tr-ay fanfic part 34 pg28

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hey frednz actuallly u all remember or nto lekin iw as riting a fanfic but den due colleges iw anst abel 2 psot rmoe parts and posted only till part 10 so at prewsent i m posting 10 parts and den 11th apr sun

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Part 1

remix story after five years.....

ranveer had gone 2 usa after his studies at maurya... for his mba n den some more further studies....summet had given money for him...there on wth studies he even used 2 handle some part of business of summeet there....tia knew abt it but still had no contact wth him.....but yes bth really missed each other dat was for sure...but never got chance 2 contact(even i dont know y ...but cant get nethng else 2 rite-if ne1 can suggest most welcome )....he also didn't had ccontact wth others …he is gonna come now dat is after five years 2 india for ever...he hardly came 2 india durin dis ive years onle 2 or 3 times dat also for 3 or 4 days....

tia has became the fashion desingner.....she owns a company …vic also helds fashion shows…she even got certain awrds for her designs…..as I said b4 she didn't had ne contact wth ranveer…n even she didn't had contact wth others….she never knew abt others…even she was bsy wth her work….hey company's name is glamorous world

Uv has become a musician n the owner of a music company…u all r shocked nah….w8 I wilt el u how did he reached yr…initially his father put him in politics but in the first elections onle dey lost….i guess uv played some trick..he he he he he….froget abt the trick…so all the party members forced yd 2 remove uv from the party…n uv was also happy 2 get out of the politics….even he didn't had contact wth ne1…he even organized mucis for parties …ne shows…etc…

Now comes ashi…she owns a newspaper agency n is also a writer(dont ask me y…just thot of dis..)but yes writer because in the collage he was the one who used play pranks n made all of dems settinf…so dats y she strated likin ritin…no contacts wth ne1…

This was the introduction of all of dem…..

The main plot story will start now ……nxet prt in the other post…..
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part 2

Tia has gone for a fashion show 2 paris on 13th may 2011….she was gonna return on 20th may 2011….ranveer was gonna come 2 india on 21st may…tia knew abt it…she heard her dad's conversation wth ranveer on the cell phone…dats y she decided 2 return on 20th may…tia also has one more fashion show in mumbai on 21nd of may....…..but here come the twist ranveer gives a surprise 2 summet n his mother n his sister….his sister (remember he has a sister) is now studin in maurya….he came back2 india on 17th of may….all were surprised…but still tia knows dat he is gonna come on 21st…..he meets evry1….sumeet calls ranveer nxt day 2 his office…sumeet was impressed by ranveer's work in usa…ranveer even got gud marks in his studies…sumeet told ranveer dat summet has a surprise for him….he takes him 2 some company….dis company was a very new1….dat day was cdat company's inauguration…ranveer was shocked 2 see his mother…den sumeet show ranveer the company's name….the name was "sisodiya's"…..ranveer asked summet wat is the need of it…summet tells ranveer dat summet has thot from business point of view…dis company wud b a part of ahuja's onle…but the owner wud b ranveer….summeet wud b the share holder in his company…ranveer still doent want dis company but again summet xplains if ranveer is thnkin dat summet has given dis company just like dat…den he is rong …sumeet has thot according 2 business profit therefore he started dis company n he knew dat no1 xcpet ranveer wud handle dis company properly…finally ranveer accepts dis offer….summet tells ranveer 2 inaugrate dis company but ranveer tells sumeet it is becoz of summet dat dis has been possible therefore he tells summet 2 inaugrate dis….n finally inauguration is done…after all thngs get over ….dey eneter the company…summeet shows ranveer everytng in the company…n xplains him….suddenly ranveer asks summet ver is tia…summeet tells himn dat she has gone 2 paris for a fashion show n she will be returning on 20th …ranveer knew dat tia was a fashion desingner…..

Tia had already done almost all preparation for her fashion show in mumbai..…she had assigned certain tasks to her colleages…n told her dad 2 find some1 for a chief guest…sumeet got n idea dat she shud get a surprise of ranveer…he thot he wud make ranveer chief guest….he had talk wth ranveer n but obvious ranveer agreed …..even ranveer was xcited 2 meet tia….wen dey left maurya….dey didn't had ne relationship b/w dem though dey still loved each other but dat time none of dem cud confeessss….

Finally tia returned but she stil knew dat ranveer was gonna cum 21st afternoon….but dat day on 21st she didn't had time 2 meet ranveer she was still bsy…she nvr knew dat ranveer had came long back….dat day was her fashion show….tia was very tensed how wud she do….becoz dis time she had less time gap b/w her 2 fashion shows….

Tia just got the news dat all thngs ver set…she didn't even had a time 2 check who all ver appointed for her fashion show….etc…she had given dis wrk 2 her trusted colleages…

Guess wat now…..who is der for music thng …yes uv is organizing music…but uv nvr knew dat it was tia's company….becoz some1 els efrom glamorous world contacted wth him…n he onle concern wth his contract for music….

