Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 25

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PART 16




On realizing that they were lost Tia stood there totally shocked .

"Oh, Tia's God!" she whispered brokenly, the tears flowing down her face 😭 . "Yeh Tia ke saath kyun ho raha hai? 😭 .

Ranveer didn't know what to say to make her feel better because he himself didn't know what will happen next 😕 .




Ranveer --- (consoling her ) Tia aap phikar mat kijiye hum raasta dhoond lenge . Hamare rehte aapko kuch nahi hoga 😳

Tia --- (wiping off her tears 😭 ) You camel …..you dehati…..tum khud ka khayal toh nahi rakh sake Tia ka khayal kya rakhoge ???

Ranveer --- (now a bit annoyed) Ek toh humne aapko dhoond nikala aur ulta aap humein hi suna rahi hain …………

Tia --- Acchha toh kaunsa bada kaam kiya ….pehle toh Tia ko sirf wild animals se bachna tha ab toh tumse bhi bachke rehna padega …

Ranveer --- (going close to her and looking straight into her eyes ) Acchha Tia ….. 😉

Tia --- Ranveer tum kya kar rahe ho ??? 😕

Ranveer --- (naughtily) Kyun aap toh humse yehi expect kar rahi thi na ??? Aapko toh humpar bilkul bharosa nahi hain na ???……. 😉

Tia ---(stammering)You....camel ....dehati apne hands Tia se door hi rakhna 😡 .



With that she walked off, nose in air. Ranveer followed her smiling 😉 .

They were wandering around hoping that they would find someone on the way who could help them .

After walking some distance , the scorching heat had its toll on Tia . Besides she was carrying a very heavy bag which made her conditon worse .

Ranveer --- (seeing Tia in that plight ) Tia aap apna bag humein dijiye hum carry kar lenge 😳

Tia --- Tia ko tum jaise camel ki help ki koi zarrorat nahi 😡

Ranveer --- Acchha !!! Tab toh aapko raasta dhoondne mein bhi hamari madad ki zaroorat nahi hogi na …….Right ??? 😉




Saying this he started moving in reverse direction with a cunning smile on his face .




Tia --- You camel ....tumhe kya lagta hain Tia tumhare help ke bagair kuch nahi kar sakti..... then Mr Dehati you are wrong and Tia will prove you wrong 😡 .




Saying this she started moving ahead . But the howl of wolves from somewhere made her quickly change her mind and she rushed towards Ranveer ( actually it was Ranveer who made that sound )




Ranveer --- (pretending) Kya hua Tia .....aapko toh hamari help ki zarrorat nahi thi na ???? 😉

Tia --- ( Rassi jal gayi par bal nahi gaya kinda attitude ) Wo..wo..Tia ne bohot socha aur decide kiya ki aise situation mein humein saath milkar solution dhoondna chahiye 😆

Ranveer --- Soch lijiye Tia …aap humpar bharosa nahi karti hain aur aapko humse bachkar bhi toh rehna padega na ….. 😉

Tia --- Oh ....ho camel.....Tia bina think kiye kuch nahi karti . Tia ne apna decision le liya hain . Iske alawa Tia ke paas koi doosra option bhi toh nahi hain 😕 .


Ranveer smiled at her not giving up attitude .

After wandering for a while Tia was feeling very thirsty and she had already emptied her water- bottle . Her ego didn't allow her to tell Ranveer about it but Ranveer who was observing her from one corner of his eye sensed it 😳 .



Ranveer --- Tia aapko pyaas lag rahi hain na ???

Tia --- Haan ........par tumhe kaise pata chala…....???

Ranveer --- Wo sab rehne dijiye .....….(then sensing something) Tia aap chinta mat kijiye pani ka intezaam ho jayega .

Tia --- Kaise ????? tumhara bhi toh bottle empty ho chukka hain

Ranveer --- Tia agar aap dhyan se sunengi toh aapko paani behni ki awaaz sunayi degi . Yaane ki hamare aas – paas ek stream ya waterfall hain . Chaliye chalkar dekhte hain .


When they reached that place , what they saw filled them with enthusiasm and delight 😃 .

They couldn't believe their eyes and for a moment they forgot about their thrist .

Wherever their eyes went they saw lush green vegetation , beautiful flowers filling the environment with colour and fragnance , butterflies lingering over the flowers , birds singing their heart out and a waterfall with water flowing into the nearby stream .

