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Yaar this was the out of world I mean very very very coooooooooool 👏 plzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooooon 😳 😊 😛
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first of all i m so soory 4 replying late 😭
but wat 2 do aaj kal beshi time pachi naa online hoar jonno 😭 😭 i m very sorry.

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i read da 2 parts 2gether nd they were just rocking 👏 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.

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thanx ppl,i will cont soon,but after getting sum more replies.
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Yaar tujhe aur kitane replies chahiye tujhe????????? Jaldi jaldi cont kiya kar warna mar khayegi😡 Samaji?????😡

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

thanx ppl,i will cont soon,but after getting sum more replies.

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Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

😆kahan se sikha di??😳

anything for u dear.....learn't it for u.......😃

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Originally posted by: vanu

anything for u dear.....learn't it for u.......😃

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,how sweet di😳😳*huggie*😳😳

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okay gies,herez d next part-

part-7

arre,ashi beta tum aur ranveer akela aaye ho wid harsh nd ria??ashi,tumhara pati neal kahan hai??-meera dev said lovingly as both ranveer nd ashi touched her feet,nd also harsh nd ria

woh aunty,neal ko kuch jaroori kaam par gaya tha,iisliye aanahin saka,he had aplogised 4 dat nd usne kahan hai he will cum another day-ashi replied wid a sweet smile

okay beta,aao andar aao

nd all 4 came inside

harsh(whispering 2 ria)-u know wat??accha hi hua tum yahan aagaye ho,after all tum kuch manners to sikh payogi😆

ria(she is also whispering)-u know wat psycho??mujhe manners ke baare main sikhane ki koi jarrorat nhain hai.woh to tumhe sikhna chahiye.U ROTTON TOMATO😆

harsh(in an angry tone)-woh just shut up u idiot..😡

ria(also in an agry tone)-u shut up,u... u brainless creature.

now they r almost screaming nd ashi turned back nd said in a really angry tone-just shut up both of u.remember yeh tumhara ghar nahin hai,jo bhi karna hai,fight yeah kuch bhi meherbani karkaeghar pe jaake karna.now just shut up both of u nd come wid me😡

after ashi turned saying dis ria at once showed neal her tongue,neal also gave her a look-i am not afraid of u,will see u later😉

meera took dem 2 d room where yuvi nd tania wers sitting.

tani said hi 2 them

but yuvi was speechless after seeing ashi.

coz he has never seen her in a saree😳

she was looking beautiful😳

she was wearing a red saree😳

so simple but so stunning😳

her hairs were tightly tied in a ponnytail😳

nd sum of her red streaks were on her face😳

which made her look more innocent nd sweet😳

she was only wearing a red coloured earring😳

nd no other jeweleries😳

no heavy make up😳

but she was looking preety gorgeous😳

yuvi did not know 4 how many minutes he kept looking at her😳

yuvi-tani called her-kya hua tume??why r u staring like a statue??say hi.

haan??woh haan,yeah,hi ranveer bro,hi ashi-nd he smiled 2 d kids-hi.

after d lanch all were busy in chatting.but yuvi was staring at ashi.tania saw dis,but ashi didnot notice.tania was extremely jealous.she said-uh gies,mujhe yuvi se abhi kuch bahut imp. personal batten karni hai.i hope u gies wud not mind,agar humlog thodi der ke liye bahar jaye................................

no,no not at all,u gies go.-both ranny nd ashi said wid a smile.

as soon as tania nd yuvi left,meera came inside-arre.yeh tania kahan hai??

woh yuvi ke sath kuch baaten karni gayye hai.kyun??kya hua aunty??ne msg??

no beta,tania ke liye ek courier tha,to.........

theek hai aunty,main dekhti hoon.

thank u beta.

no,woh kaun hoti hai tumhare aur mere beech main aanewali??i cant tolerate her.she is,she is a b****😡-tania was boiling coz of anger.