Ashi's newspaper agency is also gonan b der…n dis time ashi was finind some info on fashion for her book as dis time she was ritin a book on fashion…so even she got dat fashion show's pass…

Omg ….now lets see wat is gonna happen ahead….
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Part 3

21st may is on now....tia is sp tensed up....the show was at 8 pm...n finally 8pm came...tia reached the fashion show venue...his dad n ranveer had still not came der...guests started coming...dis time tia was scared d most...(guesss y...but obvious ranveer re)....finally ashi comes she takes her sit....n her colleagues of ehr newpaper started theuir work....uv enters wth his musci ppl...n starts wth his job...still tai didnt met ne1 of dem......finally the person for wom tia was w8in arrived....tia was at dat time backstage so didnt noticed him dat time....tia had told her dad 2 announce the chief guest...finallly the show starts....wth welcomin all of dem ....summeeet den comes on the stage n announces the chief guest ....
summet: welcome ladies n gentlemen 2 the fashion show of glamorous world....n 2day's our chief guest is ranveer sisodiya the owner of sisodiya company....
tia , ashi n uv alll r shocked n even happy...tia nvr xpected ranveer 2 b chief guest....
alll wanted 2 meet him.....but fashion show was on.....fashion starts n finally the end comes...dat time the show interpreter announce every1 name 2 dis show's contribution....she first calls tia...ashi n uv r again shocked 2 see tia now....den dey call upon ranveer n finally uv...n dis time ranveer tia n ashi r shocked....omg alll four 2gether now whose left ashilets see wat she does now...
the show winds n alll three dat is uv tia n ranveer meets up prooperly n bang in dem all comes our dera ashi all r surprised again...but dey all r happy nobody had words 2 speak...but finally dey decided 2 go somever n sit for someti9me 2gether...n dey leave...
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part 4...

dey go 2 some coffe cafe......der dey discuss abt demselves n their old days....dey aall ver real;ly xcited meeting after so mny years....it was unbelievable for dem.....it was now 3:00 am of the morning.....n it was raning outside9now dont ask me how did it ain...it is obvious becoz it is may end n at placs it does start raining in d end of may)...ranveer decided 2 drop tia....ashi wanted 2 go alone but finally accepted 2 go wth uv....

bth the couples leave...

now wat happens....ne idea...does ne1 wannna give suggestion most welcome...

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part 5....

it is raining heavily.....now der goes a scene bbetween tia n ranveer....
suddenly ranveer's car stops...ranveer chceks but der is osme problem in acr vic he cud not amke out jh eden calls a mechanic who wud take atleast half an hour 2 come...dey finally agres 2 stay der only in d car....
rain stops outside....dey get out for sometime
ranveer: tia aap kaisi ho...
tia: mein theek hu...tum kaise ho ranver
ranveer; hum bhi theek hai
ranveer: tia hume aapse ek baat poochni thi
tia: kaho ranveer
ranveer: kya aappko itne saal mein koi nahi mila....
tia gets liitlee shy
tia: woh ranveer..woh ranveer..actrually
ranveer: iska matlap koi nahi mila....
ranveer bends down n asks tia...
ranveer: tia kya aap hamesha ke liye hamari zindagi banogi...
tia becozmes more shy....she thnk little den bends her face liutlle down
tia: ha ranveer
deb dey share a very cute mom ent till dat mecahnic comes in between n breaks it....
mechanic: sab kya apne bulaya tha...
bth gets little depress
ranveer: ha....zaraa dekhna ar mein kya hua...
mechanic luks thru d car
meachni: wohg zaara engine mein problem hai
ranveer: kitna time lagega
mechanic; bas dus min
den mechanic leaves after his work gets oover...
den again tai n ranveer romance starst tia hugs ranveer.....n na jaane song in played in background.....n some flashback romantic scenes r shown.....

nxt scene nxt part...later on
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part 6...

