Single Line Remix story - Page 22

trying to put in the continuation now..... from ur part esha..with the running bit added to my previous post...now ur post is flowing prefectly smoothly..😃...nice one...it was really cuuuuttteeeee😳

TIA-RANVEER

T:Ranveer...(still blushing a lot..turning almost red)

R:well....hum intazar kar rahe hai

T:Ranveer...tumne toh kiss le li na...phir jyada greedy nahi hona chahiye

R:ha Tia...par woh toh humne li thi...aap ne aabhi tak aap ke taraf se salary nahi di

T:...well...ok ok...

Tia gives him a quick kiss on the cheek..

T:aabhi ke liye inta baas

R:(making a sad face)...well aagar aap itni cruel bana chahti hai toh ....thik hai

Meanwhile...Arjun is still outside...eavesdroping

Meher who was just coming back to the room see him and stops...and realiseds something is wrong...she quickly sends a sms to Tia informing her about it

Inside the room...Tia & Ranveer see the sms....they realise that they need to do soemthing quickly to salvage their plan...they whisper and come up with the plan and then start speaking loudly...moving close towards the door

T:Ranveer...Tia ko tumse kuch important baat karni hai

R:kya Tia

T:woh Arjun ke baare mein

R:Tia ..hum Arjun ke baare mein kuch nahi sun na chahte

T:Plz Ranveer..plz Tia ke liye

R: Thik hai Tia ....kahiye

T:Ranveer...aaj jab Tia Arjun se mili toh Tia ko laga ki saach much Arjun Tia se phir se friendship karna chahta hai...Tia ko lagta hai...ki woh aab hume hurt nahi karega...He wont hurt Tia

R:Tia ...hume unpe zaara bhi vishwas nahi hai...

T:Ranveer...Tia ko saach much lagta hai...ki Arjun has moved on about the revenge bit...woh aab saach mein hamara friend banna chahta hai...Tia kop lagta hai ki hume yeh uski first mistake samjhke maaf karna chahiye

R:nahi Tia...hum unhe maaf nahi kar sakte

T:Ranveer..plz Tia ke liye

R:Tia...BAAS...aap humse pyaar karti hai ya unse..aap unki itni side kyu le rahi hai...hum aur kuch is ke baar mein sunna nahi chahte

T:Ranveer..plz

R:Tia..ENOUGH...i dont want to hear this...i am leaving...aap ka dimag jab thikane pe aa jaye toh humse milne aayiye...

T:Ranveer..

R:(whispers in Tia's ears)..love u a lot...
and gives her a quick peck on the cheek and then acts as if he is barging out of the room angry and walks away

Arjun sees all this

AK:shayad main kuch jald baazi kar raha tha...lagta hai Tia has actually started buying my act...aur Ranveer ko abhi bhi doubt hai...aaj meri wajh se un dono mein zhagda hua...sissodia...this is just the begining...there will be more fights between you..thanks to me..i will get more friendly with tia and soon u will be out of her life

Meher hears all this. She starts coming toward the room..Arjun sees meher coming and goes away secretly...thinking that meher hasnt seen him

T:Meher...thx babes agar tum nahi hoti to shayad yeh plan flop ho jaata

M: ha tia...thx god...aur ek good news hai...Arjun ne tum dono ke fight ko believe kar liya hai

T:kya..this is good news...Tia aabhi jyake yeh Ranveer ko bataye gi

M:Tia be careful...is baar Ajrun ko paata nahi chalna chahiye

T:ha babes..dont worry...Tia shed ja rahi hai band practice ke liye...tab Tia Ranveer ko wahi bata degi

Tia goes to the shed....without Ajrun on their tail this time...ashi and yuvi are still not in there..its just Ranveer and Aman in the shed

R:Tia kya hua...

T:Ranveer dont worry...saab thik hai...Arjun bought our plan

A:thx god...agar aaj meher sms nahi karti toh pata nahi kya ho jata

R:ha bana

T:Tia was so worried

A:guys....ab hume...i mean tumhe esp careful rehne hoga...u cant get romantic in front of everyone remember..u can only fight in front of everyone...yeh sab romance ab chupke karo

T:ha Aman...lagta hai aab aise hi karna hoga

R:(smiling)..waise bhi chupke chupke milne mein aur romantic hone mein aur zyada maaza hai

Ranveer holds Tia's hand

R:kya Tia

Tia blushes

A:guy...hey bhagwan....Ranveer...plz...be careful ok..puri tarah pagal hone ki zaroorat nahi hai...bas kuch dino ki baat hai...tab tak..zaara sambhalke