tania-yuvi almost screamed-just shut up,k??tum ashi ke baare main aapni bakwas bandh karo😡

accha??tumhe iitni problem kyun??woh kaun lagti hai tumhari??

woh jo bhi lagti hai meri,tumhe usse kya??

acha??tum mere mangetar ho yeah uske??

tania,just listen....................

no,just shut up mr. yuvraj dev.i dun wanna listen nething,just just leave me alone.

nd tania left 4m there.

nd yuvi turned back nd saw ashi was standing there.shocked,tears almost came in her eyes.

ashi,tum kab aaye????woh tum tania ka baat dil pe maat lagana,woh toh bas aisehi.................

but ashi just ran awat 4m there.

yuvi was shocked.

he also ran behind her.

nd he found her atlast sitting on a bench of d garden nd sobbing nd crying bitterly.

he placed a hand on her shoulder-ashi

just get lost psycho-she replied

dont do dis wid yourself ashi-he pleaded wid her as he helplessly watched her grappling wid her emotions.

do what??-she was till sobbing-tania thinks ki i am cuming between both of u??

no ashi,aisi nahin hai-he reached out 2 take her hand,but she drew it away at once.

kya hua??-yuvi was surprised.

kuch nahin,its better dat we stay apart yuvi,warna tumhare mangetar ko lagega,i am stealing u 4m her.

really??do u yhink she will think dis??-he was so close 2 her dat she can feel his warm breathe on her.

yuvi,woh main....................

how cud she xplain 2 him dat she cud not trust her self when he is so near 2 her.the past leaving its shadow on her,even as she watched him moving on into a future widout her😭

now he leaned 4 ward nd cupped her face in his hand😳

she knew dat she shud try 2 move away,but she cud not.😳

her breath was caught in her throat nd all she cud do was look back 2 those big brown eyes,which she has loved so deeply nd dearly.😳

her world had shrunk 2 his touch,his gaze nd his even breathing-all which penetrated her senses in a way,nothing else ever cud.😳

yu..yuvi,i mean tania.she is ur mangetar.............she wont like all dis................................

WHAT DO U LIKE??-he moved even closer 2 her now nd his fingers traced her cheeckbones down 2 her lips...........she caught his hand,but her defences broke down...................she knew she was helpless against his power over her..............he kissed her hand nd she allowed him 2 take her in his arms.....................😳😳

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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part 7 posted gies,plz comment,i know dis part was kinda boring 😕 so,plz 4give me 4 dat 😕
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Very very coolllllllllllllllll part Saya👏 par tu jaldi jaldi cont kiya kar plzzzzzzzzz teri fic to amezing hai😉 😃

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

okay gies,herez d next part-

part-7

arre,ashi beta tum aur ranveer akela aaye ho wid harsh nd ria??ashi,tumhara pati neal kahan hai??-meera dev said lovingly as both ranveer nd ashi touched her feet,nd also harsh nd ria

woh aunty,neal ko kuch jaroori kaam par gaya tha,iisliye aanahin saka,he had aplogised 4 dat nd usne kahan hai he will cum another day-ashi replied wid a sweet smile

okay beta,aao andar aao

nd all 4 came inside

harsh(whispering 2 ria)-u know wat??accha hi hua tum yahan aagaye ho,after all tum kuch manners to sikh payogi😆

ria(she is also whispering)-u know wat psycho??mujhe manners ke baare main sikhane ki koi jarrorat nhain hai.woh to tumhe sikhna chahiye.U ROTTON TOMATO😆

harsh(in an angry tone)-woh just shut up u idiot..😡

ria(also in an agry tone)-u shut up,u... u brainless creature.

now they r almost screaming nd ashi turned back nd said in a really angry tone-just shut up both of u.remember yeh tumhara ghar nahin hai,jo bhi karna hai,fight yeah kuch bhi meherbani karkaeghar pe jaake karna.now just shut up both of u nd come wid me😡

after ashi turned saying dis ria at once showed neal her tongue,neal also gave her a look-i am not afraid of u,will see u later😉

meera took dem 2 d room where yuvi nd tania wers sitting.

