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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

wat??no replies?????????????? 😭

maine reply kiya na...and wait 4 some time baaki sabb ke bhi comments aa jaayenge

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Posted: 19 years ago
Excellent part
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LOvede the way u described Tania's reaction when she saw Aashi - Yuvi together 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
well i finally got ur comment in my fic thanks a lot 4 that
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Posted: 19 years ago
see saya u got one more 😉 i.e of honey
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part Saya Di 👏

you've left me speechless 👏

continue soonnn

Divz
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

okay,herez d next part-

part-5

all d way yuvi was thinking abt ashi😳her style😳attitude😳d way she says-hey bhaggoo😳

nd everytime a smile was litting up his face😳😳

he whispered-wacko,tum toh abhi bhi bilkul bhi badli nahin ho,d same anvesha jise main janta tha 7 saal pehle😳wacko😳woh kabhi bhi nahin badlegi😳

again a smile lits up his face😳

he reached his house,nd rang d doorbell

still he was smiling 😳

but as soon as d door opened.his smile turned😕

tania said-yuvi,jaan,tum the kahan??😕

nd she hugged her tight😳

but yuvi dint hug her back

he just asked-huh...tani,wats d matter??

instead of tania yuvis mom came 4m behind nd hold his ears😆😉

ouch,mom,lagta hai,plz chodiye-he said😆

nahin,batao kahan the??-meeera was angry😡

woh mom,shopping mall main ranveer aur aur....

haan aur??😕

aur kya mom-he paused a lil bit-aur koi nahin,bas ranveer hi mila,nd i went wid him😆

he tried 2 smile

okay,fina,aab andar aajao,panditji kabse baithe hai

panditji??-yuvi was confused

tani hit him hard,ofcourse meera ki aankhe bachakar😆

panditji-meera said-yeh hai meri beta yuvraj😆

nd yuvi gave a smile 2wards him.ofcourse after meera indicated him 2 do so😆

k,aab ap bataiye shubh muhart kaunsa hai,iin dono ka shaadi ke liye?

when meera asked dis tani was blushing😳

she whispered 2 yuvi-wow,finally,we r getting married😳it feels so good na,when u love sum1 so much nd getting married wid him😳its eally amazing😳

nd she put her head on his shoulder😳nd kissed his hand lightly😳

but yuvi was still in his dream land😳

next morning

par mom,mera jana jaroori hai kya?-yuvi was like

haan beta,he is ur friend ofcourse,u must invite him,u can take tania also wid u-meera said

no no,woh uhan jaake kya karegi?its k

kyun yuvi??arre,kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi tumhare doston se milwao,i dun know ne of them😡-tania was angry

k,fine,chalo-yubi replied😡

nd both went 2ward ranveers house 2 invite him in d lunch as meera said

tania was sitting in d car

nd yuvi rang d doorbell

but no reply

he again rang d doorbell

still no reply

then he started knocking nd beating d door badly,as if he is gonna break it😆nd was shouting badly at d same time-arre,open d door😆

aarahin hoon-sum1 replied

nd d person was none other than ashi😉

she came in such a hurry😆

nd she opened d door

but she suddenly lost her balance

nd fall

but yuvi was 2 quick 2 catch her😳

he hold her by her waist😳

ashi was in his arms😳

he was holding her so tightly😳

she felt warmth nd love in his touch😳

she felt so protective in his arms😳

she knew now nothing cud do ne kinda harm 2 her😳

yuvi was seeing her😳

ashi was looking in yuvis eyes😳

trying 2 find if he still loves her😳

nd she saw true concern of a lover in his eyes😳

a red streak was cuming on to her eyes😳

he gently brushed it away😳

ashi shivered😳

nd blushed deeply😳

it was so unlike her 2 blush😳

but she knew only one person in d whole wide world could make her blush deeply😳

nd d person is just in front of her😳

they were still lost in each others eyes😳

nd d world arnd them seemed 2 hv come 2 a stand still😳

tania was really angry,she was waiting nd waiting,but yuvi is still disappeared😡she thought😡

she was really disappointed

nd went 2wards ranveers house

nd after reaching d gate of his house,wat she saw has took her breath nd gave her a heart-attack

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bohot jada acha tha 👏aur plzzzzzzzzzz yaar jaldi jaldi cont kiya kar itna jada wait mat karwaya kar😭😭😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESOME PART SAYA!!!!!!


please continue soon!...can't wait to find out what happens!
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx ppl,i will cont soon,but after getting sum more replies 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part as usual sayantika.
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago

👏 . 👏 👏


hey masi the part was just awsem

im soooooooooooooooooo soory for replying late actualy had fever dats why cud not come online these dsays

waise plzzzzzzzzzzzz taratari lekho na puhleasew im just soooooo eagerly waiting too see tania more jealouse

ritz 😳

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