer tia jaye........
r: kya????? no way tia.......abhi nahi thodi der bad chali jane...waise bhi abhi app ka mood theek hua hai
t: tumne yeh sab tia ka mood theek karne ke liye kiye
r: app ko kya lagte hai??
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: esha oberoi


r(touching his cheek where tia kissed): tia agar aur koi kam ho toh kahiye...kyuki app salari bahut aachi dati hai

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Edited by onlineyyxes - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
TIA - RANVEER

T: Tia ko lagta hai ki tum ne yeh saab Tia ko cheer up karne ke liye kiya..hai na...thanks for doing this Ranveer

R: well sach kahe Tia....(holds Tia in his arms)...humne yeh saab woh kiss ke liye kiya tha

T: kya...Ranveer

Ranveer smiles at her

R:Tia...aise chote chote problems to aate hi rahenge hai na..aur hum nahi chahte ki aap inke wajha se kabhi bhi upset ho

T:Ranveer...tab tak tum Tia ke saath ho..Tia kabhi upset nahi hogi (hugging ranveer tightly)

R:Toh hamari job paki ho gayi...aab salary ki baat kare...woh..hum greedy nahi hai...bas din me dus baara kisses se kaam chla lenge

T: kya...

R: kuch kaam kaha kya ?

Tia blushes and hugs Ranveer even tighter and Ranveer hugs her back...giving her a small peck on the forehead

T: Ranveer...Tia wishes ke Tia hamesha aaise hi tumhare close rahe

R:Tia..hum bhi zindagi baar aaise hi aapko thame rehna chate hai.......hamesha

just then the bell rings and they have to go and attend next class..They walk towards the class holding hands

R: Tia...

T: ha Ranveer...

R: Tia...hum chahte the ki aaj class mein aap hamare paas bhaithe

T: Ranveer....Tia would love too

Its RD sirs class...and Tia and Ranveer absentmindedly enter the class still holding hands. everyone is smiling looking at them...but they are totally unware why..Rd sir sees this and smiles

RD: (smiles) Ranveer...(pointing towards their hands)...tia class mein nayi nahi hai na?....ki usse guide karne ki jaroo rat pade

R: woh sir...

RD:It ok Ranveer...both of you take your seats...

Ranveer and Tia go to the back of the room and sit together...everyone in the class is smiling and murmuring now.

Aman:(whispers) Guys...kya ho kya raha hai?...tum dono toh bilkul pagal ho gaya ho

The lecture gets over...and tia and ranveer are totally unaware of this...and are still sitting in the class..starting at eachother

Aman comes to them
A: Ranveer..Tia..(and shakes Ranveer..both of them are back to normal world now)..kya kar kya rahe the tum puri class mein?...tum dono ne toh haad kardi..btw agar tumhari "kon kissi ki ankhon mein jyade der tak dekhta hai" competition ho gayi ho toh main baat kare...uss arjun ke saath kya karna hai?... kuch soocha?




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Posted: 20 years ago

acctualy while writing this one i was doing accounts homework & all that matter was profit loss income salary.......so i thought to put accounts in tia-ranveers life😆........

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
hey someone plz cont
lamina where r u ???????
plz cont na
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TIA - RANVEER

R: Ha bana....kuch toh sooch na hi padega...aaj toh jo hua uske baad hume iska solution jaldi ki nikalna padega

T: Shayad hume arjun paar watch rakhna chahiye..Tia aapne angels ko help karne ke liye keh sakti hai....

R: ha Tia...aap shayad thik keh rahi hai...hume unpe watch rakhna hoga..par yeh sirf temporary solution hai..isse problem solve nahi hogi..par isse shayad hum kuch time mileha..unka next move jaan ne ka

A: ha Ranveer...yeh thik hai....aur aur ek baat yaad rakhna...tumhe kuch dino ke liye aapne gusse pe control rakhna hoga....dont do anything to get into trouble now....arjun bohot smart hai..hume aab saab kuch sooch samajh ke karna hai.

R: ha bana..hum jaante hai...aap phikar maat ki jiye

T:Ranveer....Tia ke paas ek idea hai

Both Ranveer and Aman are a bit surprised at this...

T: woh Ranveer..yaad hai jab tumhe black gang ke bare mein jaan na tha..aur Tia ne pretend kiya tha Arjun se nice hone ka..taki woh information mil sake

Ranveer gets the gist of what Tia is planning on doing...