R:thik hai bana...hum jaante hai

A:Hope so...

in the shed
a: toh phir chale ranveer
r: well....bana.....hum abhi toh tia se bat kar sakte hai na
a: ( is all laughing): theek hai par jaldi room wapis aa jane
aman leaves
r(putting his arm around tia): tia humai nahie pate tha ki app itni achi acting bhi karti hai
t: tia ne kab acting ki.....
r: toh phir jab app arjun ke pas humari burai kar rahe thi woh acting nahi toh kya tha????????
t: woh saach tha
r: kya....app ko lagte hai ki hum app se pyaar nahi karte?????
t: haa .....tia ko aise hi lagte hai
r:(getting a bit serious): app masak kar rahe hai na
t: no ranveer....tia masak nahi kar rahi hai....tia ko sach mai nahi lagte ki tum tia se pyaar karte ho..........tia ko lagte hai tum tia se bahut pyar karte ho
r: tia......app ne hummai dar diye(his eyes r filled with tears...tia notice that)
t: ranveer...tia toh bas masak kar rahi thi......sorry tia ne tumhe hurt kiye
r: tia plz aise masak phir mat karne....hum app ke bine jee nahi payenge
t: tia know it
t: ranveer tia thinks ki hummai chale chahi ye
r: kyu???????
t: ranveer bahut late hogaye hai aur subha class bhi toh hai
r: theek hai tia.....par hummari goodnight kiss
t: ranveer.tia ja rahe hai
r(pulling her back): app aise nahi jaa sakti
he kisses her on her cheek & then forword his cheek asking for kiss
tia tickles him & run away
r(to himself): yeh kiss toh hum lake hi rahenge tia
arjuns room
he is all smilin & thinking:tia tum ajj bhi chidish aur stupid ho......par sissodia..i thought he was smart...but no....woh bhi tumhari tarh he hai........tum hai kya lagte hai jo kuch maine tumhare room mai sune uske bad mai tumhari woh fight pe belive karunge..never...tumhai mehar ne sms kiye aur phir tum done fight karne lage.....aur socha ki mai belive karunge......aur mehar..use kya lagte hai mai jo kuch bhi balunge woh saach hoge....... mai ne uske samne bola ki mari wajese tum done ke beech fight hui aur usne belive kar liye ke mai aise mante hu....all r the same...but tomorrow u will find a new arjun.....he smiles & goes to sleep
next morning:
tia was leaving for her class when arjun comes to meet her
a: tia kya mai tumse kuch baat kar sakte hu
t: arjun acctually tia ki class hai
a: tia class ko abhi 20 min baki hai...in that time i will finish my talk
t: theek hai
a: tia..jo ajj mai tumse kahe ne ja rahe hu shayed uske bad tum muje friend ki tarah treat na karo...par mai abb aur jooth nahi bol sakte.tia mai tum hare liye feel karte hu...from the day i meet u......but tumne kabhi muje ekm friend se zyade treate nahi kiye........phir tumhre aur ranveer ka breakup hua aur tum mare pas ayi....i was on top of the world...but then suddenly tumhari aur ranveer ke beech ki misunderstanding khatem ho gayi aur tum ne mare saath break up kiye....muje lage ki tum mera saath sab se zyade kush rahe paogi.....muje lage ki ranveer tumhare lia theek nahi....phir muje revenge ki baat pate chali & then i was sure that u will b cheated by him..so i tried to tell u but u didnt listen to me....so i told everything to mr ahuja..but it was all in waste....then i felt i should try to b close to u as a friend & create misunderstanding between u & ranveer...yesterday so i was being sweet to u.......but now i cant lie any more...i know that u love ranveer & he too loves u a lot....but i was denying from this fact...i hated ranveer as he was close to u even when u & i were going around & then he tried to find out my identity...but now i realise that wat he did was right....he was just concerened abt u......i m an orfan...so cant understand love.......(tears r faliing from his eyes....even tia is feeling sorry for hi).......i tried to steal it but there was no use....i have never got any ones love any ones friendship....any relation..but i dont want to b ur enemy....plz forgive me for wat i tried to do......i promise u i will never create any problem in ur life from now.....plz tell sorry to ranveer on my behalf......i m really very sorry(he stands up to leave)
t: arjun.......
a: yes......plz dont worry i wont trouble u any more
t: cant we b friends
a: tia it wud b the most precious thing that u can give me......for ur & ranveers friendship i can do anything....but i know ranveer will never forgive me & this will create problem in ur relation..which i dont want
t: no arjun...tia will make ranveer understand.....u dont worry abt it
a: thnks tia & ya plz if ranveer has any problem tell me..i will leave this school & go
t: no arjun u need not do anything like this....tia promise u that ranveer will forgive u & b ur friend
a: thnks tia
bell rings
a: tia u should go to class
t: yes...bye arjun
a: bye
tia leaves with arjun all smiling
in the class
ranveer is waiting for her
tia enters
r:kaha the app...pate hai hum kite ne worried tha
t: ranveer dont worry....arjun ko tia se kuch baat karni thi.....tia arjun ke saath thi
r: wat???????
t: ranveer itne worry mat karo....arjun has changed
it is miss sharmas lecture...she comes in
miss sharma: students take ur seat
ranveer tia sit nearby
r: app kya kahe rahi hai tia???????
t: ranveer tia tumhe sab lecture ke bade bateyegi
entire lecture ranveer is worried & keep looking at tia while she is just smiling
at end of lecture miss sharma annonces test will b held in next lecture
everyone leaves & tia-ranveer r in class
t: tia yeh saab kaise karagi...ti ne toh kuch bhi prepare nahi kiye
r: woh app hum pe chod de jeye....app bateye ki arjun ne kya kaha
t: ranveer...acctually arjun roh raha tha....woh bahut gulty feel kar rahe hai ki usne hum dono ko breakup karvane ki try ki......
r: kya???????
t: haa ranveer usene kaha ki woh ab kabhi bhi hummari life mai trouble nahi create karege..he wants tob friend with us kyuki woh orfan hai aur issliye uske koi relative nahi hai.......lakin tia ne use forgive kar diye...ab woh hummare friend hai
r: tia .....app ko lagte hai ki arjun change ho gaye hai
t: haa ranveer....tia ne phele kabhi arjun ko rote hua nahi dekha....woh saach mai gulty feel kar rahe hai
r: tia hummai lagte hai ki yeh arjun ki koi nayi trick hai.....issliye woh app se friendship karne chate hai
t: no ranveer ......usne toh tia ko kaha ki agar tia usse friendship karegi toh tumhai problem hogi aur issliye woh school chod dege
r: no tia ....hum kuch gad bad lag rahe hai
t: ranveer .....plz trust tia....woh sirf hummare friend banne chate hai
r: humare??????
t: haa....tia ka aur tumhare.......aur waise bhi jab tia ka aur tumhare break up hua tha toh usne tia ki bahut help ki thi.....ab woh lonly feel kar rahe hai...toh tia thinks ki humma uski help karni chahi yeh
r: lakin tia....
t: plz ranveer.........belive tia....arjun has changed...abb tum test ke bare mai socho......pate nahi tia itne sab kaise pahdhegi
r(has a naughty smile): hum hai na...hum app ki help karange.......hum app ke saath hi padhange
t: theek hai