wen tia-ranveer scene was on other side uv ashi scene was also on...so lets again go back ike u all know it was heavily raining.....here comes ashi-uv sequence...
uv and ashi r in d car...n obviously uv shud b driving d car but no ashiw as driving d car...she accepted 2 go wth uv onle on dat condition dat she wud drive d car.....becoz ashi remembered one incident wen dey in their ending days of coolege uv was driving d car n dey crashed down wtha tree dats y....lolz..
ranveer n tia leaves n wen ashi n uv sat in d car dat time...
uv: r us ure ashi tumhi chlogi...
ashi: ha syco....isliye toh meine tumhe kaha...
uv: lekin abhi bhi mujhe doubt hai...
ashi; doubt toh mujhe hai....ke abhi tak tumhara licence kaise tumhare saath hai...yaad hai ek time tumne tree ke saath gaaddi thok di thi...
uv: lekin woh toh poorani baat hai....ab meri driving bhot acchi hai...dekte hai tum aaj kaisa chalati ho...
ashi; ha ha dekh lena...
so ashi is drving .....
uv starts whistling thier favourite whistle tone of their 'album....he suddenly remmebers dis aftera long tims...
ashi: hey yeh toh hamre album ka hai rite nah...
uv: haa...
ashi; hey i was thnking kyun nah hum sab jab phirse mil gaye hai toh apna band phirse chalu kare......it wud gr8
uv; hey sufi idea......awesome...chalo kal milte meine ranveer ko kal phone kar deta hu......woh tia ko bhi inform kar dega...
ashi: yeahhh theek tahkur timbo inform kar lega
uv; ek baat bolu
ashi; bolo...
uv; tum abhi tak nahi badli...
ashi; meine toh aisi hi rehne wali hu...lekin tum thodese badal gaye ho...thoda aur amjdar ho gaye ho../..lol
uv: tumhara matlap kya hai
ashi: hey hey just chill ...mein sirf mazak kar rahi hoon.....

hey guys w8 abhi aage bhi uv ashi ko aur hai.....nxt part will b coming by 2morwo u all think kya uv ke ashi koi bhi ke dil mein abhi tak love feeling hai ke nahi...agar ha toh koi bhi uska ikrara karega ke nahi...see 2mrow

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part 7

here comes d nxt part...

as u all know it was raining....now rain stops....uv asks ashi..
uv: can now atleast drive d car...
ashi; lekin mujhe abhi bi doubt ho raha hai...
uv; dont wry kuch nahi hoga....
ashi; theek hai ...lekin agar kuch hua den bhaggu bhi tumhe mujhse nahi bacha payega
uv; okie okie...
dey swap their seats..
uv wasdrving d ar very swiftly.....
uv said in his mind...
uv: ooo ashi pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya .....jabse tumhe mila hu tabse kuch different feel kar raha hua....pata nahi kya abhi bhi mein tumse pyar karta hu...
on other side ashi said in her mind
ashi: bhaggu uyeh kya ho raha hai...uv se jabse phir mili hu tabse mujhe kuch aur mahesoos ho raha hai.....hey bhaagggu kya hai yeh..pyar??
den uv asks ashi
uv; kya tumne kuch kaha
ashi: nahi...kya tumne kuch kaha
uv: nahi...

scene change...

remember guys tia n ranveer were hugging each other...
v go back here...
dye den goes back 2 d car
tia: ranveer kya tum mera hamesha saaath nibhoge
ranveer; ha tia.....ab hum dono ko koi juda nahi kar sakhta...
tia: lekin ujhe abhi bhi dar lagta hai ke koi tumhe mujhse chin legajaise us shy ne pehle kiya tha...
ranveer; tia tum kyun dar rahi ho...woh sab past hai....hume aaj ka sochna \chahiye...mein hu na tumhare saath
finally tia''s house comes tia gets out of d car n even ranveer...dey huggg each otehr n tian leaves
tia luks back n wave ranveer
ranveer also waves her back n den leaves...

scene change...

now again 2 uv and ashi...

uv: ashi tumne achanak yeh newspaper ka kaise business chalu kya...aur writer bhi kaise bani...i wonder
ashi; hota hai uv aise changes sab mein aate hai....mere mein bhi aa gaya....
koi bhi helop chahiye s mamle mein den just call me
ashi's hosue comes
ashi gets out of d car
waves uv n uv aslo waves her back n he leaves

now wat will happen nxt day....kya uv aur ashi ikarrar karenge aopne pyar ka....kya tia aur ranveer iv aur ashi ko saath lkyenge ...kya ranver aur tia aise jhi hamesha saath rahenge ge lets see ....

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now part 8...
now ...

it is 22nd may...
ashi n uv ahd decided 2 get 2 gether for again starting their remix band....its morning

ranveer wakes up....he first calls tia...she picks up her phone...she is till sleepy at present also so she ...
tia: she yawns n says hello....kaun hai....
ranver; kya hume itna jaldi bhool gaye...
tia: ooo ranveer ...sry tia actually abhi bhi bhot sleepy feel kar rahi hai./..
ranveer: its okie tia....yoh aapka kya programme hai aajka...
tia: kuch khas nahi aage ek aur afshion show aanewala hai bas abhi uski taiyaari chalu karneki hai..
ranveer: oooo theek hai toh kuch nahi rahene dijiye..
tia; kya hua humne socha ke aaj sham ko hum dono kahi bahar jaaege..
tia; i m so sry ranveer ...theek hai ek kaam karte hai....aise bhi filhaal tumhari company bhi abhi chalu hui hai na...
ranveer; ha toh..
tia; toh tumna kaam karna aur mein apna ....agar mera jaldi khatam ho jayega den tia will call u or else saturday ko pakka jayege ..
ranveer; aare haan thank god aapki wajese hume yaad aaya ke hamari toh ek meeting hai aur wo hum bhool gaya...theeekk hai agar hamari meeting jaldi kahtam ho gayi to hum aapko call karte hai...
tia; theekk hai bye ranveer n tia loves u a lot..ranver; bye i love u 2...