T: woh Ranveer ..Tia sooch rahi thi...ki agar Tia sirf pretend kare ke Tia ne Arjun ko forgive kiya hai...aur aab Tia usse friendship karne ki liye tayar hai toh....Tia agar aise pretend kare toh shayad ho sakta hai ki Arjun Tia ko belive kare aur Tia ko uske kuch information bataye

R: nahi Tia...last time bhi agar hume paata hota ki aap kya kar rahi hai toh hum aapko yeh risk lene kabhi nahi dete.....aur aab hum yeh nahi hone de sakte Tia.....Arjun aab yeh believe nahi karega...aur woh aabhi aapko hurt bhi kar sakta hai...hum Arjun ko bilkul trust nahi karte...Tia aap yeh nahi karengi...aagar aapko kuch hua...toh hum jee nahi payenge ..aap janti hai na...Tia hume promise ki jiye...aap aisa kuch nahi karengi...please Tia

A: Tia ..Ranveer thik keh raha hai...Arjun is dangerous

Tia can do anything for Ranveer...even be friends with Arjun again even if he could hurt her....but now Tia sees that Ranveer is really upset...and Tia cant see him like this...she gives in

T: Ranveer...please dont be upset..Tia cant see you like this...Tia is sorry...Tia only wanted to help solve this..u know that na...Tia will not pretend to be friends with Arjun..Tia promise...please dont be upset

Tia hugs Ranveer. Ranveer holds her closely

R: Tia ...hum jaante hai aap yeh jaldi solve karna chahti hai..hum bhi yehi chahte hai...hum kuch plan jaroor soochen ge...aapko hum pe vishwas hai na

T: ha Ranveer...Tia trust u more than herself

Ranveer kisses Tia gently on the forehead...Aman starts coughing

R: Aman bana...(and smiles)

Aman smiles back

T: Aacha Ranveer...Tia aabhi angels ko ja ke Arjun pe watch rakhne ke liye batake aati hai...ok...Tia will be right back

R: ok Tia

Tia goes away and tells Pri and Meher about the plan..they agree to help out..Pri and Meher find Arjun in the garden

Meanwhile..Ranveer is a bit worried

A: kya hua Ranveer ..kya sooch rahe ho

R: Woh bana..Tia ne hum promise toh kiya hai..par hame bohot daar lag raha hai...kahi hamare liye woh koi risk na le....hum jante hai ki Tia humse ki hui promise kabhi break nahi kar sakti....par phir bhi hum tode worried the

A: dont worry Ranveer ....hum jaldi yeh saab solve kar lenge

Meanwhile...Tia is thinking what to do...she wishes she could help Ranveer with this....she wonders whether she should still go ahead with her idea..but then decides against it as it will hurt Ranveer a lot even if it helps solve the problem...also she cant break a promise made to her darling Ranveer...so she decides to go along with Ranveer's plan after all and comes back to meet Ranveer

T:Ranveer....Tia ne angels ko bata diya hai...aab hume Arjun ke next move ke baare mein jaldi hi pata chal jayega

A: good

R: Tia....(and holds her in hand)....hum saab milke yeh jaldi solve kar lenge...tab tak aap aapni promise maat bholiye

T: Ranveer...Tia ko yaad hai...Tia will never do anything that will upset u

R: Thanks Tia

Meanwhile, Arjun is pacing in the garden talking aloud

Arjun: yeh plan toh flop ho gaya...aab se sissodia ko tia ki zindagi se nikalne ke liye kuch aur plan sooch na pade ga...direct mr ahuja aur tia se baat karne se kuch nahi hua....aab lagta hai ki ungli tedhi karni hagi....aab mujhe calmly or kooly behave karna hoga...aur phir se tia se friendly hone ki koshish karni hogi....aur phir main dheere dheere tia ka trust win karunga and create problems between tia and ranveer...yes thats what i will do

pri and meher hear all this and rush to tell tia about it

P & M: Tia ...Tia u wont believe what we found out

T: kya hua babes...whats wrong

Aman and Ranveer are concerned too...pri and meher tell them the whole story...

R: oh toh aab yeh hai Arjun ka plan...hume isske baare mein kuch karna hoga

A: aab ek hi option hai

R: kya bana

A: hum woh karna hoga jo Tia ne suggest kiya tha

R: kya aman bana....nahi bilkul nahi...hum yeh nahi hone de sakte....hum Tia ko yeh risk nahi denge

T:Ranveer...par aabhi aur koi choice bhi nahi hai hamare paas

A: ha Ranveer....aur phir hum hamesha hoge Tia ke saath..hum sab Tia pe nazar rakhenge jab woh Arjun ke saath hogi taki woh Tia ko kabhi hurt na kare

T:aur Ranveer..yeh saab toh lie hai na....Tia saach mein kabhi Arjun se friendship nahi karegi ...tumhe paata hai na...aur phir jab tum hamesha Tia ko watch karoge aur protect karoge toh Tia ko worry karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai right

R: ha Tia...par

T: Ranveer....Tia doesnt want to let anything come between us now...ever...Tia wants to solve this fast...aur phir agar Arjun chahta hai to bhi woh hame saach mein aab kabhi alag nahi kar sakta...we will only be pretending to have a fight...in reality hum toh hamse ek dusre se love karte rahenge.....aur till we are pretending we can also come up with some other plan to solve this fast....tab tak this will give us some time

Ranveer is still worrried but give in to all these people ultimately

R: thik hai Tia...par hum bhi aapse promise karte hai...hum hamesga aap ke saath honge...hamasha aapko watch karenge....hum Arjun ko aapko hurt harne nahi denge....promise

T: Tia knows that Ranveer....Tia loves u a lot too

Tia and Ranveer hug

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago

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