tr-ay fanfic part 34 pg28 - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
thnx a a lto........yeahhw ill sure cont

and rimli thnx for putting my collage in ur siggyyy i m really happy ke mere colalges siggy meins ab rakhte hai dat ranveer my jannu wala....grey background wala
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeahh i will do it sun...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeahh i will do it sun...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeahh i will do it sun...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i will post d next part by d nite
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
awesome parts......plzzzz continue soon........ 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 23

ranveer and tia den were dancing on a slow song.....tia's hands around rnaveer's neck and ranveer's hand around tia's waist./.....dey ver lost in thier own world......(as if phirse paanch saal piche chale gaye.....kya din the unke...but dey r reliving dose days again now)........in bth of dem's eye a love for each other was seen.....their dance continued for a long....

scene change...

suddenly aashi started coughing badly.....uv got worried....she again got high fevre suddenly he got confused so he went 2 ranveeer and tia's room
(sry frednz 2 break d lovey dovey scene agar nahi karti toh aage mein bad hi nahi paati but dont wry aage bhot se aise scenes hai)

uv knocked on d door ......

ranveer and tia stopped their dancee they got shcoked wat ahppen
uv; ranveerjaldi kholo darwaza.....
ranver; yeh uv banaa ko kya ho gaya kya ashi theek hai
ranveer goes 2 open d door
tia: ooh tia's god plzzz sab theek ho(lekin is baar theek nahi tha)

ranveer finally opens d door
ranveer: kya hua baana..a.aap itne pareshan kyun ho
uv: woh ranveer aashi ....usko achanak phisre high fevr ho gaya aur bhot kharab reet se cough kar rahi ...plzz tum aur tia jaldi aa ooo

dey go....

(samay samapti ki ghoshna ..ding dong ding dong...aage ka baadmein contineu karenge)

luv ash
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Too gd..ash..plejj do cont soon...awesum part..short n sweet..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part ash dear... 👏 cholly 4 replying late
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 24

dey all cum in d room
all ver relly tensed up...
ranveer went 2 call d doc again
tia went 2 get soem medication
yuvi worried sitiing besides ashi trying 2 handle her....
her fever was increasing by every hour
ranveer came back wthd bad news dat doc can only cum in d mroing dat also only if rains stopped
(i forgot 2 tell u......all had initially planned 2 stay overnite der if possible aur finally dey had 2 stay...)
so tia got soem medications
ranveer helped yuvi 2 giev medcines 2 aashi...
tia removed d a jacket of aashi from her bag....
as aahsi was really feeling evry cold
den she made her wear dat


stilll outstide it was raining really haevily....
hardly ne chnace dat it wud stop evn till moring

suddenly aashi started saying soemthng in her uncousious state
aashi: paani...koi mujhe plzz panni do...
ranveer got d water and made aashi drank water
yuvi was hodling aashi's hand warming up....
45 mins passed.....
tia go d thermometer 2 check whether after soem medication d temperature got down or not....

now wat will happen...kya hoga kya apko lagta hai aashi ka ttemperature down huya hoga ya nahi.....kya hoga aage...

aage kki kahani janene ke liye yehi apni seats pakadkar rakhna

*samay sampti ki ghoshna....ding dong ding

i knwo itw as really broing and pathetic...

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