It was amazing to see the variety of color within a waterfall. The foaming white contrasts with the many shades of gray and black. Everything was so mesmerizing .


The sound of the water gently spilling over the edge soothed their soul and they ran to the edge of the pool to quench their thirst . After that Tia pulled off her hiking boots and let her feet slowly sink into the cool blue water . They she bent to see her reflection in water and was shocked .


Tia --- Oh Tia 's God yeh kya ho gaya ??? Tia ka hair kitna dull ho gaya hain aur Tia ke face pe kitni dhool – mitti lag gayi hain 😆 .

Ranveer --- Come on Tia …………hum kho gaye hain aur aapko apni look ki padi hain 😆 .


Ignoring his comments , Tia washed her face . Even without make – up she was looking so beautiful , the water droplets on her face added to her beauty . . Ranveer was enchanted and kept staring at her . He saw her open her bag and take out her make –up kit , wash her face this time with face –wash , wipe off the water from her face with a towel , apply make –up , comb her hair and tie it into a pony . On seeing Ranveer stare at her she became conscious -------





Tia --- You dehati …stop staring at Tia . Kya tumne pehle koi ladki nahi dekhi

Ranveer --- (in a naughty mood) Dekhi hain par aap jaisi nahi ( he said this leaning towards her ) 😉 😳

Tia --- Dekho ..Tia ke saath flirt karna band karo warna … 😡

Ranveer --- (now coming even more closer ) Warna kya ??? 😉


Tia moved back at once and got hold of her water – bottle which she had filled with water and emptied it on Ranveer 's head .

" Ab pata chala Tia kya kar sakti hain " saying this Tia ran away from there .


Ranveer --- Tia …yeh aapne acchha nahi kiya ( saying this he ran after her ) .




But before Ranveer could catch hold of Tia his head hit a bough and he groaned in pain .


Tia looked back and seeing Ranveer hurt rushed to help him .





Tia --- Ranveer daro mat, Tia hain na (hearing that Ranveer looked at Tia in astonishment and for that moment he didn't feel the pain 😳 ) She bought some water in her waterbottle , washed his wound , then opened her bag and took first aid box, applied detol and while she was rolling bandage across his head ------------




Ranveer --- Lagta hain Tia aap puri tayaari ke saath aayi hain 😉

Tia--- Tia travel karte waqt hameha prepared rehti hain --- clothes ,food , first –aid box , make –up kit are part of Tia's travel kit . Tum sabne Tia ko itna luggage carry karne ke liye chidaya tha na …dekho ab kaise kaam aa raha hain…………(she was still bandaging him) 😉 .

Ranveer --- Ji …….Tia the Princess ……...humein maaf kar dijiye … 😉

Tia --- Thik hain……………ab yeh sab rehne do ( by now she had completed bandaging) .

Ranveer --- Tia aap toh humein hate karti hain na ………….phir aap hamara itna care kyun kar rahi hain …???

Tia --- Tia ne kabhi tumhe hate nahi kiya . Tia tumhari bohot care bhi karti hain . Par tum Tia se friendship se zyada kuch expect kar rahe the jo Tia puri nahi kar sakti thi isliye Tia ko tumhe ignore karna pada ……..

Ranveer --- Agar humein aapse pyaar ho gaya toh isme hamari kya galti ….???

Tia --- Ranveer ab tum iss tarah ki batein karke Tia ko upset kar rahe ho ………

Ranveer --- Par Tia ( but before he could complete Tia clumped her hand on his mouth )

Tia --- (smiling) Ab tum kuch nahi kahoge sirf rest karoge …samjhe . Tumhe iss baar Tia ki baat sunni hi padegi

Ranveer --- Itne dino se hum aap ki baatein chup – chaap sunn hi toh rahe the . Aapne gusse mein humein kya – kya nahi kaha . Humne chup – chaap sunne ke siwa kuch bhi toh nahi kiya …………………..




Tia felt very guilty after hearing that and very emotional also .When she raised her head up to look at him she found that his eyes were searching her face for a reaction with lot of love , care and concern .. Seeing that tears gathered in her eyes. She lowered her eyes from the intensity of the melting chocolate ones, which were silently probing her to go near him 😳 .




And seeing Tia so close to him , her beautiful eyes fixed on him ------ Ranveer gave in to the temptation of kissing her . He moved closer and closer and was about to lock his lips with her 😳. But his desire remained unfulfilled since Tia turned back at the sound of footsteps which indicated that someone was approaching them 😕.

part 16 posted

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