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Posted: 18 years ago

#101

nice part.....
please make ashi better!
continue soon

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aashni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#102

thxn a a lto yeahh will do it sun 😊 😆 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

#103

yehah will do it sun and thxn a lott

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Posted: 18 years ago

#104

awesome yaar... 👏 ... par tension badh raha hai.....plzzzz jaldi se continue karna..... 😛

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aashni

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Posted: 18 years ago

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part 25

finally it was 3 am in d morning....
aashi ka temperature was still not reducing kabhi kabhi constant ho jata kabhi kabhi badta lekin kaam hone ka naam hi nahi leta tha.....
still outside itw as raining badly(thnk god sabke pass apne saman tha...warna bechara yuvi kaha se itna manage kar leta specially for tia and aashi )

yuvi: ranveer yeh aashi ka toh temperature kaam hohi nahi raha
ranveer: ha hume bhi yehi chinta ho rahi hai
tia: yuvi mujhe bhi yeh tension khae ja rahi hai aur upars e doctor bhi nahi aa skahte ooooo tia's god plzzz sab kuch jaldi theek karooo
ranveer: tia aur yuvi aap phikar nahi kariye aashi zaroor theek hogi....arey hamare paas ek desi ilaj bhi hai....
yuvi: woh kya dude
tia: ha woh kay hai
ranveer: jaldi se aashi ke haath aur paooo ghisne chahiye usse thodi garmi peda hoti hai shrarir mein...au aur bhukhar bhi kaam ho sakhta hai

dey tried dat.....for nearly half and hour

finally at 4 am in d moring dis technique worked out thdoa sa fever kaam hua....buts tilll....but now she was sleeping liek and angel....(yeahh i know d word doesnt suit her lekin really liek an angel she slept...)

yuvi: ranveer tia ab mujeh lagta hai tum dono jaaooo mein smbhal loonga....
ranever: nahi baana hum baithe hai.....
tia: ha yuvi ranever theek kahe raha hai
yuvi: nahi ranever nahi tia...i ms ure aur aise bhi aashi ki health ab sudharne lagi hai.....aur agar kuch bhi problem hogi mein tum dono ko bula lunga...i m promise
ranveer: aap sure ho banaa
yuvi: ha dude
ranever: theek hai hum jate hai chaliye tia

tia: chalo ranevr aur ha yuvi plzzz hume bulana agr kuch prolem huyi....

finally its morning

samay samapti ki ghoshna lkein plzz plzzz plzzz aapllog phirse yaha padharna aage ki kahani jaanene ke liye....

i dnt knwo how dis is part i thnk borin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#106

awesum part..ash..and yes it was not at all..boring..it was fab..pleej do ocnt soonn...

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soniya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#107

its fantastic...cont soon
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aashni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#108

yehah will do it soon and thnx a lott

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aashni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#109

part 26

finally subah ho gayi...

lekin stilll raining not so heavily lekin quite fairly it was raining...floods ver overflowing everyver(so geuss wat ek aur din sab saathmein...woww...isntd at gr8.....)

its 8 am......

so gudddddddddddddd morrrrrning mumbai and remxi forusoem....

chalo dekhte hai hamare foursoem kya kar rahe hai...hope aashi kay tabiyaat mein improvement huyi...bhaggu plzzz(waise yeh sab mere haath mein hi hai.......lolzzzzz)

okei first lest go to uv and aashi....hmmm aashi is ill so woh toh shyad so rahi hongi but wat abt our uv....

so v enter d room

hmm uv is checking aashi's temperature(na jaane tum sab kya sochne lage re......)
aashi ka tempearature thdoa sa down hua lekins till....now it is around v say nah ek bhukhar hau.....so its 1........i mean fever....

uv was really worried.........like a dotting husband...ooopssss.....(lekin sry ay fans abhi ke liye ruko.....)
he dediced dat he shud freshene up and get ready first and dne call up ranveer an dtia...

now apne love birds my jannu and tia ....lozlzz

okeie

waha......tia was alredy ready ....lekin my ranever was still slepping....my gosh woh so rah hai..yaha bhi typical hubby wife scene....woh tia utha rahi hai ranever ko lekin he is not waking up...bhaggu jald se utha lo warna mein jaati hoon usse uthane....lolzzz.....

okie tia was ready and waking arnver up.....ranever pretendingd at he si still asleep takes tia in his arms........aajkal bhot nasty ho raha hai ranveer.....

tia blushes out lekins unn realsies d situation...she takes her scarf aur baadmien scarf se ranevr ke kaan mein irratation karti hai...ooo lla la .......ranver at once wakes up and leaves tia....haila...yeh kya hua...kidding re...

tia: ranveer finally uthe tum.ab jaldi se raedy ho jaao...baadmien dkehne bhi jaana hai ke aashi theek hai ke nahi.......
ranveer; kya tia.......itna caha moment bigad diya aapne....
tia again blushes out...
tia: ranveer plzz ab jald se ready ho jao.....(very sweetly she says dis....)

ooopsss time up....samay samapti ki ghoshna ding dong ding dong....

lekin plz plzz plzzz kahi mat jayiga...hum phir lautenge ......aapke saath ..toh tab tak apne seats pakadkar rakhiye taki next part ka starting msis nah ho.....