unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 10

Originally posted by: iloveashi

ok,

divyaji please reply kardije please 😛

i am desperate to read the next part 😭

Ya me too😊 post jaldi plzzzzzz😭

Hey Saya Di,


im soo cholly, i was having high fever since the past 2 days 😭 .. due to which i couldnt cum online 😭

n ya, i hv commented on the last part u wrote 😳

now plzzzzzzzzzz continue soonnn 😳 😳

Divz 😳 😳

Originally posted by: divya_92

Hey Saya Di,


im soo cholly, i was having high fever since the past 2 days 😭 .. due to which i couldnt cum online 😭

n ya, i hv commented on the last part u wrote 😳

now plzzzzzzzzzz continue soonnn 😳 😳

Divz 😳 😳

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😭😭how r u now sweetie??😕plz take good care of ur self😳😃k,i will write soon😳😳

much better now 😳 😃

n ya, plz continue sooonnn 😳

okay,herez d next part-

part-5

all d way yuvi was thinking abt ashi😳her style😳attitude😳d way she says-hey bhaggoo😳

nd everytime a smile was litting up his face😳😳

he whispered-wacko,tum toh abhi bhi bilkul bhi badli nahin ho,d same anvesha jise main janta tha 7 saal pehle😳wacko😳woh kabhi bhi nahin badlegi😳

again a smile lits up his face😳

he reached his house,nd rang d doorbell

still he was smiling 😳

but as soon as d door opened.his smile turned😕

tania said-yuvi,jaan,tum the kahan??😕

nd she hugged her tight😳

but yuvi dint hug her back

he just asked-huh...tani,wats d matter??

instead of tania yuvis mom came 4m behind nd hold his ears😆😉

ouch,mom,lagta hai,plz chodiye-he said😆

nahin,batao kahan the??-meeera was angry😡

woh mom,shopping mall main ranveer aur aur....

haan aur??😕

aur kya mom-he paused a lil bit-aur koi nahin,bas ranveer hi mila,nd i went wid him😆

he tried 2 smile

okay,fina,aab andar aajao,panditji kabse baithe hai

panditji??-yuvi was confused

tani hit him hard,ofcourse meera ki aankhe bachakar😆

panditji-meera said-yeh hai meri beta yuvraj😆

nd yuvi gave a smile 2wards him.ofcourse after meera indicated him 2 do so😆

k,aab ap bataiye shubh muhart kaunsa hai,iin dono ka shaadi ke liye?

when meera asked dis tani was blushing😳

she whispered 2 yuvi-wow,finally,we r getting married😳it feels so good na,when u love sum1 so much nd getting married wid him😳its eally amazing😳

nd she put her head on his shoulder😳nd kissed his hand lightly😳

but yuvi was still in his dream land😳

next morning

par mom,mera jana jaroori hai kya?-yuvi was like

haan beta,he is ur friend ofcourse,u must invite him,u can take tania also wid u-meera said

no no,woh uhan jaake kya karegi?its k

kyun yuvi??arre,kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi tumhare doston se milwao,i dun know ne of them😡-tania was angry

k,fine,chalo-yubi replied😡

nd both went 2ward ranveers house 2 invite him in d lunch as meera said

tania was sitting in d car

nd yuvi rang d doorbell

but no reply

he again rang d doorbell

still no reply

then he started knocking nd beating d door badly,as if he is gonna break it😆nd was shouting badly at d same time-arre,open d door😆

aarahin hoon-sum1 replied

nd d person was none other than ashi😉

she came in such a hurry😆

nd she opened d door

but she suddenly lost her balance

nd fall

but yuvi was 2 quick 2 catch her😳

he hold her by her waist😳

ashi was in his arms😳

he was holding her so tightly😳

she felt warmth nd love in his touch😳

she felt so protective in his arms😳

she knew now nothing cud do ne kinda harm 2 her😳

yuvi was seeing her😳

ashi was looking in yuvis eyes😳

trying 2 find if he still loves her😳

nd she saw true concern of a lover in his eyes😳

a red streak was cuming on to her eyes😳

he gently brushed it away😳

ashi shivered😳

nd blushed deeply😳

it was so unlike her 2 blush😳

but she knew only one person in d whole wide world could make her blush deeply😳

nd d person is just in front of her😳

they were still lost in each others eyes😳

nd d world arnd them seemed 2 hv come 2 a stand still😳

tania was really angry,she was waiting nd waiting,but yuvi is still disappeared😡she thought😡

she was really disappointed

nd went 2wards ranveers house

nd after reaching d gate of his house,wat she saw has took her breath nd gave her a heart-attack

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay i posted a long part,r u happy now gujju?? 😉 😉

part 5 posted.plz comment 😕 sorry gies,if it was boring 😕

awesome part saya 👏 and it wasnt boring

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well and also the upcoming late one because i think i wont be able to come online for a week and u know why so sorry 4 that, but hey my fic too is waiting 4 ur comments