tr-ay fanfic part 34 pg28 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
arre mind blowing yaar.....
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cont soon.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
hey just read two parts together...both are awesome nd gr888 👏 plz do cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
hey Ash,

i jus read the whole fic rite now, n it was awesome 👏

I loved the way you hv got Tia jealous 😃 😉

cont soon

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
ooo thnx a alto every1 will sun post d next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
part 20
ashi: hmm..umm...kya tum dono ka po*nar milap ho gay aho toh mein kcuh bolu jsike liye hums ab yaha pe gather huye hai...
bth ranveer and tia get seperated
ranveer: ha ashi boliye...
ashi: gud finally bhaggu ne itne tie,m ke baad yeh bolne ka muko diya..
yuvi: ab tum bol rahi ho y a mein bolu
ashi; ha ha bol rahi hoon..kal raat ko.....meien aur uv ne...
she sneezes very loudly
tia; kya hua ashi kal raat ko tumne aur uv ne kya
ashi; duh0-uh ek min bol rahi hoon woh sneeze aa gayi beech mein.hum dono ne
agains he sneezes...
raneveer: mere khyal se yuvi banaa aap hi booliye aur ha ashi ko kuch tablets ki bhi zaroorat hai...
ashi: uski koi zarrorat nahi emer paas hai
agains he sneezs....
uv: theek suno in short hum dono ne decdie kiya hai ke hum remxi phirse form karenge ...has hamar band
(he said in eral fast speed)
ranveer: arey yeh toh bhot hi achachi baat hai 5 saal ke baad phirse remxi ka comeback bhot hi achacha hai
tia: ha tia bhi bhot khush haio
again ashi sneezes...
tia: ashi tum ab yehi baitho mein tumhare liye stem lene ke liye booil water lekar aati hoon
ashi: owh tia
again she sneezes....
ranveeR; ashi aap yehi baithiye tia theek kehe rahi hai
tia: by teh uv klitchen kaunsi side hai
uv: to tehleft tia
raneveR; uv aapko koi diea yh ashi ko achnak cheeko kyun aa r ahi hai
uv: shayad koi yaad kar rajh hoga
asi: du uh and hits him on hsi ehad
again she sneezes
she started feeling cold...
ranver: aapko toh bhot thand lag rahi hai
uv: mein abhi blanket lekar aat hoon
ranver: nahi bana aap yah ashi ke pass baithiye hum lekar aate hai..au hume lagta hai yeh achanak climate chaneg ke wajese huya hai.....and ha uv ek doctor ko phoen kar dijiye
uv; theke hai tum jao mein abhi karta hoon phoenn doctor ko..
ashi sneezs againa nd she is xtremely feeling cold....
uv claled doctor but itw a sraining ehavily so doctor also cud not cum
uv seeing ashi in sucha state cud not ebar and went near 2 her and hold her tighly in his arms
ashi also felt better......butden she realsies da she is wth uv and got separated
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
awww cho chweett 👏

i wish AY were 2gether for sum more time 😉 😳 😳

continue soonn

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
ooo thnx a a lto yeahh i will do it sun
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
awesum part ashh..luved it...seriously..ashi sneazing again n again.. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
great part!!!
loved it when ashi was sneezing and feeling cold...then yuvi went to her and hugged her

please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
ash pleej cont soon yeh part itna acha thha ki next part ke liye wait karna bohot ajeeb lag raha hai mera matlab hai my waiting impatiently for the next part to come up so plz cont soon

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