tani said hi 2 them

but yuvi was speechless after seeing ashi.

coz he has never seen her in a saree😳

she was looking beautiful😳

she was wearing a red saree😳

so simple but so stunning😳

her hairs were tightly tied in a ponnytail😳

nd sum of her red streaks were on her face😳

which made her look more innocent nd sweet😳

she was only wearing a red coloured earring😳

nd no other jeweleries😳

no heavy make up😳

but she was looking preety gorgeous😳

yuvi did not know 4 how many minutes he kept looking at her😳

yuvi-tani called her-kya hua tume??why r u staring like a statue??say hi.

haan??woh haan,yeah,hi ranveer bro,hi ashi-nd he smiled 2 d kids-hi.

after d lanch all were busy in chatting.but yuvi was staring at ashi.tania saw dis,but ashi didnot notice.tania was extremely jealous.she said-uh gies,mujhe yuvi se abhi kuch bahut imp. personal batten karni hai.i hope u gies wud not mind,agar humlog thodi der ke liye bahar jaye................................

no,no not at all,u gies go.-both ranny nd ashi said wid a smile.

as soon as tania nd yuvi left,meera came inside-arre.yeh tania kahan hai??

woh yuvi ke sath kuch baaten karni gayye hai.kyun??kya hua aunty??ne msg??

no beta,tania ke liye ek courier tha,to.........

theek hai aunty,main dekhti hoon.

thank u beta.

no,woh kaun hoti hai tumhare aur mere beech main aanewali??i cant tolerate her.she is,she is a b****😡-tania was boiling coz of anger.

tania-yuvi almost screamed-just shut up,k??tum ashi ke baare main aapni bakwas bandh karo😡

accha??tumhe iitni problem kyun??woh kaun lagti hai tumhari??

woh jo bhi lagti hai meri,tumhe usse kya??

acha??tum mere mangetar ho yeah uske??

tania,just listen....................

no,just shut up mr. yuvraj dev.i dun wanna listen nething,just just leave me alone.

nd tania left 4m there.

nd yuvi turned back nd saw ashi was standing there.shocked,tears almost came in her eyes.

ashi,tum kab aaye????woh tum tania ka baat dil pe maat lagana,woh toh bas aisehi.................

but ashi just ran awat 4m there.

yuvi was shocked.

he also ran behind her.

nd he found her atlast sitting on a bench of d garden nd sobbing nd crying bitterly.

he placed a hand on her shoulder-ashi

just get lost psycho-she replied

dont do dis wid yourself ashi-he pleaded wid her as he helplessly watched her grappling wid her emotions.

do what??-she was till sobbing-tania thinks ki i am cuming between both of u??

no ashi,aisi nahin hai-he reached out 2 take her hand,but she drew it away at once.

kya hua??-yuvi was surprised.

kuch nahin,its better dat we stay apart yuvi,warna tumhare mangetar ko lagega,i am stealing u 4m her.

really??do u yhink she will think dis??-he was so close 2 her dat she can feel his warm breathe on her.

yuvi,woh main....................

how cud she xplain 2 him dat she cud not trust her self when he is so near 2 her.the past leaving its shadow on her,even as she watched him moving on into a future widout her😭

now he leaned 4 ward nd cupped her face in his hand😳

she knew dat she shud try 2 move away,but she cud not.😳

her breath was caught in her throat nd all she cud do was look back 2 those big brown eyes,which she has loved so deeply nd dearly.😳

her world had shrunk 2 his touch,his gaze nd his even breathing-all which penetrated her senses in a way,nothing else ever cud.😳

yu..yuvi,i mean tania.she is ur mangetar.............she wont like all dis................................

WHAT DO U LIKE??-he moved even closer 2 her now nd his fingers traced her cheeckbones down 2 her lips...........she caught his hand,but her defences broke down...................she knew she was helpless against his power over her..............he kissed her hand nd she allowed him 2 take her in his arms.....................😳😳

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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