well done esha....

awesome stuff.... well we do have some talented writers here in this forum..... 👏 👏

aman then goes out of the shed
t-ranveer waise tum acting kafi accha kar lete ho but unfortunetly tia se accha nahi
r-accha tia aur aap kab acting kati hai
t-woh woh ti a(smiling hugs ranveer)
just then ti agets a sms frm maher informig her that arjun is on het look o u t.

Originally posted by: tia_mehra

aman then goes out of the shed
t-ranveer waise tum acting kafi accha kar lete ho but unfortunetly tia se accha nahi
r-accha tia aur aap kab acting kati hai
t-woh woh ti a(smiling hugs ranveer)
just then ti agets a sms frm maher informig her that arjun is on het look o u t.

soory tia but i didnt get it😕.😕....i feel u havent read my long boring stupid part...or was it soo bad that u igonored....if yes tell me i will surely delete it

plz reply

esha

well esha it was very good.
please cotinue this work always

hey guys i m tollaly confused.two of u(angad_cutest & rosa) tell me that the part was gud(thnk for liking it guys) & i feel that tia didnt like it.plz tell me frankly that should i delete it or keep it...plz ..i will b thankful if u all give the true feeling abt the part
this is a request & it will let me know should i cont or not
esha

the story was too gud but plz post some other story like kind of romantic between tia and ranveer.like u saw the wat will happen on thursday so like tia is deaming or i dont know she is o not but ranveer is standing behind her so can u make some story from there.

esha u cont with ur story as it is fantastic and the best for the situation where this fan fic is going.
so plz cont u write wonderfully well

you bpth r best writers so write always but in coordination