scene change...

ashi calls uv...
it was 9: 30 n uv was still sleeping due 2 last nite...
till 1min phone rings but uv didnt pick up d phone...
den finally he does...
uv; heello kaun hai itni subah ...
ashi; hey syco mein ashi ..9:30 ho gaye aur tum abhi tak so rahe ho.....very bad...
uv; wo kya karu jab bhi der se sota hu tab der se hi uthta hu...koi uthane wala bhi nahi ahi re(uv used 2 stay indiff house due 2 his tensions wth hsi dad...but stilld er was a realtion b/w him n his dad)
ashi; theek hai theek hai ...i ms ure tumne ranveer ko bhi phone nahi kiya hoga..isliye abhi karna bhi amt mein abhi karne hi wali hu....meine sirf tumhe time n jagah kehene ke liye phone kiya hai...
uv; toh bolo...
ashi; pehle toh mujhe yeh poochna hai ke agar hum tumhare ghar rakhe toh chalega ,....
uv; kyun nahi .....aise bhi mein akela hi hoon...
ashi: theek hai toh final aaj sham ko 7 baje tumhare waha aur hum logo bahar se hi kuch dinner ke liye manga lenge...
uv; theek ashi bye...
ashi: bye aur sona mat uth jana tumhe office bhi jana hai(she is tellina s if she is his wife )...
uv: ha ha nahi soooga...
bth disconnects d phone....n uv again sleeps back...

2 b continue..

so abi tak kisine nahi ashi ya uv ne ek duje pyar ka ikrar kiya...lets see aage kya hoga n guys if it is bad den also tell me so dat i can improve in my next part
hope u all njoy dis part...

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part 9...

ashi knew dat uv wud again sleep down after dey disconnect d phone so she again calls uv...
tring tring tring tring
uv after quite soem time picks up the phone
in a very sleepy ,mood
uv: hello kaun hai
ashi: syco iska matlap tum phirse so gaye the ...jo meien asume kiya woh rite nikla.., meine kaha tha na dat donts leep again u ahev to go 2 ur office but tum bhi nah my god tum aise ho to tumahre beachre employees ki kya haalta hoti hogi...
wen ashi was giving lecture uv again satrted snoring..
ashi; kya tu sun rahe ho
uv againw akes up
uv: ha ha ha ..(speaks very fast)..
ashi: toh meine tumhe abhi kay kaha
uv; woh .a .....yeh ,..kee
ashi: iska matlap tum phirse.../....hey bhaagu yeh uv ka kuch nahi ho sakta theek hai ab pzl sona mat aur office ke liye nikal jana(my god so much concern tia ko bhi peeche chodne ka irada hai kya ashi)
uv: ha ha ha theek hai....
uv again tries 2 sleep but den he remembers dat ashi will call again beeter he wake up(typical husband aur wife ki taraf unki baatey)

scene change

ranveer gets ready n was abt to leave wen ashi's phone comes...
he picks up
ashi: hello ..
ranveer: ha kaun(actually ashi called frm soem oither number vic he didnt had)
ashi; hum aapke shub chintak...
ranveer: huh...kaun hai aap plz kahiye..kahi tia aap toh nhai
ashi; hey bhaggu...
ranveer: ooo ashi
ashi; ab yeh kya hai tia ko itne saal ke baad mile ho toh uska hi phone aat sakhta hai ..meine bhi kitno saalo ke baad mile hai kya mein phone nahi kar sakhti...kuch toh fishy hai..
ranveer: aisa kuch nahi hai..
ashi; nahi hai...tumhe bata hai thakur tum mujhse nahi chupa sakhte..
ranveer; thek hai theek hai hum apko milege tab batyege..
ashi; ha jo baat kahini thi woh toh rahe gayi..
ranveer: kya..
ashi; suno aaj sham ko 7 baje uv ke ghar pe milna hai...
ranveer: kyun..
ashi; woh tum aan a na tab kahenge.. aur ha timbo ko bhi kahe dena
ranveer; theek hai
ashi; so bye thakur aur haan tumahri baat bhi tumhe mujhe kaheni hai yaad rakhna
ranveer; theek hai ha yaad rakhenge bye ashi

2 b continue

wat do u thnk guys kya hoga aage kab uv aur ashi ek honge ....kya tia aur ranveer aise hi rahenge ke kya phir aur koi mussbat aanewali hai

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